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by Solanum » Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:45 pm
I could help you there ;3 That would be fun. I know how to write decent forms, but I've had my experience with terrible ones

I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:42 am
Or we could do it differently... You do the majority of the form then I write why it isn't a good form, as I'm pretty good at slagging off forms xD -shot-
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:57 am
-writes good form-
Okay... So why is it good xD
Alright. I can do that. Unless you'd rather I use an existing form for the good one? Cano, Oro, Epsilon, Drammaka, Fogo? xD I would say Mashi but I don't like his form xD Or should I use another character to write another purely for an example?
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:18 am
Yup. You have a point thar.
Is the code drop next week? It is isn't it? c: Maybe I'll put up a form... I know how people like to read my forms... [/sarcasm] xD
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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by Africa. » Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:41 am
Yeah, sure ^^ Just remember to ask the PoH first if your using a form from there

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by Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:58 am
I'm confused... Why would I need to ask them? -is ignorant-
None of my SLAP forms have been all that great so far. My TAN one for Canowicakte was alright...
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you
You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you
I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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