Artist Army {old thread}

[dddddonuts]

I'd like some critique on this and this. ^^ Thank you

[Calix]

Shimmer- I doubt we can critique the first second one since it was eyeballed so heavily. For the first one, try to use more consistent shading. But you really shouldn't eyeball other people's drawings, it's considered art theft if I'm not mistaken.

[dddddonuts]

Shimmer- I doubt we can critique the first one since it was eyeballed so heavily. For the first one, try to use more consistent shading. But you really shouldn't eyeball other people's drawings, it's considered art theft if I'm not mistaken.

The first is a pencil... o.o

The second one was an avatar I found on the internet, then I Googled it and found a bigger version.

[Calix]

Whoops, my bad. I meant the second is eyeballed heavily. Sorry, I literally just woke up xD

[dddddonuts]

Whoops, my bad. I meant the second is eyeballed heavily. Sorry, I literally just woke up xD

Me too, s'okay :3

[KenmilltoSky]

Can anyone help me with this again? :3
I've already had one redline that is very helpful, but I could really do with some techniques with the hair. I'm really sturggling to make it look realistic. =D

@NotMe I know the problem with the hair but I don't know how to fix it. D:

Can anyone help? =]

[Calix]

Can anyone help me with this again? :3
I've already had one redline that is very helpful, but I could really do with some techniques with the hair. I'm really sturggling to make it look realistic. =D

@NotMe I know the problem with the hair but I don't know how to fix it. D:

Can anyone help? =]

I think you could do with darker shading.
Also, you can fix her hair by making the 'part' smaller? I think her neck also might be a little too big, maybe make her eyelashes thinner.
Otherwise I think it's gorgeous :3 I love her eyes and lips, I can never get either right. I envy your talent in drawing people :3

[Duh]

Streaming.

School was cancelled due to flooding, and I have t ostay home and watch a bunch of animals and two little boys since part of town was evacuated and we have people who need to stay with us.
So I'm drawing random creatures that don't exist anywhere but in my head in impossible poses to cope. ouo-b

Done

[lululizzy23]

http://www.livestream.com/lululizzy23?t=209823
Streaming and I promise it'll be something different! :D

[The_Tide_Keeper]

Can anyone help me with this again? :3
I've already had one redline that is very helpful, but I could really do with some techniques with the hair. I'm really sturggling to make it look realistic. =D

@NotMe I know the problem with the hair but I don't know how to fix it. D:

Can anyone help? =]

It looks nice, I like that you went with realistic tones. If it were me, (anatomy wise) I would stop the neck a little bit below the mole and just let it be a head shot, or trim off some of the neck so it's a little straighter. You wrote that you all ready have a red line so I'll leave anatomy at that.

With the hair, color over the part in it completely or until it's a very narrow line. You can define it by using a dark line, or by letting all of the highlights seem to flow from that point. I would say that the high lights in the hair are the main problem, since they're short and choppy it changes the texture of the hair. It might help to erase them and go with a few longer lines. It would also help to use multiple shades of brown in the hair, instead of two tones. For example, have the base color, and then add high lights, and then add brighter highlights to a few points and then shadows. On top of the brown, a white shine might help (probably closer to the part) since there is a bright light reflected in the eyes . Sorry if this doesn't make since lol, but I hope it helps a little.

Edited because I made a mistake on the anatomy X3