The Wild Mountain Equid Fanclub V.3 - Welcome!

[SpartanAmethyst]

Thanks guys ;3; He does look more like his daddy, but I tried to add more brindling. He's got his sire's color with more white, as well as the ribcage brindling, then his mother's tail, leg, face and neck brindling and color variety brindling <3

[Scarlip]

Honestly, I would just love to be an artist at all. I can do either or, but I like to think I do a pretty good job on combining coats and dividing genetics.
Actually, would anyone mind giving me a little critique on my first breeding? :3

[x]

He is very nice! his color looks good and he seems to have traits from both parents. He is different from boh parents but still noticably thiers, overall i like him very much. Here's Mine for that pair ([Link]) Now tell me what you think of mine too, i think i have a tendency to make them to much like there parents (mostly quipping wise)

I love him as much as I love Spartan's. :3
While on this guy the quipping definitely tells the viewer that Sherlock was the mommy, he does not look like "too much like the parents" at all, in my opinion. He does clearly represent them, yes, but in a very aesthetic way. ^^

[Zax]

Could I get some critique on my pairs that I've bred?

Pair 1: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1888891

Pair 2: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1888506

Pair 3: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1888977

[Scarlip]

Seems like I'm on a roll with critiques so meep. xD

Part 1: I looove the fact you gave him a buckskin base, it's really original because even though he does resemble both parents, it gives him a unique, recognizable touch. And even though you dislike filled quip, it's very Sherlock-like and nice looking on him. ^^

Part 2: Like I said earlier, everybody who even attempts at that pair already has my full respect, I would certainly be unable to make a foal of those two. And you did an amazing job there, the quipping style made me think of the parents immediately. The only suggestion I can think of would be to toss in a cream/brown tone of some sort to make the daddy more prominent color-wise, but that is totally not a must because the design seems very nice this way already. :3

Part 3: Looooove. I adore the way you did the "must have same quipping style like father" task, I could immediately tell who her father is when I saw her. You also did a nice job combining the father's quip with the mother's soft colors, it makes a very stunning design.




Also, I know so far all my critiques have been pretty much "Loooove" but I just adore all those designs you guys come up with. :3

[stabbrielle]

Can someone possible critique my three entries? I didn't enter in the breeding artist contest though.

[Scarlip]

Can someone possible critique my three entries? I didn't enter in the breeding artist contest though.

If you don't mind the wait I will, once I get up tomorrow. It's 4:00 am here and tomorrow night we're starting our vaccation (10 hours drive yay xD) so I should go to bed now. :3

[Potato.]

Any opinions on my 4 entries? xD
It's ok if you guys don't want to- I just see the trend going on. c:

[Zax]

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1891876
My second attempt at this pair. Opinions?

[folktale]

http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=1891876
My second attempt at this pair. Opinions?

I think its interesting to see a more Sherlock based foal!
But small typo, this is a breeding for the first pair, and you have it written as the second pair X)

[Zax]

Gah! Thanks. I would have never caught that!