@detective ahh thank you so much!! yeah i do commissions but only for dA points as of right now :V also id offer to rp w lala but im an inexperienced rper and have my hands full already 6~~~9;
@kaitlynizer one thing to keep in mind when writing forms is that--at least for me--judges generally dont really want to/dont have the time to read huge walls of text. sometimes quantity doesnt always communicate quality. if i were you id write all of the main points you want to make then go back and either remove extraneous, unneeded, and redundant info completely or move it to a miscellaneous section of your form (ex: if you have some quirks listed in a section outlining personality, move the quirks to their own section. this also has the perk of making your form appear longer in the sense that you put an extra section in it. basically ppl are more receptive to many shorter sections instead of one huge section that couldve been split). then proofread your writing and change wording, etc, to be as impacting as possible. you can say a lot with less. show that you put in effort, but don't go overboard?? ahh does this make any sense?? im sorry if i explained this badly 8v
also i agree with what detective said, little details about a character make them seem a lot more relatable and realistic so dont forego them completely! it also shows the judge that youve put a lot of thought into the character