Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

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[Waffle]

Username;; Waffle
What You'd Like Help With;; Well to start off I would like to learn how to improve my literacy level and then I would like to learn how to describe a character's personality in more depth.
Preferred Instructor;; I honsestly do not mind. You all seem like very good teachers and I would just love if for anyone to help me.
Activity or Time Zone;; I am on CS quite a lot, 5-10 minutes in the morning before school and 5-8 hours after school. I am British but I don't know what the time zone is... o\\^\\o
Sample of Writing;; Here is a sample of what I normally post, (although on a better day I and post 15+ lines per character and my reply also depends on what I have to work with);;

[ S k y b l i s s ~ M a l e ]
I watched a young group of human pups playing football in the field in front of me from the bush I was sitting under to keep cool from the sun and watched as the ball kept going from one side of the grounds to the other. Every time the ball came near my bush I shrunk back further in to avoid being seen or hit but that didn't seem to last long because before I knew it the ball came flying towards me and hit me in the snout. I let out a pained bark and shot out from the bush, leaving the ball behind. I kept looking back at the bush and I wasn't really looking where I was going because next thing I knew I ran straight over a human family's picnic causing food to go flying every where. I would have apologised but I realized I couldn't speak their language so I just barked politely and ran off again this time taking the time to look at where I was going. I retreated back to a dark ally somewhere near a bunch of buildings.

< R e d ~ F e m a l e >
I looked up and down the path that ran between town buildings, one a bakery, the other a small bike repair shop. I sneaked along the wall of the bakery and let my tail run against the cold brick that surrounded the sweet, yummy bits of human food that I loved so dearly. I stopped once I got to the corner and poked my head around it to see if there was anyone around; I was lucky as there seemed to be no one other than myself down this street. Grinning cunningly, I padded silently so I was standing in front of the door of the bakery and slipped in to the warm building using the, obviously, misplaced cat flap.
Once I was inside I took a look around at my surroundings and tried to spot any members of staff. I couldn't see any so I jumped over the counter and landed silently on the others side before tip-toeing up and down between the different cases full of different cookies and cakes. I stopped at an open case that have double chocolate chip cookies stored inside them and reached up and grabbed on in my mouth just as a member of the staff walked in and saw me.

{ S h i a h ~ M a l e }
I watched as an older dog ran straight across a family's picnic and then run off into town. I laughed at this but then sighed as I felt alone as I hadn't seen any other dog other then the one I had just seen let alone another pup. I turned away from the sight of the park and began to pad slowly back down the path from which I had took to get to the place I had just been.
It took me around five minutes to get back down to a place where I had to decide which way to go. I looked left and right and decided to go down the left route which would lead me into town where I might be able to find the dog I had seen earlier. I hummed tunes that I had heard humans singing quietly to myself as I walked back into town. I walked for about ten minutes until I heard some dogs talking; I knew it was dogs because I knew that I couldn't understand human talk. I stopped my humming and walked over to the ally where the voices were coming from and stuck my head around the corner to see two female adult dogs asking who the other one was.

( S a s h a ~ F e m a l e )
I dug through the bin grumpily as I really didn't want to be doing this as my paws would get dirty and it would take forever to get the smell out of them. My owner had just abandoned me because she was moving to a different island and wasn't allowed to take me with them. I hadn't ate in days and was so hungry that I forced myself to search through the bins and dumps to find anything decent to eat. I sighed and pulled my head out of the bin as there was nothing in there that I could have ate and began to walk back up the ally when I walked straight into a dog who looked as though they were running away from someone or something. I shook my head and looked up at the female German Shepard/Doberman cross that I had walked into. I got to my paws and backed away slightly as the female looked slightly scary to a pup of my age. "Sorry!" I squeaked quietly, hoping I hadn't hurt the other dog.

[avarice.]

Username:
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What You'd Like Help With:
Literacy development.
Preferred Instructor:
It doesn't matter. Whoever can help me.
Activity or Time Zone:
I'm on almost everyday (refer to signature as this changes), from 4 p.m. - 10 p.m. and am able to post as often as possible. My timezone is Eastern.
Sample of Writing:

I only have a couple samples to offer as I mostly just stick to doing 1x1/invite only role plays at this point, finding it's just harder for me to join group role plays that go too fast.
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[Yuka Sayuri]

Username: YukaSayuri
What You'd Like Help With: If possible, everything, but mainly growing my RP level.
Preferred Instructor: None in special.
Activity or Time Zone: UTC/GMT -3 hours (Currently -2 Due to daylight saving time)
Sample of Writing:

http://a-stray-dog-rp.webs.com/apps/forums/topics/show/8370033-the-borderline

- In this thread.

[rose;]

I'm going to say sorry on behalf of all the instructors, not just myself. ^^' Things have been busy for all of us, making it especially hard to help people who want literacy development - at least in my opinion. Just be patient and hang in there with us. ^^

[abandoned.]

lol rosie, I was gonna post my apology! D:<
anyhow, avvy, since we have our own 1x1s going, as soon as we get further into them, I'll start critizing, 'kay? You know what that means? START POSTING >:D 'course, I know you're busy buddy, so take your time also ^^

[team free kick sass]

Username: YukaSayuri
What You'd Like Help With: If possible, everything, but mainly growing my RP level.
Preferred Instructor: None in special.
Activity or Time Zone: UTC/GMT -3 hours (Currently -2 Due to daylight saving time)
Sample of Writing

#minimodding #sorry
If you want to get better at role-playing, the teachers will need a role-play sample. ^^ At least I think so from seeing the instructors often say it. c:
Sorry citeh if I wrong or something<3

[Yuka Sayuri]

#minimodding #sorry
If you want to get better at role-playing, the teachers will need a role-play sample. ^^ At least I think so from seeing the instructors often say it. c:
Sorry citeh if I wrong or something<3

No problems XD

I'm not sure, so I prefer to wait o3o But thanks n-n

[avarice.]

lol rosie, I was gonna post my apology! D:<
anyhow, avvy, since we have our own 1x1s going, as soon as we get further into them, I'll start critizing, 'kay? You know what that means? START POSTING >:D 'course, I know you're busy buddy, so take your time also ^^

{ Oh you are so mean to me but I still love chu lol. That'd be fine.

[eden .]

#minimodding #sorry
If you want to get better at role-playing, the teachers will need a role-play sample. ^^ At least I think so from seeing the instructors often say it. c:
Sorry citeh if I wrong or something<3

No problems XD

I'm not sure, so I prefer to wait o3o But thanks n-n

>> I'm an instructor on hiatus but an instructor nonetheless, and I'm saying that while teachers would be super happy to help you improve, it would be super helpful to have a sample of writing for them to go off of. it's helpful because that way they know how much work your grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc. might need. it's just a great way to get a feel for where you are and how to work you up. c: