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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Fri Jan 20, 2012 4:57 pm

NotMe wrote:If Susi takes Alex's human skills can I have HER human skills? Anything is better than mine |D

Amg, you guys are awesome. Susi' it looks a bit like the black shirted dude's arm is coming out of nowhere, |D
Not sure how you'd fix that though. Neck should be a bit shorted on the lighter shirted male, and I think the mouths might be to wide, but I'm not sure.


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Perhaps, Not, perhaps. *serious chin rub*

Omg, I know, his arm is like retarded in this. OTL
And their heads are just overall huge, so I don't doubt his neck looks long xDD -- I have always had issues with making people have too large of heads. It's getting better slowly. lD
And mouths. I HATE drawing human mouths, omg. I redraw the mouths more than anything else when I draw people, sadly. OTL
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Re: Artist Army

Postby maetropa » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:01 pm

Good because I promise I'll put your skills to good use because I have some characters that need art of I mean those poor males I have with no art because I can only find female editables >:

Ahem, yeah^
Mouths are horrible horrible things, but so are HANDS
Actually, the hands look rather well in your picture^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:04 pm

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    a good redline would be nice o3o

    crit please o3o
    noone has so far^^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby maetropa » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:07 pm

@Ora;
Oops, must'a missed it~
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Dammit Ora I can't see anything to critique so.. umm..
Green dog looks a bit floppy with his back?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:11 pm

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:Image
    a good redline would be nice o3o

    crit please o3o
    noone has so far^^

//whoops accidentally posted without writing anything xD

I think the paws look a bit awkward on the white one, like they're not on a surface...?
Sorry, I'm not explaining very well at all right now. OTL
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Alexander White » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:20 pm

the right arm on the black clothed dude.cannot come that far unless the dudes are flat, which they are because its a 2d plane but you want to give them some pretend depth. i tried to draw the eyes in a way where you might draw them. and i don't know if you want to but i think circles on noses give noses a lot more depth, which is why i use them
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:32 pm

FTTT< thank you so much for the redline, Alex, it is greatly appreciated! < 33
I kept thinking that the arm looked retarded as I drew it-- I'll try to imagine the depth a little more realistically next time. xDD

And I may have to try that circle thing. : O
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DoctorDraca » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:40 pm

Ah, Alex. It's great seeing you around here again. I'll have to go check out those sketches on tumblr when I get back home. It's nice to see some more realistic anatomy around.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:48 pm

    they aren't really on a surface, i was going for something odd and spaclesssssss....

    is that it for crits? XD
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Re: Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Fri Jan 20, 2012 5:49 pm

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
    they aren't really on a surface, i was going for something odd and spaclesssssss....

    is that it for crits? XD

Well, the other one looks like the paws are on the surface.
But other than that, no, it looks adorable to me. x3
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