The Artist Army

[~K-9]

My latest drawing... Vampi inspired me, so I had to draw something. Armadillo time! It's in no way finished, but crits and redlines are welcome.

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That, my dear friend, is adorable! But like its said, it looks like its hanging...Maybe you can draw a little girl or boy holding it?



OK so, I'll have lots of art soon! I'll need critiques XD

[calippygian]

whoa, Zinga, that tree is magnificent <3
i have no crit
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i drew my chibi character, Mocha. she is a fennec fox neko
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i want the sketchy part, and i will fix her face later

but, do you guys have any crits or pointers for me?

Thank you so much! <3

That is adorable, I love the squishiness of the pillow! xD
The only thing I notice is that the ears look like they're behind the head and the placement of the left ear definitely looks a little off. Think of the head as a sphere rather than a circle and bring it forward. c:

Funsized, I have much experience with nekos, so here is some tips. For example, a fox or a cats ears isn't that ight up. Many persons might think so, but if you want her to look more animal-like and less human-like, you should make them lower down. Also, try making the tail even fluffier as it is a fox. But it is a cyoot drawing!

thankyou both!, and yah i realized that as i was looking at fennec images |D but i was halfway through the shading when i realized, and was too lazy to fix it. i will more than likely make her a real reference sheet and fix those anatomy parts.

thankyou!

@ funsized - aww *^* How cute ! x3 Maybe the ears not that pointy ? :3

i was able, though, to fix that part, since you wouldnt see much of a poor shading change. so thankyou!

my finished product! (click for full-view :3)

[Veins Of Opal]

@Neelix; Ohmigosh, Armadillo! It's cute. c:
@Zinga; I do like the tree. c: It looks great to me!
@Funsized; I adore your shading skills! It's wonderful~!

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So, i am doing a livestream of my character, Daniel. Tips on shading will be GREATLY appreciated! Shading is one of my worst areas., especially hair. >.< Anyways, here's the stream- https://join.me/268-668-465

Livestream is done with, thank you to those that came! c:

[Shiko Hayashi]

Unfortunately, none of the above pictures shown I can see due to some firewalls on my computer.
On another, more brighter note, what do you guys think? Minus the crappy background and randomly put words, how does Cross look?
He's my precious boy. He's probably the only character that's ever really hung around. I've had him since I was... Oh I don't know... 8 years old. So a pretty long time.

[calippygian]

Unfortunately, none of the above pictures shown I can see due to some firewalls on my computer.
On another, more brighter note, what do you guys think? Minus the crappy background and randomly put words, how does Cross look?
He's my precious boy. He's probably the only character that's ever really hung around. I've had him since I was... Oh I don't know... 8 years old. So a pretty long time.

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i love your human skills! especially the hair, i can never seem to get it right |D and also the mouth <3

i draw realistic/anime humans horribly, but i learned some anatomy rules in my art class that may help. but still, take my crit slightly, i may not know what im talking about XD

crit: remember that humans need a bottom jaw line, his chin looks a bit pointed. also, remember that humans can fit five whole eyes across thier head, maybe his eyes are too long or thin? raising his eyebrows and thickening them would make them more realistic too. the inner corners of the eyes should line up vertically with his nostrils, but since i cant see them i can assume they are there |D

your neck anatomy is much better than mine, and i see no faults in it, so i have not crit for that XD


overall, very awesome! much better than what i can ever do, and i love the different colored shading! it gives it a nice effect <3

[~K-9]

Unfortunately, none of the above pictures shown I can see due to some firewalls on my computer.
On another, more brighter note, what do you guys think? Minus the crappy background and randomly put words, how does Cross look?
He's my precious boy. He's probably the only character that's ever really hung around. I've had him since I was... Oh I don't know... 8 years old. So a pretty long time.

That's really cool :3 I honestly can say that I find nothing to critique XD


Realistic-ish eye (Critique needed!)
My fursona, a coyote/wolf hybrid thing XD (Critique please! Especially for the mechanical parts! And could somebody PLEASE Redline?)
Wolf Practice (Critique? Possible Redline?

[Shiko Hayashi]

Thanks guys.


It's anime style, so there are huge lacking things between realism and my picture. Like the pointed chin.
But your right. It is a bit too pointed, and his eyes could probably be a bit lower.

[Veins Of Opal]

I already critiqued in my earlier post, so let me get straight to the point. c:

Finished up my Livestream, and this is what I churned out;


I know his abs aren't quite right. DX But, I did better with the shading this time, I think. c:

[mawsoleum]

Silent- I'm not good with people, but I think that looks pretty good! His abs may be a little small, but if they're made bigger I think it would be perfect. I like him! :D

~K-9- I have a redline for the coyotewolf here. It's a bit messy, but hopefully you can see my anatomy. Blue is for back legs. I couldn't do the mechanical part, my hand was not working. But either way, even a mechanical leg should follow what the real leg looks like.
I went with a more coyote-like redline since you said in the description that it favoured a coyote.

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Kitsune I just started to sketch, not anywhere near done:
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And that bird thing, I finished and fixed it. c:
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[~K-9]

Silent- I'm not good with people, but I think that looks pretty good! His abs may be a little small, but if they're made bigger I think it would be perfect. I like him!

~K-9- I have a redline for the coyotewolf here. It's a bit messy, but hopefully you can see my anatomy. Blue is for back legs. I couldn't do the mechanical part, my hand was not working. But either way, even a mechanical leg should follow what the real leg looks like.
I went with a more coyote-like redline since you said in the description that it favoured a coyote.

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Kitsune I just started to sketch, not anywhere near done:
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And that bird thing, I finished and fixed it. c:
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Thanks! I'm just absolutely in love with the ears I drew though XD