//I haven't had much time on the computer today so I didn't get a chance to respond to everyone, but I love all the costumes to far, I'm a sucker for creativity when it comes to costumes, I love seeing what you all can come up with! <3
satyn wrote:I'd like some feedback on my form. First of all, my pet is dressing up as something that might make religious people uncomfortable? I'm hoping it's not. My pet is a demon, but of no specific kind.
Secondly, I was wondering if a pet cat would be considered as a companion while trick or treating, and therefore, not allowed.
The moon cast a fine glow through Cosette's bedroom window as she stared out with pupil less orbs. Of course, they were fake - it was all part of her costume for Halloween!
"I should've practiced putting these in more often," the canine muttered, blinking rapidly at the feel of the white contacts encasing her visible eye. Replacing her grimace with a bright grin, she continued putting her accessories on. Red streaks dyed her long dark hair and dark gray ram horns lay strapped to her forehead. This year, she was planning on being an ominous demon, complete with a scythe. To complete the look, Cosette was bringing her black cat, Pepper.
"This is going to be great!" Cosette squealed, quickly snatching a pillowcase and beckoning Pepper to follow her out the door.
Outside, the canine's ears perked up at the sound of murmurs and excited chatter of other trick-or-treaters in the distance. Stars twinkled above, and the Halloween décor made the whole scene look magical. Deciding to roam around wherever her paws took her, Cosette padded along the sidewalk until she chose a random house to walk up to. The grass under her coal-colored paws made her nerves tingle as she clutched her pillowcase tight, with Pepper not too far behind.
Walking up to the lit home, Cosette extended an arm and rapped on the door. Puffing up her chest, she mustered a breath before yelling out,
"Trick or treat!"
We tend to get plenty of demon/demonic dressups and I've never seen anyone take offense to it, I have a feeling anyone who would, wouldn't really be interested in playing a Halloween-based game since they would also likely have obligations to Halloween itself. Of course that may vary from person to person, but its never been a problem before so you should need to worry about it.
Anyway, your story and costume look great! The cat is fine, we only count pet items as an additional trick or treater if they are intelligent in the story and specifically trick or treating with your pet.
starkiller, wrote:
Hello everyone! This is my first time actally reading into LOLO! I saw some people doing it last year, and I had no clue what it was.
Now that I know what it is and how to play, I just wanted some feedback on my costume. Is it recognizable?
I don't really have many items that go well together, so I hope this is good enough! c:
(Criticism is definitely allowed!)
You should probably say somewhere in your story exactly what it is since this isn't a costume that would be immediately recognizable as a common costume (or common way of doing a costume). For instance if someone were doing a vampire usually its fairly easy to tell as long as they have included things we typically relate t vampires, aka, fangs, dark cloaks, maybe some red contacts thrown in there, etc. If I had to hazard a guess at this one I'd say it looks along the lines of angelic or even like a goddess type dress up, which could count as complete, just as long as you let us know what it is in the story. Hopefully that makes sense! I love how it looks so far though! And if you do feel your costume needs more but you don't have the items, I more than happy to help out providing a few extras to complete it.
