Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Club

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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Cloverstream » Wed Aug 07, 2013 8:09 am

Wow that form. Give us your skills Rayen!

And I hope Lottie's not Mary Sue... Though I'm not sure what about her would be Mary Sue. I mean I don't think there's anything "special snow flake" about her. She's pretty weak and normal.
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Rayen » Wed Aug 07, 2013 9:39 am

    haha, glad you like it too, ruby ovo
    i think lottie's fine! i mean, she's cute but she's not super strong or overpowered in other ways, and doesn't have those overkill tragic backstories or messes with the canon rules, which are essentially the main traits of a sue, so i guess she's safe! and she doesn't seem like a bland character at all either, so kudos to you.
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby herald. » Wed Aug 07, 2013 9:48 am

Yep ^-^. Lottie's a great character, you don't have to worry about be being a Mary Sue.

Updated Mao's profile with the slightly changed new skeleton. It looks like even more of a WIP now, but at least I put everything in place and filled out some info... Man, he is criminally light for his height o-o. It took me forever just to fill out some of his basic info, I don't know how on Earth you managed to fill out everything, Rayen DX.
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Rayen » Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:04 am

    haha, i've been working on it for roughly two or three weeks already in my notebook, that's how ;; i always invest too much energy into character creation orz
    but i'm really looking forward to see how you develop mao! i have a feeling that he'll be fun to draw - once i finish the girls i might do a lineup of the boys, too, and i'm looking forward to drawing him uwu
    and by the way, i'm doing the lineart on the girls' lineup now!
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Cloverstream » Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:10 am

I'm glad you guys don't think she's Mary Sue thanks. ^^
Ya she's not very strong or anything.
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby eren. » Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:38 am

@Blue Ruby - Naw she's perfect <3

I'm drawing a chibi of Kai with his 3DMG. I'm really happy with it so far eee~
This is only like the second chibi I've drawn soo ;;u;;
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby alfiq » Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:51 am

Lottie is a fab little gal.

And the cat picture omg. <3

You guys have such wonderful forms that I got jealous so inspired that I have to revamp Theresa's uwu


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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Rayen » Wed Aug 07, 2013 11:02 am

    eep, i'm glad you feel inspired, i bet theresa's will turn out even more fab!
    question time! assuming your ocs live that long [let's hope they do!], how would they be like as old people?
    liesl would probably be a cranky old lady who thinks younger soldiers are suicidal for leaving the walls haha

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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby Anthea » Wed Aug 07, 2013 11:25 am

omg Rayen thats too funny xD Cranky Liesl spreading her wisdom XD

Mike would probably be the "that old guy" that goes around the village spouting war jokes, and then when nobody laughs he says,
"Ah, you wouldn't get it, it's a Squad 319 thing".
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Re: Squad 319 || Shingeki no Kyojin [Attack on Titan] OC Clu

Postby alfiq » Wed Aug 07, 2013 11:26 am

Theresa would probably be a old lady that got into fights even though she's to old for that stuff. And break her poor hip.
liesl is the perf old lady tho

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i hope she isn't a mary sue whoa ive literally never written a 'tragic' backstory for any of my characters ever before this


    THERESA CAMRY
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    Age: 19
    Sex: Female
    Height: 1.85 cm
    Weight: 82 kg
    Birthdate: 12th April
    Division: Scouting legion
    Graduation rank: 6th.

appearance
    Theresa is generally quite tall; standing at 1.85 cm, and has an athletic build.
    Her hair is red; and is held in a braid most of the time with two 'bangs' an both sides that run down to her chin.
    Her almond shaped eyes are a emerald green, and she has freckles that go from one chin to the other.

past life
    Theresa grew up in a district within wall Rose, famous for it's criminal activity that was higher than most other places. Her father was a thief, and he managed to make the wrong relations with certain groups, causing his death early in Theresa's life.
    Her mother pretty much broke down due to this, only staying home and never stepping outside the house.
    This made Theresa the one that had feed both her and her mother, and she spent her days hunting for pigeons and other animals that wandered the streets. And of course stealing.
    Her mother would later pass due to sickness, leaving Theresa to fend for her own.
    At one point, she meet a boy named Cayden; they became close over time and became a duo, following each other pretty much everywhere and stealing together.
    They became seperated after a while, not seeing each other again untill their trainee days.
yeah they where partners in crime

personality
Theresa generally appears hostile, unkind and rude. She has a suprisingly large vocabulary that consits of insults, and often gets into fights.
She is awfully overprotective of the few friends she might have, and has a habit of carrying them around for some strange reason. She also does her best to be kind to them, even though tending to fail sometimes, as her way of being 'kind' can seem sorta off.
She's rash, preferring to improvise rather than use some sort of plan; and lacks a good deal of social skill. So she's obviously not very good with teamwork, and prefers to work alone.
Theresa isn't the one who listens to orders if she finds them stupid, and will openly object and argue, and sometimes bash the one who gave them.
She also has a tendency of doing before thinking, often causing her to end up in dangerous situations.


other
    Theresa has a 'pet hawk' that she calls Mary, which is useful during missions.

stats
    Intelligence: 6.5/10
    Social Skill: 2/10
    Height: 8/10
    Weight: 7/10
    Vitality: 3.5/10
    Battle Skill: 7/10
    Judging you: 10/10
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