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by deimido » Mon Nov 06, 2017 4:14 pm
@p-lasticplants - aaah it looks great! i love how you've written everyone's characters and their reaction to their new shaman, but i think the only thing i'm curious about is how milquetoast knows abt what medcats are called in creamclan when he's so new? :'0
@katrione - can't help you there i'm afraid! but maybe my own and oLD GOD it needs updating archive can spark up a few ideas?
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by Grey_Hoodie » Mon Nov 06, 2017 4:24 pm
@p-lasticplants, Ooh! I like how your posts are in third person present tense and I really like how blunt Milquetoast is xD. I not very good at constructive criticism, though, so I can't offer you much.
@deimos, aw thanks c:. I like your post so far. It was so happy to start off with that I wasn't really expecting the emotional turn at the end, though, haha. Also, I wouldn't worry about your writing style. People enjoy reading your posts because of your style (or at least, I enjoy reading your posts because I like your style). It's kind of like how some people go out of their way to get a book by a specific author regardless of genre because they really, really like the writer's way of putting words to paper (or screen, I guess).
@Katrione, I'm not really sure how to help. I can do some coding for you, if you'd like. My own archive is going to be kinda rpg inspired. I'm tentatively putting up my archive since it still looks super duper awful so you can atleast see where I'm headed. You should really only pay attention to my first and second post (my first being the outline for my archive and the second being an example of what each post will look like). If you've got a basic idea for what you'd like your archive to look like, then I'd be happy to help with coding c:
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by Grey_Hoodie » Mon Nov 06, 2017 5:00 pm
@Katrione, I'd love to help with coding
. I'm not sure how you'd want me to incorporate a mountain theme, though, since my way of coding is a little bit weird and I try create visuals with whatever I can use (like the colored line here is meant to represent a redwood tree stretching into the sky, etc.). If you've got a format already in mind, then I can try and work around that c:.
Also, I always though Echoclan's color theme was meant to be northern lights or something (idk why), haha. I'm not sure if that was what you were actually going for, though (I kinda doubt it).
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by Katrione » Mon Nov 06, 2017 5:11 pm
@Grey
I actually never thought of it being like the aurora lights, but I actually see it now XD I just like blue, and all shades of red (pink was all that went nicely with that blue)
The mountain thing on my archive is pretty much the only thing I have to hint towards the mountains
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