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[Temperance.]

He suits me so well <3 I'm really hoping I manage to snag him. I'm kinda worried that my story is going to be too long, and I don't wanna bore Benathorn with some crazy long story...I dunno, anyone feel like reading my form over and giving me some feedback/telling me how boring it is?

Hahahaha thanks XD Yesh, if I don't win him I'll be watching his every move too.

Yes, The Doctor is smexy <333

[~Soul~]

Ashwyn let me give you some advise that my 9th grade english teacher once gave me. An essay has to be like a Striper Skirt, long enough to to cover the subject and short enough to keep you interested. idk if that helps but thats how i write my essays and i never forget the saying >.<

[Temperance.]

Lol, I like that actually, very funny.
But...I don't want to shorten his personality really, I had so much muse for him....I dunno.
Can't make up my mind XD

Thats clever though, I'll be using that saying.

[Jendalie]

You don't have to ever worry about a story being too long Ashwyn, we love reading! (:

~Soul~ that has got to be the best writing advice I have ever heard! ;D

[Temperance.]

Okay good XD
I dunno, I haven't had a chance to write a nice long, meaty, entry for an adoptable in FOREVER. All the places I've been frequenting like it short and sweet. Or don't want stories at all. So I really enjoyed myself this time, glad to see that it won't matter ^-^

I'd still love some critique on mine though, if that's allowed and anyone is willing to help out.

Indeed. I wish my teachers came up with epic analogies and advice like that XD

[~Soul~]

lol yeah but then again muse is good

lol and thanks Jendalie i was a fade iffy about posting it not knowing what people would think but it dose help! XD

[zacherie]

xDD Soul, you gotta tell your teacher that it's the best advice I've ever heard. that's just too funny xD

Hmm, I did want to read your form... Off to reading! -wooshes off-

EDIT;;
Done reading! Ashwyn. what were you talking about. that was not boring. That was...just. one of the most thorough forms I have ever read. His personality was mapped really well and I love how you gave little snips of his life where that part of his personality was revealed. it was exciting. I love it! ^^
You should finish that story some day. And if I'm not being a lazybum today, I might think of...a lil' surprise for you xD

[Merlin's Heir]

Looking for an exceptionally beautiful girl to breed with Niquenaro, my Frost Rune. Please PM me if you want to breed your Rune (female only) with Naro.

[~Soul~]

I would Whisper but i don't have a free female AniDori is still to young for that

[Temperance.]

EDIT;;
Done reading! Ashwyn. what were you talking about. that was not boring. That was...just. one of the most thorough forms I have ever read. His personality was mapped really well and I love how you gave little snips of his life where that part of his personality was revealed. it was exciting. I love it! ^^
You should finish that story some day. And if I'm not being a lazybum today, I might think of...a lil' surprise for you xD

Awwww thank-you so much <333
That really means a lot to me, I worked pretty hard on it and had a lot of fun :3
He's a pleasure to write with, and I've fallen head over heels in love with him.
Thanks again, I like writing personalities that way, fun for me and more enjoyable for the reader I think.

Hahaha I'm glad you liked it <3 And awwww <3 You're so nice :3