Artist Army {old thread}

[Marmoset]

here have this WIP. tom hiddleston's stupid face is stupid

MORE MORE MORE <3

[Alexander White]

finished

[Butter Dragon]

finished

WOW! Thats amazing!

I was wondering what to change add or edit about this art pice:

[Yuki.]

Bella, I have to be quick about this because I have school.

Well, I assume the light source is hidden behind the dog. Even if there is no light behind the dog, you should add a dark color. Maybe a few shades of dark brown? The dogs body shape shouldnt be so scribbly or round. Try studying some anatomy and sketch out the whole dog before outlining it ^^ the ads aren't always down on dogs, but when they are they should be thinner . Right now this picture tells me that the ears are like screws on it's head. And also, I see no neck. This is a mistake many make. Many people either make the neck took long or short. Again, study, study study <3 Lol, yes, it's like school a little. Just take some time out of your days each week to look up 'dog anatomy' and draw off their structure. I have never actually drawn a dog seriously in my life, but that's where I'm starting. Anatomy.

Good luck <3
~ Snow

[Butter Dragon]

Bella, I have to be quick about this because I have school.

Well, I assume the light source is hidden behind the dog. Even if there is no light behind the dog, you should add a dark color. Maybe a few shades of dark brown? The dogs body shape shouldnt be so scribbly or round. Try studying some anatomy and sketch out the whole dog before outlining it ^^ the ads aren't always down on dogs, but when they are they should be thinner . Right now this picture tells me that the ears are like screws on it's head. And also, I see no neck. This is a mistake many make. Many people either make the neck took long or short. Again, study, study study <3 Lol, yes, it's like school a little. Just take some time out of your days each week to look up 'dog anatomy' and draw off their structure. I have never actually drawn a dog seriously in my life, but that's where I'm starting. Anatomy.

Good luck <3
~ Snow

Thanks!

[KogasBabyGirl]

Bumping cause i didnt get a reply
Well I wont be on for alil while unless its off and on or to post something But May i get a red line for Thisor crit here (yes my screen ended before i could get to the tail) . This is my fursona she supposed to be Crying with a disappointed i knew it face. I couldnt get her hair right (Needs to look like this.) This was a Quick sketch for reasons im not telling and i would like to finish it. Thank You ahead of time.

[brian emo]

Bumping cause i didnt get a reply
Well I wont be on for alil while unless its off and on or to post something But May i get a red line for Thisor crit here (yes my screen ended before i could get to the tail) . This is my fursona she supposed to be Crying with a disappointed i knew it face. I couldnt get her hair right (Needs to look like this.) This was a Quick sketch for reasons im not telling and i would like to finish it. Thank You ahead of time.

I think you forgot to link one

[KogasBabyGirl]

Bumping cause i didnt get a reply
Well I wont be on for alil while unless its off and on or to post something But May i get a red line for Thisor crit here (yes my screen ended before i could get to the tail) . This is my fursona she supposed to be Crying with a disappointed i knew it face. I couldnt get her hair right (Needs to look like this.) This was a Quick sketch for reasons im not telling and i would like to finish it. Thank You ahead of time.

I think you forgot to link one

No its in there

[plum]

Bumping cause i didnt get a reply
Well I wont be on for alil while unless its off and on or to post something But May i get a red line for Thisor crit here (yes my screen ended before i could get to the tail) . This is my fursona she supposed to be Crying with a disappointed i knew it face. I couldnt get her hair right (Needs to look like this.) This was a Quick sketch for reasons im not telling and i would like to finish it. Thank You ahead of time.

Can't redline, but I know enough to give some critique.
First thing I see, the upper part of the jaws/mouth needs to be longer and should 'overlap' the lower jaw more. You can see what I mean in this picture.
Hair-wise, the forelock part looks like it should be longer and should bend either forwards, towards the skull, or backwards, away. Looking at the ref, it shouldn't end right at the start of the neck, and instead, the hair extends and becomes part of the neck fur.
Judging by the angle your wolf is at, the eyes need to be more forward, at the front of the skull, and higher up. I line up the bottom of the eye with the top of the nose.

[brian emo]

Bumping cause i didnt get a reply
Well I wont be on for alil while unless its off and on or to post something But May i get a red line for Thisor crit here (yes my screen ended before i could get to the tail) . This is my fursona she supposed to be Crying with a disappointed i knew it face. I couldnt get her hair right (Needs to look like this.) This was a Quick sketch for reasons im not telling and i would like to finish it. Thank You ahead of time.

Can't redline, but I know enough to give some critique.
First thing I see, the upper part of the jaws/mouth needs to be longer and should 'overlap' the lower jaw more. You can see what I mean in this picture.
Hair-wise, the forelock part looks like it should be longer and should bend either forwards, towards the skull, or backwards, away. Looking at the ref, it shouldn't end right at the start of the neck, and instead, the hair extends and becomes part of the neck fur.
Judging by the angle your wolf is at, the eyes need to be more forward, at the front of the skull, and higher up. I line up the bottom of the eye with the top of the nose.

the body is also too thin, I think^^