Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[elf_of_the_hollow]

Username: elf_of_the_hollow
What You'd Like Help With: just anything in general, spelling is a really big thing for me, but i really need to make my post longer and more intresting because what i will usually post on my RP's is most likly "she walked into the room" but i have some experience with longer posts
Preferred Instructor: *doesn't care* ummm...*also doesn't bother to go back and read who there is*
Activity or Time Zone: i live in Eastern Standard time, and i'm usally on in the mornings for 6:40-7:00 and in the afternoons from 3:00-8:30
Sample of Writing: well...i'll post an update later...*in other words, i'll give you a link to an RP i'm in*

*EDIT* here's an RP i'm in: viewtopic.php?f=28&t=1550573

[city;]

City has been neglecting her thread. I'm sorry my lovelies.

Waffle - I can take you for personalities, if that's alright. I'm not the best at writing in first person [unless its novel writing], but maybe I can give you a few pointers. :} Go ahead and PM me.


YukaSayuri - Please provide us with a writing example so we can further assess your strengths. We are also okay with a link to a role play you're relatively active in.


Glu and Cheerio - Nope. You're all good, Cheerio. I'm glad for the help. But yeah. Thanks too Glu. I'm so lame. -_-


Elf - We would prefer you gave us an instructor you like, but if not, then whatever. :} If you wouldn't mind giving us an example soon, we could have one of our instructors adopt you as quickly as possible.

[Yuka Sayuri]

On my form ^-^ Any question, please, just ask :3

[Postcard]

I was a part of abandoned.'s class, but we haven't gotten to anything in months. I'd like to request a new/second teacher, if that's okay? C:

[abandoned.]

I was a part of abandoned.'s class, but we haven't gotten to anything in months. I'd like to request a new/second teacher, if that's okay? C:

hey postcard, sorry I haven't posted yet. I will be posting soon ^^;
exams, school, and life haven't made it easy to post at all. i'll be posting after next week
i hope you don't mind waiting until then? sorry for not pming you </3

[Postcard]

I was a part of abandoned.'s class, but we haven't gotten to anything in months. I'd like to request a new/second teacher, if that's okay? C:

hey postcard, sorry I haven't posted yet. I will be posting soon ^^;
exams, school, and life haven't made it easy to post at all. i'll be posting after next week :)
i hope you don't mind waiting until then? sorry for not pming you </3

I know, life is really busy. And that's fine, I can wait. :3

[Talvace]

Username: sugarstrings
What You'd Like Help With: I'd like help with creating my own forms, please.
Preferred Instructor: city;
Activity or Time Zone: I am online mostly in the afternoons and for a brief while around eight or nine o'clock in the morning. I go by Eastern Standard Time (-5).
Sample of Writing:

[size=150]“ If bad ideas were an Olympic event, this one would take the gold. ”


Ｎａｍｅ:: Steven Fornell
Ａｇｅ:: 19
Ｇｅｎｄｅｒ:: Male
Ｐｏｗｅｒ:: Intangibility








“ Put some faith in me and one day you'll see, there's a diamond under all this dust. ”


Ｈｅｉｇｈｔ:: 5'9"
Ｗｅｉｇｈｔ:: 130 lbs
Ｈａｉｒ Ｃｏｌｏｒ:: black
Ｅｙｅ Ｃｏｌｏｒ:: brown
Ｓｋｉｎ Ｃｏｌｏｒ:: pale, of Asian decent
Ｔａｔｔｏｏｓ:: None
Ｐｉｅｒｃｉｎｇｓ:: None
Ｓｃａｒｓ:: There is one long, thin scar that runs up the side of his right arm from getting cut on broken glass from having to run from the cops after breaking and entering a store to get a computer he couldn't afford. Both hands have scars on the knuckles from various fights. His left cheek has a very faint scar running under his eye from where he was once hit with a metal pipe.
Ｂａｓｉｃ Ｏｖｅｒａｌｌ:: Steve has never been able to put on weight, he's always been far too skinny for how tall he is no matter how much extra food his mother made him eat. It was probably from all the running he did. His body is long and lean, covered with a light layer of muscle. He looks like a runner, a track star maybe, but in reality he just needs to be able to outrun the police, to jump over the hoods of moving cars, get over fences, and take to the roofs so he doesn't get caught. Not that there's a chance of that, his long legs carry him far to quickly for that too happen.
His hair is getting to be too long, the way he likes it. It doesn't quite fall into his eyes, but that's only because he always pushes it off to the side or sticks it under the silly baseball hat he's taken to wearing. His eyes, now his eyes are something to take notice of. They aren't any unusual color, just brown with little flecks of green around the center, but they are bright, like little flares. They hold the only traces of emotion he shows, anger, frustration, mostly. Steven's eyes are the most expressive part of his body besides his fists.
For someone who uses his hands to get into fights so often, his hands are surprisingly smooth, save for the scars across the knuckles of both hands. His hands are small, with clean nails and, often, sweaty palms. He's always tense, nervous, waiting for something to go wrong and get him caught. Nothing has yet, though, but his hands still clench into fists in his pockets when he thinks it will. Normally only part of his hands are visible, the top half covered by too long sleeves that he wears to cover the long scar going up his right arm. He doesn't like people seeing his scars.








“ You aren't the only one who's lonely and afraid... ”


Ｌｉｋｅｓ::
Running
The thrill of being chased by cops
Video games
Baseball Bats
Winter
Ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ::
Guns
Dogs
Summer
Crowds
Silence
Ｆｅａｒｓ::
Being caught by the police
Pain
Ｓｔｒｅｎｇｔｈｓ::
Speed
Agility
Fighting
Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ:: Steven is a rebel. He doesn't need a reason, though he has one, to do what he does. Even if he had the money to buy the things he steals, he'd probably still do it. He loves the adrenaline rush he gets every time the cops chase him far to much to give it up. Not to say he's a bad guy, he's probably one of the most polite people you'll ever meet, unless it's in a back alley that is. Try to sneak up on him or force him to do something and, more often than not, you'll find yourself with a set of knuckles leaving indentations and, most likely, a decent amount of blood on your person.
Secretly, though, Steven is a sap. He's not the tough guy he acts like to protect himself at all. He loves to watch the city lights from the roof tops, sunsets aren't out of the question, snuggling is fine to him, and he even doesn't mind being dragged shopping. He likes to be around people, as long as they don't stare at his scars or insult him or the people he's with. As long as they aren't in crowds. He can't stand crowds, especially ones filled with air headed idiots.
All of his life, despite having more than one opportunity to do so, Steven's wanted to be a hero. He knows he can play the bad guy, hell he's done it before, but just once he wants to save someone in the most romantic way possible. He's just that confusing.








“ The past is never coming back, why does everyone want to know about it? ”


Ｈｉｓｔｏｒｙ:: Steven Fornell had it good. His parents paid for his loft in Atlanta, he went to one of the top colleges in the city, and was top of his class. Yes, he had the number one ranking out of his entire class. They were probably glad they'd given him that full scholarship now. His parents, though rich, only paid for his crappy loft, though. Anything else, any extras like a lap top or food he had to pay for himself. He would be the first to tell you, delivering Pizzas did not get you far in the world. That's how he began to get into stealing.
It had started small, just a few little bottles of soda being slipped into the bags he'd already checked out. From there it had escalated until, after many near panic attacks at what he was doing, because it was so very, very wrong, he found himself with the ability to break into stores after they'd closed and take what he needed. He wasn't proud of this, but he didn't let the guilt catch up either. He mostly took what he needed, and admittedly a few toys (His Mac Book Pro, his gaming equipment, a hat that fit him just right), and never left any traces.
The night that he finally got caught though, and not by the police as you might think, was when he had made a mistake and forgotten to check all of the entrances. This time, the alarmed fire exit in the back. Who knew that having a key would keep the alarm from going off if you entered from outside through that door? He had done the only thing he could think of at the time and, without even dropping his bag filled with overpriced food, had smashed a window and jumped out. It wasn't until he was hiding behind a dumpster, waiting for the cops to pass by, that he'd felt the sting in his neck and pulled the dart out that real fear had set in, though. He hadn't even had time to find his attacker before the world went black. The next time he woke up the world as he knew it was gone.









“ This stuff is personal and I'm supposed to broadcast it? Tsch. ”


Ｌｏｏｋｉｎｇ Ｆｏｒ Ｉｎ Ａ Ｌｏｖｅｒ:: "I just want to be happy, if anyone can do that.. well love is a big word, but maybe we can be close."
Ｓｅｘｕａｌｉｔｙ:: Bi-sexual
Ｃｕｒｒｅｎｔｌｙ Ｄａｔｉｎｇ:: No one.
Ｃｕｒｒｅｎｔｌｙ Ｃｒｕｓｈｉｎｇ:: I'm not.
Ｌｉｔｔｌｅ Ｔｉｋｅｓ:: None.
Ｅａｔｉｎｇ Ｆｏｒ Ｔｗｏ:: Nope.
Ｍａｒｒｉｅｄ:: Never.








“You know when things go boom, I kind of feel like I'm home. ”


Ｈｏｍｅｍａｄｅ:: Steven has several homemade explosives on his person. They very from smoke grenades to full out bombs. "You can never be to prepared..."
Ｆｏｕｎｄ:: "Found a long bow, a couple dozen arrows, and this real big blade. Might be a machete. God I suck at archery, guess I'll have to learn."








“I sugarstrings promise to abide by the rules and not get mad if someone uses their powers on me as I know they will not truly harm me or vise versa. ”


Ｔｈｅｍｅ Ｓｏｎｇ:: Peppermint Winter - Owl City

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[denji3884]

Username: [Natasha], please, call me Nat or Tasha!
What You'd Like Help With: Description, mostly. Maybe a few other things, but mostly description. I want to roleplay as if you were there! I also need ideas for developing plots and such c:
Preferred Instructor: Kiro & Hikari or maybe The Burning Rose? Either will do well
Activity or Time Zone: I’m on pretty much everyday! I roleplay almost every day, and sometimes I roleplay during night! Since Winter Break is coming for me, I shall be roleplaying more often!
Sample of Writing:

Today was just not a good day for Scarlet, a rebellious teenager who loved listening to rock music and bands unlike normal girls that were her age. She discovered that her best friend and long-time crush had been dating. She wasn’t sure if this was true or not, but she had seen them together more often.

Instead of showing sadness and depression, she let out her anger on other people, rather than herself. Everything that had been going on right now was just like a shade of darkness. 

Scarlet gritted her teeth together. She clenched her fist, her foot kicking the wall. Now that her best friend was no longer a ‘friend’ that she could trust, she had nobody to comfort her. Not even the boy who she thought she had liked. 

She couldn’t cry, no matter how hard she tried to. No tears pricking the corner of her eyes. She wouldn’t let herself cry and break down, even when nobody had been in the room.

She had an idea. An idea that could turn out well if she could follow each procedure correctly. Instead of a scowl, she had a wide devilish smirk playing along her lips.

And sometimes I write anime roleplays. Like hetalia ^^’

[abandoned.]

OH MY GOSH NAT 8D

[mitchypoosays]

Username: Adrenaline Chaos
What You'd Like Help With: Animal Role playing and Growing Users From Illiterate to Semi-Literate+
Preferred Instructor: Well, I'm not really sure how I pick. But if it's one for each of what I'd like help with, Samm for Animal RPing and ( well, since it seems to be that she changed her Username, I'll just use the one in her post) The Burning Rose for becoming Semi-Lit+.
Activity or Time Zone: I think that my time zone's probably different from others'. Anywho, my TZ is PHT, Phillipine Time. It's almost 12 hours apart from US if anyone's interested. Oh, and for activity? I'm online for almost the whole day, except for when I have classes. And sometimes there are days when I sleep the whole day or go out, so I can't go on CS.
Sample of Writing: I guess I'll try....

Autumn Lee Rosette
Autumn woke up to the sound of her brother pounding on her door. " It's 7:15, Lee! " Her brother told her, being her only way to wake up. She opened her eyes and rolled off the bed. Landing on the floor with a thud. She stood up and shook the sleep out of her head. She opened her door " Thanks." She told her brother, smiling. She walked to the bathroom to take a bath.

When she came out of the shower, dressed up in her school uniform, she walked downstairs to eat her breakfast with the rest of her family. After eating, she ran outside so that she could still catch the bus.