{Ahzenai Mingle Spot v.2}

[Shiko Hayashi]

Urg I still need to apply for that

You should. It's a lot of fun. Well.. I thought it was. Others might disagree.
Would you like to read mine? I'd love some critique on my writing. It always helps in future writings, both for contests and my own entertainment.

[Temperance.]

Urg I still need to apply for that

You should. It's a lot of fun. Well.. I thought it was. Others might disagree.
Would you like to read mine? I'd love some critique on my writing. It always helps in future writings, both for contests and my own entertainment.

hahahaha loads of fun, I love writing intros XD Care to critique mine and I'll critique yours? I'd like some input on mine as well XD

[Azure23]

[I would like to get on this criticing action. I really need it. :3]

[Shiko Hayashi]

I don't critiquing at all. Just post a quick link to where your forms are, I'll tab them, and then you need to remove your post. Don't want to spam up this thread. I'll read them and email my critique to you.

[Azure23]

[I was just gonna PM mine to whoever wanted to read it.]

[Starmz ♥]

I'd love to be critiqued as well o w o

there you go

I wouldn't mind critiquing anyone c:

[Temperance.]

LOL, I'm going to go read through whoever asked for critique's intros....though as far as giving critique goes I'm hardly the best at it....I'm either really harsh, or really relaxed about it so....yeah, I dunno XD

And here is mine!

[Horneddragon]

I may do the contest just for fun, just so y'all can see how i envision these 2. But i have some exams tomorrow and Thursday so wish me luck <3

I can critique if yah like :B I may. If i find the time xD

[jern.]

Urg the contest entries are taughting me with their epicness ;A; -tried to shield eyes-

[Shiko Hayashi]

Here's mine.

Link