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by Solanum » Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:00 am
Vintage. wrote:Solanum wrote:If anyone would be willing to do me some critique, I'd greatly appreciate it XD
Can pay if necessary.
Link to my form for Mako #9
here.
I quote love the simplicity of him, but also with that complex side(Yeah, I'm a bit confusing). His name and the translation are perfect, especially with the quirks of her personality reflecting on his name. Great job, although, may I suggest, some formatting? Generally, artists rave over perfect formatting.
This should have been PM'd XD
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Zeee » Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:05 am
i would like a new character very much
but i can't draw and i'm too lazyoh well xD <3
Daniel wrote:Just got this Lava Lamp Dog from Raven Feather/Ravenfeather41 on DA

To add to my LLD collection! (I must stop with that, I'm obsessed!)
oh jeez <333
i love the cigarette burns
such a nice touch
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