The Wild Mountain Equid Fanclub V.3 - Welcome!

[midnight133]

So many amazing entries.
What do you guys think of my entries?
Entry One
The other links are below in the first post and my gallery

[Zax]

Um.. Wow. I could try to offer something constructive, but I just really like those designs. XD

[midnight133]

Thank you

[Zax]

Try and watch your quip length particularly on the first entry. There are some that are too short, and the quip shouldn't be super thin either. Yay, there's something constructive!

[midnight133]

Awesome, thank you

[WalkerNom]

@ ~Trompy -
I really like that stally too! ^^ I especially adore the white quipping you did on the legs...it's to die for!
I'm not saying to change it or anything, but I only thing I didn't like was how red his base was.
/k I'll shut up now with my criticism

[elliej1995]

OK So I definitely missed a lot while I was camp. Whats going on now other than the contest?

[KAHarder]

OK So I definitely missed a lot while I was camp. Whats going on now other than the contest?

Dunno, how long have you been gone?

So I posted this entry the other day: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1892542 but horsy says it can't swirl. I didn't even know it was overly swirly. Should I scratch this one and make another or should I just tweak some stuff? And if I should salvage, what needs to be fixed? o.o

[Ralonica]

So I posted this entry the other day: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1892542 but horsy says it can't swirl. I didn't even know it was overly swirly. Should I scratch this one and make another or should I just tweak some stuff? And if I should salvage, what needs to be fixed? o.o

I think that you can easily fix the problem without starting over. The problem you are having is that on the body of the equid, some of the quip starts curving around into circles and semi-circles, making sharp curves. If you changed the quipping to go straight along the body, rather than curving around back on itself, you should be right. It's not the zig-zagging quip that is the problem, it's the quipping that goes in sharp curves. :B

[KAHarder]

So I posted this entry the other day: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1892542 but horsy says it can't swirl. I didn't even know it was overly swirly. Should I scratch this one and make another or should I just tweak some stuff? And if I should salvage, what needs to be fixed? o.o

I think that you can easily fix the problem without starting over. The problem you are having is that on the body of the equid, some of the quip starts curving around into circles and semi-circles, making sharp curves. If you changed the quipping to go straight along the body, rather than curving around back on itself, you should be right. It's not the zig-zagging quip that is the problem, it's the quipping that goes in sharp curves. :B

Ahh, so around the shoulder area, that kind of curve? That should be easy to make softer and less jagged XD