Ahzenai Fan Club, Species by Onyxwings! 8D

[Shiko Hayashi]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username: Wolf-chan
Do you own any Ahzenai?
Yes, Rutoriel.

I was wondering, is anyone here willing to give me some feedback on my woo for Levorith? I would really appreciate it.

I, personally, adored your woo. I loved the emotion that Rutoriel showed throughout the whole story. <3 My only suggestion, though it's minor and probably wouldn't have been noticed, is that in the 7th paragraph you repeat yourself with:

"Oh wait." She snapped. "Never mind." She snapped.

Other than that, it's absolutely lovely. <3

Oh wow your right. I never would of noticed that.

Thanks guys! I'll go fix it up a bit so that's... err... fixed.
Any other thing? I'm trying to improve my writing and it always helps to have people give some feedback.

[Nyxeva]

LIEK OMG I LUV AHZENAI.<3
Username:
Demotivated_bear
Do you own any Ahzenai?
Yep, Halcyon <333


Guys, I'm writing an Ahzenai story and could use some more characters to work with. I'll need 'good guys' and 'bad guys'.
Take a look and let me know what you think, please?
Click

[Onyxeva]

Looks good, can't wait to read more. <333

[Nimaine]

Sounds good so far, Bear!
If you need more Ahzenai, Passa would help discourage Halcyon. Benediction offers her battle expertise and she has the scars to prove it. Sartores is my doctor/scientist/healer, with the plant and rock knowledge- but it sounds like Valcyon's already got that covered so please don't use Sar unless needed. All my Ahzenai's personalities can be found in the archives of the website-link on the first page of the thread.

[Horneddragon]

well the twins are the terrible two some :') i'd let you use them if you want some serious bad guys xD
Valakin is the worse of the two, if anything could be generally evil, it would be him :B he only shows the barest signs of love to his sister.

[.: SilentDarkness :.]

well the twins are the terrible two some :') i'd let you use them if you want some serious bad guys xD
Valakin is the worse of the two, if anything could be generally evil, it would be him :B he only shows the barest signs of love to his sister.

I absoloutly love your 2 Ahzenai, they are gorgeous

[Horneddragon]

Thank you ^.^ i have ... 6 i think
Kiyo, Amaranth, Lokeash, Vitaloney, Valakin, and my newest addition Jerico

[.: SilentDarkness :.]

Thank you ^.^ i have ... 6 i think
Kiyo, Amaranth, Lokeash, Vitaloney, Valakin, and my newest addition Jerico

Nice, I am hoping to get one, as soon as Onyx is doing Customs again, I am so excited, I can't wait xD

[.: SilentDarkness :.]

I have two

Anaria &
Flash

So far I have won nothing out of the 15 I have applied for. It's beggining to bug me a bit,
but hopefuly I can win the next one, otherwise I will never get another ahzenai because I can't afford an MLV

Unless I win the nominations thing, which I doubt will happen.

Good luck to everyone on that

I love your two Ahzenai, they are stunning

[Shiko Hayashi]

*raises eyebrow*

Try breeding them Horned. It you have a male and a female, it's a lot easier to just try and get one of their pups.

I only have Rutoriel, but I really enjoyed writing the woo for Levorith, so I wrote one for Rusalka as well. I can't help but hope that I do win her.

L:ol and on the other sidfe, I'm erked that I haven't managed to snag a custom.