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Re: The Artist Army

Postby kirill » Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:46 am

kat754 wrote:@WazzinGator- I love the wolf and the tree. I love the style you used on the tree!
@Neelix- Aww, he's soo cute <3

I just drew this on paper. The scanner scanned it all lopsided, though...
Any comments and Crit, even redlines are appreciated! :D Thanks! :D
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby mawsoleum » Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:56 am

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Kitsune I just started to sketch, not anywhere near done:
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And that bird thing, I finished and fixed it. c:
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Never got anything on the sketch, re-posting.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby emberonis » Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:29 am

Koiyote wrote:
Koiyote wrote:
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Kitsune I just started to sketch, not anywhere near done:
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And that bird thing, I finished and fixed it. c:
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Never got anything on the sketch, re-posting.


The face seems a little too thin, but that could just be my opinion. =3

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Calix » Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:28 am

mistywren- That shading is lovely <3 Sorry to hear your day wasn't good D: I love the ears though <3

Blu Winter- Overall the anatomy looks good, but the whiskers should connect with the face instead of hovering. For your 'Nature's Essence' picture, the chest is far too small and the leg in the distance is much too small. Also, the snout is too long and narrow.

She-Hound- That's adorable <3 I love the design and the concept ^^

Ivalynfyre- The legs are much too thin to support him. But I love his face, I can't wait to see it finished ^^

☣ тσηу ѕтαяк ☣- Try adding some darker shading. Make sure to shade with reddish/tan tones, not greys/blacks. Also, try making her eyelashes thicker at the base of her eye and thin as they extend.

kat754- The image is broken for me?

Koiyote- I think the snout is a little too long, but it might just be me ^^; The ears and paws and eyes are absolutely lovely <3

Neelix- The wings are a bit..misshapen? Try using the tutorial for bird wings on the front page ^^

Sorry to minimod, but remember to comment on everything in the last ten posts, not just the person who posted above you ^^;

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby rheia » Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:34 am

Calix wrote:☣ тσηу ѕтαяк ☣- Try adding some darker shading. Make sure to shade with reddish/tan tones, not greys/blacks. Also, try making her eyelashes thicker at the base of her eye and thin as they extend.

    I haven't actually done any shading. xD

    Your image looks lovely. <3 I utterly adore how you did the antlers.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby plum » Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:00 am

She-Hound wrote:
Ivalynfyre wrote:@She-Hound I like the bunny, it's really cute. although it still looks like snake food to me


IVALYN! [Hope its okay if I call you that ^^"] XD Pftt! Phygment eats snakes. >.>

Very nice drawing, though! ^^


Thank you! And, touche.

@Calix - I LOVE ANTLERS
You deserve a cookie, those antlers are awesome. I can't wait until I get the the 'Guardian' portion of my god series, there's this one character with a pair of 'em that I love to draw.
Yeah, the legs are really there to make him look cooler/weirder. His back legs would be the ones supporting most of his weight, anyways, but I didn't really bother twisting his body to show them.

@Koiyote - The neck looks a little short to me, although I've been drawing long-necked creatures recently, so I might be wrong. I like it though, the tall, pointed ears are something I love~

@Neelix - That's an unusual thing to draw, armadillos are pretty cool though, I like the purple wings you added on.

@mistywren - the eyesss. They really draw me in! I've never been able to draw equine eyes. o3o

I essentially finished the full god drawing. I'll return to it and tweak some things, but, yeah, it's done for now.
Here are some pictures before I did the details on Videa(the canine creature)'s tail, and did Deus(the elongated creature)'s tail and back spikes:
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Bℓυ ωιитєя » Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:12 am

Calix wrote:I just finished this commission, I'd love some critique or comments on it ^^
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I love the colors and shading and the overall appeal of the drawing. but there is quite a few anatomy problems. The snout is angled down to far and much to short, and the ears to rounded and stumped, almost like bear ears. Your paws are spectacular but the body is a little to short.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Yuki. » Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:26 am

Calix, it may just be me, but does something seem wrong with the paws? They look off. The snout is too short. Great drawing overall


I need fast help. I'm trying to get this animation done, but I need a good program. I don't care if it's a free trial and such as long as it offers me enough tools for an enexperienced beginner to make a short fifteen second animation drawn digitally. Anyone have any favorites? Fast replies please ^^ Thanks
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Bℓυ ωιитєя » Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:47 am

Gimp, use Gimp, there is a few good tutorials on animating with gimp on deviantart. I use and paint, and window movie maker and also occasionally photoshop. infact I created this just last night.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RHGzCubKssk

Calix I managed to pin point the problem, the front legs are to short and the paws to big.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:49 am

Calix wrote:mistywren- That shading is lovely <3 Sorry to hear your day wasn't good D: I love the ears though <3

Blu Winter- Overall the anatomy looks good, but the whiskers should connect with the face instead of hovering. For your 'Nature's Essence' picture, the chest is far too small and the leg in the distance is much too small. Also, the snout is too long and narrow.

She-Hound- That's adorable <3 I love the design and the concept ^^

Ivalynfyre- The legs are much too thin to support him. But I love his face, I can't wait to see it finished ^^

☣ тσηу ѕтαяк ☣- Try adding some darker shading. Make sure to shade with reddish/tan tones, not greys/blacks. Also, try making her eyelashes thicker at the base of her eye and thin as they extend.

kat754- The image is broken for me?

Koiyote- I think the snout is a little too long, but it might just be me ^^; The ears and paws and eyes are absolutely lovely <3

Neelix- The wings are a bit..misshapen? Try using the tutorial for bird wings on the front page ^^

Sorry to minimod, but remember to comment on everything in the last ten posts, not just the person who posted above you ^^;

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the dew claw is on the outside of the front paw closest to us, it shouldn't be.
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