Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[Ico]

@asian to the knee

Thank you so much! ^o^

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Username: Derpy c:

What You'd Like Help With: ipod touch help, illiterate to literate and form making ouo

Preferred Instructor: Smamm, change; (her) and an asian to the knee

Activity or Time Zone: I am almost everday, the whole day XD
Sample of Writing:

[size=120]Neanne

{ meadow || shewolf || crushless|| Testing }

You've waited for this your whole life, and you're not going to walk back

The wolf continued walking peacefully with her ears flicked paying attention to every single sound, as well as making sure she didn't made any. She was being very excited, but she was left behind. She could run very fast, but she prefered to save the energy that was still in her body. She slowly started to realize the little cold in the air, but the other 3 wolves apparently noticed it way before her, and started to shake. Remembering the harsh winters from where she was from, and the very thick layer of fur protected her body, she didn't felt anything but a little wind.

Some dark clouds started to whirl up at the once blue sky. She glanced over to the sky, she loved rain. It was a good water resource, and made grass and plants grow. That made food, such as rabbits and deers get out of their shelters. But, apparently Ross didn't liked rain at all, or did as well didn't care.

But whatever. Neanne took a look at him, reading his eyes, and all of the sudden, she stopped trotting. 'I want to be a hunter, if any of you wanted to know.' Her voice called, hearing the crunching drying leves. Not that someone cared, anyway. And Nea wasn't nervous anymore, thought as continued padding. More like... confident. The reason she had picked that rank; she was too clumsy and prefered the calm of the forest. But she would not back off a fight. It wasn't one of her strong points, and didn't liked it at all. Why die on such a stupid thing?

Nea looked at the other three wolves, and started to try and see what they were like. The alpha was strong. Ross was a respected wolf, and the other... What could she be?

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[eden .]

dear students of asian to knee,

I'm super sorry I haven't replied. if you haven't noticed, writing has consumed me for the month of november. and because of exams that are coming up next month, expect very slow responses.
I'm not trying to hold you back. I would totally understand if you wanted to switch to a new teacher.

asian

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Username: Derpy c:

What You'd Like Help With: ipod touch help, illiterate to literate and form making ouo

Preferred Instructor: Smamm, change; (her) and an asian to the knee

Activity or Time Zone: I am almost everday, the whole day XD
Sample of Writing:

[size=120]Neanne

{ meadow || shewolf || crushless|| Testing }

You've waited for this your whole life, and you're not going to walk back

The wolf continued walking peacefully with her ears flicked paying attention to every single sound, as well as making sure she didn't made any. She was being very excited, but she was left behind. She could run very fast, but she prefered to save the energy that was still in her body. She slowly started to realize the little cold in the air, but the other 3 wolves apparently noticed it way before her, and started to shake. Remembering the harsh winters from where she was from, and the very thick layer of fur protected her body, she didn't felt anything but a little wind.

Some dark clouds started to whirl up at the once blue sky. She glanced over to the sky, she loved rain. It was a good water resource, and made grass and plants grow. That made food, such as rabbits and deers get out of their shelters. But, apparently Ross didn't liked rain at all, or did as well didn't care.

But whatever. Neanne took a look at him, reading his eyes, and all of the sudden, she stopped trotting. 'I want to be a hunter, if any of you wanted to know.' Her voice called, hearing the crunching drying leves. Not that someone cared, anyway. And Nea wasn't nervous anymore, thought as continued padding. More like... confident. The reason she had picked that rank; she was too clumsy and prefered the calm of the forest. But she would not back off a fight. It wasn't one of her strong points, and didn't liked it at all. Why die on such a stupid thing?

Nea looked at the other three wolves, and started to try and see what they were like. The alpha was strong. Ross was a respected wolf, and the other... What could she be?

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Go ahead and Pm me, darling!

[team free kick sass]

it wouldn't be terrible if I put a link to the club in my siggy even tho I'm not a teacher, right? cx

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it wouldn't be terrible if I put a link to the club in my siggy even tho I'm not a teacher, right? cx

no! of course not
I had a friend and she had linked here a few times in her siggy ^^

[seattle]

Username: otterr
What You'd Like Help With: Writing more, adding more detail, character forms, things to write~
A lot of peoples' character forms are really long and well thought out. It's like they never run out of things to say! Mine, however, are quite the opposite. They're short but not so sweet, kind of choppy and they jump from topic to topic. I don't know how to make things flow, & I always run out of things to write. I just don't know how to keep going. D:
I want to go from semi-literate to literate, also. But I have the same problem as above- I just don't know what else to write.
Preferred Instructor: It really doesn't matter. :3 I'd be thrilled with any help at all<3
Activity or Time Zone: Eastern Standard Time
Sample of Writing:

Aidon closed his eyes, listening to the sweet music of Mozart. Glancing down at his phone, he nearly choked on his gum when he saw what time it was. Yanking out his headphones, he picked up his violin case and rushed down the stairs, out the door and into his car. He went a little above the speed limit, 30 when it was 25, but it didn't matter because no one was on the streets. Aidon blinked as he glanced around the community, everything white with snow. He smiled. This was his favorite time of year, where everything was so peaceful. Aidon shook the thoughts out of his head to look for Dani on a park bench. When he found her, she immediately got up as he slowed down to a stop. He sighed, knowing he would hear and earful for being late. He unlocked the doors and she hopped in, slamming the door.
"'Sup, D?"
A small smirk played on her face. "I'll tell you what's up. Your butt once I'm through with you."
Aidon laughed, turning to head towards the duck pond. That was his favorite place.
He turned to Dani, who was unusually silent. The reason was now obvious as he glanced at his surrounding; they were driving past a cemetery.
He knew that Dani was a very superstitious person. Whenever they drove over railroad tracks, she would take her feet off of the bottom of the car. Whenever she drove into a tunnel, she would always lay a hand on the top of the roof of the car. And when they drove past a cemetery, she held her breath.
Why she did any of these things Aidon had no idea. She would never tell him, so he just shrugged it off.
They pulled into the parking lot of the pond, hearing Dani exhale loudly.
"What were you doing now?" she asked him, both hopping out of the car. Aidon unlocked the trunk and pulled out his violin, Dani holding a bag of bread.
"Thinking."
"Apparently not about your priorities."
Aidon let out a small laugh as they headed up the trail. Dani got out a slice of bread and broke it into pieces, throwing it out to the water as a flock of ducks swam over to it, squabbling about like small children. She giggled at them. Aidon smiled. Dani loved ducks.
Clicking the case shut, he rosined up his bow and started playing "Jingle Bells." Dani bobbed her head back and forth to the tune, snow falling lightly across Aidon's hair.

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@ otterr -

Feel free to pm me for forms!

[Snow Eevee]

Username: SailorMoon&MiniMoon(Please, just call me Rini or Kitty or Mango)
What You'd Like Help With: There are several things I need help with and I've listed them below
*Maintaining a Roleplay
*Taking that step from Semi-Literate to Literate
*Developing your own Form
Preferred Instructor: Anyone who can help me will work ^_^
Activity or Time Zone: I'm not sure of my time zone... I live in the USA. And I am on everyday, as much as I can get on which is pretty often
Sample of Writing: This is from one of my 1x1 rps:

She rolled her eyes at his overdramatic sigh. "Whatever." She muttered, straightening up and giving him a passing glance. "If you really wanna follow me the choice is yours. But I have work to do." She turned and walked out of the room, wanting him to just stay put. In the silence, she reflected upon what her sister had said. She realized that, if anything, Eloise had been right on one account. Darcianna was notorious for her hard work. Oftentimes if she was not busy in the Stables, she was off practicing with Ebony. She herself didn't understand why the younger dragons trusted her so completely, but it allowed her to work closely at training them as well. In fact, several of the older dragons even went so far as to allow her to ride them from time to time. Perhaps it was because of the hours she spent in the stables that made the dragons think of her as one of them, but nevertheless, it was a place she was accepted.

Caught up in her musing and pondering, she didn't see the boy until she bumped into him. Malcolm, her fifth cousin on her father's side, leered down at her with a dangerous light in his eyes. Darcianna despised Malcolm with all of her being. He was a total creep, and had tried-on numerous occasions-to win her hand. Refusing to show her unease, she lifted her chin and scowled at him. "I didn't realize you were back in town, Malcolm." She growled and he smiled slyly.
"My dearest cousin, of course I am here. I am your father's favorite nephew and he asked me to attend dinner tonight." He said, inclining his head as he studied her.
"Oh joy... well if you'll excuse me, I have work to do and can't afford to be interrupted." She said firmly, attempting to step around him. Undeterred, Malcolm slid back into her path.
"Now, what kind of greeting is that, m'dear, for your cousin?" He inquired, leaning closer. She drew away from him and uttered an oath when her back bumped the wall.

Malcolm's eyes possitively lit up and he stepped even closer, planting a hand on either side of her head. "Why don't you give me a proper greeting, Darcianna?" He purred, and she felt queasy just thinking about his underlying meaning.
"Don't call me that Malcolm. My name is Darcy." She said, then a sly smile crossed her face and she leaned closer until her mouth was near his ear. "I'll give you a proper welcome." She purred silkily, resting her hands lightly on his shoulders. Lightning quick, she jerked her knee up and slammed in into his groin, pushing him back as he doubled over, wheezing.
"Don't you EVER get that close to me again, Malcolm, or I swear I'll let Emma eat you." She snapped. As if by magic, the Hellhound seemed to materialize beside the pair. Emma's hackles rose and her head lowered, her lips pulling back to reveal razor sharp teeth. Malcolm let out a girlish shriek and stumbled back, away from the dog.

"Alright, Darcy, OK!!! I get it. Just call your freaky demon dog off!" He begged as Emma prowled closer, a low snarl rising in her throat. He whimpered, pressing himself into a ball and staring at the dog with wide terrified eyes. "I'll leave you be, I swear!!! Just call off the mutt!" He was sobbing like a baby and, with a sigh, Darcy let out a sharp whistle. Emma froze, ears pricked, and glanced at her, looking like all she wanted to do was rip into the boy. "Come, Emma." She said and the dog whined as she padded over to her owner.

[OrangeNeon]

Username: Yazmin
What You'd Like Help With: Probably sentence structure and run-on sentences.
Preferred Instructor: Anyone is fine with me!
Activity or Time Zone: I'm usually on 6-7 hours thanks to my tablet. On weekends even more. My time zone is Central.
Sample of Writing:

[size=85]Aiden sat on a old bench outside of the school, looking carelessly at his phone. He had loads of homework, which he should have been working on. Of course he wasn't though. Besides, he could just finish it later. That is, if he actually remembered he had homework, which he often didn't. His grades were good anyway though.
Sliding his phone back in his pocket, he gathered all his stuff and put it in his worn, used backpack. He stood up, hefted the backpack onto his back, and started to head toward his home. This was far away though, he lived on the edge of town. Sort of in the country, you could say. Not really if you thought about it.
Aiden winced slightly as he stepped on his bad ankle, the one he had sprained in gym yesterday. It was swollen to touch, and was blue and black. He'd had bad sprains before, so he knew this was normal. Hopefully it'd get better soon though. Hockey was going to start soon, and he didn't want to miss his favorite sport.
Out of nowhere, he felt something slam into the back of his head. The next thing he knew, he was on the ground, groaning pain. With hands clutched to the back of his head, he rolled onto his back. A person was looming over him, and suddenly pushed something into his face. The air filled with a sick medicine smell, and the world went black.

Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have: None that I own.

Sorry about that post earlier![/size]