FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Join or create fan clubs about your favorite things!

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Solanum » Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:45 pm

I could help you there ;3 That would be fun. I know how to write decent forms, but I've had my experience with terrible ones :D
Image
♠ Character site
♠ Writing thread
♠ 2017 Character challenge

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Image
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
User avatar
Solanum
 
Posts: 31596
Joined: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Keriae » Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:51 pm

Or we could just act like n00bs. xD
User avatar
Keriae
 
Posts: 31349
Joined: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:42 am

Or we could do it differently... You do the majority of the form then I write why it isn't a good form, as I'm pretty good at slagging off forms xD -shot-
Image
♠ Character site
♠ Writing thread
♠ 2017 Character challenge

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Image
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
User avatar
Solanum
 
Posts: 31596
Joined: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Keriae » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:50 am

Or we could both write a form and say why one is good and one is bad. Like, I write the bad form and you say why it is bad and then you write a good form and I say why it is good. I dunno.
User avatar
Keriae
 
Posts: 31349
Joined: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:57 am

-writes good form-
Okay... So why is it good xD

Alright. I can do that. Unless you'd rather I use an existing form for the good one? Cano, Oro, Epsilon, Drammaka, Fogo? xD I would say Mashi but I don't like his form xD Or should I use another character to write another purely for an example?
Image
♠ Character site
♠ Writing thread
♠ 2017 Character challenge

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Image
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
User avatar
Solanum
 
Posts: 31596
Joined: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Keriae » Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:14 am

It might be easier for you to use one that you've already done.
But we need to wait for Fey to approve.
User avatar
Keriae
 
Posts: 31349
Joined: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:18 am

Yup. You have a point thar.

Is the code drop next week? It is isn't it? c: Maybe I'll put up a form... I know how people like to read my forms... [/sarcasm] xD
Image
♠ Character site
♠ Writing thread
♠ 2017 Character challenge

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Image
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
User avatar
Solanum
 
Posts: 31596
Joined: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Keriae » Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:36 am

I think so. And you know I love to read your forms.
User avatar
Keriae
 
Posts: 31349
Joined: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Africa. » Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:41 am

Yeah, sure ^^ Just remember to ask the PoH first if your using a form from there ;)
Prim
She's my most precious character, go love her. ;3

Mood: Creative
Doing: Critiquing
Should be Doing: Project
Note:
***
Looking for art of Prim,
paying well. Shoot me a PM and we can discuss something.

***I love critiquing
forms, PM me about it.







Stay weird everyone. ;) ♥
User avatar
Africa.
 
Posts: 8791
Joined: Wed Aug 05, 2009 12:24 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: FanSpam Thread 4 the SLAP

Postby Solanum » Sun Jul 17, 2011 3:58 am

I'm confused... Why would I need to ask them? -is ignorant-
None of my SLAP forms have been all that great so far. My TAN one for Canowicakte was alright...
Image
♠ Character site
♠ Writing thread
♠ 2017 Character challenge

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Image
I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
User avatar
Solanum
 
Posts: 31596
Joined: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:17 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests