Writers, UNITE!

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby TheShinyAmpharos12.5 » Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:00 pm

Hi guys! Sorry I haven't posted anything, I've just been REALLY busy over the holidays. But I just had a load of candy and am probably going to be up till 2 AM, so I figured, why not?

Equation for awesome mood: 50 pieces of candy + Taylor Swift = AwEsOmE!! :mrgreen:

So here's my writing! I don't really think it needs a summary. The prologue pretty much covers it.
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One time, long ago, people existed in harmony together, none were discriminated for their abilities. Nature was respected, not torn down like a werewolf tears his meat. A time, where the government wasn't an overpowering tyrant separating children from their parents. But that time has long since passed. Now, a new reign has begun.

Now, a new government, the Cavalry, has risen,and with it, a new regime. Children, at the young age of 12, are tested to be recruited to the Cavalry army. If they are accepted, they go through a rigorous training process to prove their worth. If they survive, they patrol the country, slaying anyone who disobeys the Cavalry's rules. If you are rejected, you are sent to make your own way in the world. no education just your own wits.

Of course, there is no rule without a rebellion. Many rejects joined the Resistance, an organization devoted to taking down the Cavalry.

In addition, each generation has 10 Anitatios: people who change from humans into creatures at will. The creatures change each generation, being any animal with regular or magical significance.

It is said that the only way the Resistance could ever stand up to the might of the Cavalry would be if they had the power of all 10 Anitatios on their side.

With a new generation of Anitatios, will it truly be the time for the Resistance to attack?
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"Chord, would you stop licking my ear?"
A teenage girl with flaming red hair stood, waiting for something, at the base of a looming ice covered mountain. The great sky above her was a stormy gray, threatening to downpour. She was wearing black fingerless gloves, a rifle strapped to her back, a dagger on her left thigh, a satchel over her shoulder. Her combat boots reached past her knees, almost covering her black jeans. A dark purple purple tank top was hidden under a dark green camouflage jacket. Around her neck was the Resistance flag tied at her shoulder bone- standard issue. Her emerald green eyes flashed in annoyance. A fierce dragon next to her hissed in return to her outburst.
"Yes, I know you use your tongue to smell, but what would my ear even smell like?" The girl responded.
The dragon hissed again.
"My ear does not smell like chicken! Well, whatever. I'm calling Nikki. She should have been here an hour ago!" The girl demanded. She rummaged through her satchel, looking for something. Meanwhile,the dragon morphed from a mighty beast into a slight and dark teenage boy. Finally, the girl pulled out a contraption similar to a watch, but with a much larger screen. She fiddled with a few buttons until a voice radiated from the contraption.
"Hello?"
"Nicolai Chevaux, where is that little blonde head of yours and why is it not here like it should have been an hour ago?" The girl angrily asked the voice.
"I bet she got distracted by something shiny," the boy put in.
"That was one time, Chord!" Nicolai yelled.
"Chord, stop discriminating Nikki because she's easily distracted. She can't help what she is," the red-head interjected.
"Salinee, you're just jealous 'cuz I can breathe I can breathe fire."
"I can breathe fire, too, dumbo. Now Nikki, where are you?" Salinee said, reverting her attention back to Nicolai.
"Well, you know I went to go get some pastries because the cafeteria food is horrible over there, and, well, I kinda got lost," Nicolai admitted sheepishly.
Salinee and Chord facepalmed.
"That's even worse than being distracted by something shiny! At least then we knew where you were!" Salinee yelled.
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No, this is not the proper starting point for this tale. To tell it properly, we must start from the beginning.....

Billions of years ago-

NOT THAT BEGINNING!

The beginning of our Anitatios tales; the day of the most important test of their lives...
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There you go! There's the prologue! It seemed a lot longer on paper. It took me 2 Taylor Swift playlists and half a Lemonade Mouth playlist to type this. Yeah, I'm a slow typer.
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"Why were you lurking under our window?"
"Yes -- yes, good point, Petunia! What were you doing under our windows, boy?"
"Listening to the news," said Harry in a resigned voice.
His aunt and uncle exchanged looks of outrage.
"Listening to the news! Again?"
"Well, it changes every day, you see," said Harry.
-Harry Potter & the Order of the Phoenix


"And they'd [the Death Eaters] love to have me," said Harry sarcastically. "We'd be best pals if they didn't keep trying to do me in."
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:16 pm

" 'My ear does not smell like chicken! Well, whatever. I'm calling Nikki. She should have been here an hour ago!' The girl demanded." I confused about the "demanded" part of it because I thought demand was a rude form of a question (I like to shout them!) Did you mean something else, or does demanded have a meaning I know not of?
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby TheShinyAmpharos12.5 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:25 am

Look at my Username wrote:" 'My ear does not smell like chicken! Well, whatever. I'm calling Nikki. She should have been here an hour ago!' The girl demanded." I confused about the "demanded" part of it because I thought demand was a rude form of a question (I like to shout them!) Did you mean something else, or does demanded have a meaning I know not of?


Yeah, you're right. I always thought 'demanded' sounded weird there. I'm gonna change it to: " 'My ear does not smell like chicken!' The girl protested. 'Well, whatever.' " How's that sound?

Thanks! :mrgreen:
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"Any girl can be glamorous. All you have to do is stand still and look stupid."
Hedy Lamarr



"Why were you lurking under our window?"
"Yes -- yes, good point, Petunia! What were you doing under our windows, boy?"
"Listening to the news," said Harry in a resigned voice.
His aunt and uncle exchanged looks of outrage.
"Listening to the news! Again?"
"Well, it changes every day, you see," said Harry.
-Harry Potter & the Order of the Phoenix


"And they'd [the Death Eaters] love to have me," said Harry sarcastically. "We'd be best pals if they didn't keep trying to do me in."
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:44 pm

I think it sounds a lot better! Now, to not forget
Checklist for my book
-dragon for half bloods
-see evil, fall in love
-escape from good place
-get captured by good
-meet more half bloods-8+6
-find save parents
-destroy law

Done!
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Dr. Mirtachu » Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:04 am

just a few words from me today: i haven't write anything this week because i'm busy around all this holidays...i promise to write something soon!
mood: busy listening: Of The Night [Bastille] status: always lurking
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:25 am

Okay! Fine with me! I even need to get on with my story, will write a good bit of it tonight... Hopefully...
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby min yoongi » Sun Jan 01, 2012 6:58 am

Gosh,I'm sooooo sorry,I have been busy lately,will write something this week :c

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Raven~Scythe » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:00 am

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username:The Doctor. Oops. You can look at my post to figure it out. C:
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? I might not have Wifi most of the time. But I will try my best.
What's your favorite color? black, green, and purple
Animal? what animal?
Fish?what fish??
Type of mythical creature? Cerberus all the way
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? EVIL CREATURES!!!!! like a cerberus!
Anything else (do not leave blank): I like writing, end of story, goodbye, the end. No, I play the harp, i Live on a farm, I know Captain Rutabaga IRL, and i own the most fuzzy, mischivious cat in the world.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby van » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:03 am

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I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: Van
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Yep. More.
What's your favorite color? Red, or black.
Animal? Ummm... Thylacines, cats. Im not really into animals all that much, the only time I write about them is hunting.
Fish? Yummm. Sword fish and marlins, theyre tasty. We have one hanging on our wall!
Type of mythical creature? Dont take me for a fool!
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? Trolls. Homestuck trolls |D no, just kidding, evil creatures. Demons...
Anything else (do not leave blank): I usually write about things that I love; hunting, fanfics, demons, my persona, and sometimes certain places.
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:09 am

Yaaaaaaaay! Hello, both of you! and the Wifi problem is no problem!
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