Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[zippyzoo77]

@Ian (mind if I shorten it?): Please shoot me a PM and we can begin right away.

Anyone else interested in any of my classes, you're welcome to send me a PM anytime too.

[lance.]

Username: ~Time~
What You'd Like Help With: Going from semi-literate to literate, being more detailed, that sort of thing.
Preferred Instructor: Kiro; Smamm; abandoned.
Activity or Time Zone: I live in Arkansas, so whatever time zone that is, but I'm on at all sorts of odd hours~
Sample of Writing:
Intro Post~~

The Doctor

The Doctor fiddled with three very bright, and probably very dangerous wires, attempting to fix a problem he really hadn't yet worked out. The TARDIS buzzed in his head, telling him very clearly that he was doing that wrong. "No, no, I know exactly what I am doing, thank you." The TARDIS protested, and he grinned. "Well, alright. Almost exactly what I am doing." He frowned. "Oh, fine then. I have absolutely no idea what I am doing, and hoping this works. Happy now?" he complained grumpily, standing up and dusting himself off begore walking back up to the top of the control platform, grabbing at the controls. "Alright, how about we-" A sudden jolt from the TARDIS cut him off, as he was forced to cling to the console to avoid falling over. He waited until the TARDIS landed, leaping to his feet that second and rushing to the doors. "Now, what could have possibly dragged us this far off course?" he mused, opening the doors and stepping outside. "Hmm...Looks like Earth, smells like earth...And yet..." He began muttering to himself, rubbing his chin as he looked around him. He had landed in an alley, dark and slightly smelly, the TARDIS humming unhappily behind him. "Shh, I know," he muttered absently, turning around to get a better look at his location.

Regular Post~~

ƒєηяιѕ

Fenris kept his nose in the air, the tip of his long fluffy tail twitching behind him, the only visible sign of his agitation. The smell of humans was in the air, the smoke from their guns wafting through the air and mixin with the already uncomftorable smell coating the woods. He was walking quietly, Arapaho following close behind, when a loud bang like thunder tore the air. The brute dropped to the ground, his ears flat, when Arapahos voice tore through the air. Ears pricked, he stood and turned toward her. His eyes lite up when he saw the deer at her paws, and he hurried over. "Grab the neck," he commanded, sinking his teeth into the deers back flank, and waited for her to grab the neck so they could take off.

[DoqKing]

Username: ~Gotta Be Lou~
What You'd Like Help With: becoming semi-literate for role plays
Preferred Instructor: Ɔᴇʀᴛᴀɪɴ Ɖᴀʀᴋ Ƭʜɪɴɢs ; abandoned.
Activity or Time Zone: Eastern Standard Time |the fallowing is if i am lucky| 6:00pm (4:45 pm if I'm lucky) to around 7:30pm weekdays 1:40 to 9:00 on Saturday most of the day Sunday |most likely| 7:15 am to 8:15 or 8:30 am on week days weekedends unknown
Sample of Writing:Louis Tomlison & Harry Styles
Louis looks up at the girls. Great, Now I'm gonna surounded by a bunch of psychos he thought. Louis heard what Vitani said, "Crazy Psychos" he said out loud under his breath. Louis picked up his phone and called Harry. The call when to voicemail. He was to lazy to leave a message. Suddenly he spotted Harry at the other end of the crowd. Louis walked throughout the crowd examining the girls "Hey Harry!" he called.

At the other end of the room Harry looked up "Hey Louis!" Harry made his way through the rest of the crowd to the middle of the room, where Louis was. "I was so excited when you called! Wait, what happened to your date with Elenor?" he questioned.

Louis' face turned pale "I don't wan to talk about it." Harry shrugged Louis would tell him when he was ready. "Any way I guess we should start greeting!" and with that Harry turned around and walked away, leaving Louis there in the middle of the crowd.

[rose;]

You should really take me off the list for everything except plot development :B I just don't have the extra time to help with anything else....

[abandoned.]

Alright. Then, I'll be taking Lou into my class. Pm me :3

[city;]

Okay. I'll do that when I get a laptop. c:

[team free kick sass]

Nope. for now, I'll take what you have to say, Cheerio. I may just have to revise the front page.

[btw, I'm going to put up a new poll, so everybody beware!]

lolwut? Cheerio doesn't get it >o<

I thinks it's a good idea to make peoples write who they want 'cos then we don't have to be all "do you want me...?" "or me?" or "i'll take you!".

If that makes sense c:

[for baltimore.]

Username: ѕιхғЗЗтυɴderтнeѕтαrѕ. c:

What You'd Like Help With: becoming more literate, developing a better vocabulary, going into more detail, creating forms... let's just say I could use all the help I can get. d:

Preferred Instructor: Smamm or abandoned. are fine with me!

Activity or Time Zone: I live in Mississippi, so I'm located in the Central timezone. However, I am in school from 8 am - 4 pm CST, then I'm online throughout the afternoon until 12 am.

Sample of Writing:

I only wished I could sleep in late like I wanted to on a day like this. The last couple of nights had been spent living it up with the guys, celebrating before we went on our nationwide tour, and it had all decided to hit me last night. I'd slept for a good ten, eleven hours in an uncomfortable bed in a hotel room, but I felt like I could sleep even longer. However, Jackson had us out of bed at noon so we could prepare for our first gig of the tour. This was a big day for all of us, and we had quite a bit to do if we wanted tonight to start us off with a big bang.

After a few cups of coffee to kickstart my system and a light breakfast courtesy of room service (and a couple of hours of getting our s**t together that we'd somehow scattered around the room), Jackson had us checked out of the hotel and on the tour bus that we would be living in for the next few months. Sure, it wasn't the absolute best, but it was more than enough for four males that would be perfectly content living in a rathole. It beat driving around in Matt's car, with a trailer hooked to the back for our instruments, from place to place. Anyway, we'd get dressed and whatnot when we got to the venue, before sound check. Wait a second... when was sound check again?

Luckily, Jeremy blurted out the very question on my mind. "Yo, Jackson! When are we due for sound check?" We all heard something along the lines of seven o'clock, and then we were finally off on a four-hour drive to our destination.


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It was about five pm when we arrived at the back of the building, and already, there was a line starting to form out front. Mostly kids our age, but there were a few younger and older ones scattered throughout the line. It warmed my heart a little to see that people were waiting in line to see... well, my best friends and me. Before I could drown myself in my thoughts, I felt a firm hand clap on my shoulder, and Zach was looking at me, all bright brown eyes and a matching grin. "C'mon, Li, get pumped! It's our first show of the tour; we've gotta bring it!"

A half-grin crept to my lips as I got to my feet and replied, "Yeah, man, I know. I'm just as excited as you, don't worry. I just... don't show it as much. You should know that by now." The four of us filed out of the bus and through the back door of the venue, Jackson was already in the dressing room, no doubt a little peeved at us for taking a little longer than he'd have liked us to, but he didn't look much like it when we opened the door without many people noticing our arrival. The bouncers were definitely doing their jobs.

[ingénue]

Username: Hello, I am Philanthropy,. Call me Philly.
What You'd Like Help With: From semi literate to literate, a little coding help, how to make my forms nicer and things like that and how to make my characters more realistic and believable.
Preferred Instructor: No preferred instructor. c:
Activity or Time Zone: I am on usually for four to five hours each day, I usually respond fast. I am in Australian Eastern Standard Time but I can work with anything.
Sample of Writing: From a 1x1;

ｂｒｏｏｋｌｙｎ ａｌｉｃｅ ｊｏｈｎｓｏｎ
mood; →Bored, tired, doing; →At Alex's, outfit; → ~.

→ → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → → →

Brooklyn rolled onto her side, the unpleasant rays of the sun shone into her eyes as she slowly opened them. "Ugh, Morning Alex" she yawned, feeling particularly bad this morning as she rolled out of her position and placing her two sock covered feet on the carpet. She groaned, wiping the sleep from her eyes and grabbing yoga pants and a white tee from her duffel bag and trudge into the bathroom, in a hunch. She got dressed and walked out, poking Alex's shoulder as she lay in bed. "Alex, I could really go for a coffee" she muttered, having a certain taste for it this morning. She awaited Alex's response and sat on the spare bed Alex's mum had lay out for her yesterday. She replayed the past events in her head, trying to push them out, she just couldn't get the blonde's face out of her head. "Ugh." she groaned, lightly punching her head as if it would help get rid of the thought, her cheeks turning a dark shade of pink as her mind kept pushing the image into focus.

[rose;]

Philly- I can sorta help with stuff like that.
If you just want me to give critique on a character, I can do that, but I'm not good at explaining from nothing xD
And I can help pretty well with coding.