★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

[Simonpet]

So I'm starting to write the post in which Acornstream and Bramblebush die, and I would like to submit what I've written for review. This is just the start of the section but it's all I wrote, so please don't comment on the "title." But comment on everything else. c: A teensy bit of backstory: Dustleaf is one of Acornstream's four kits and she, along with Crowcloud, are the medicine cats of Forestclan.

It had been a peaceful morning when Acornstream and Bramblebush had succumbed to their infected injuries. Dustleaf had woken on a hunch and when she went to check on her patients, found that both were barely warm. Crowcloud found her sitting and swaying, mouth open in a silent yowl of pain. While medicine cats were supposed to focus on the larger picture, he understood just how hard the death of her father would be for he too, felt grief. He had known Acornstream for many seasons and he remembered the first few moons, how Acornstream had courted Duckpelt, when the two became mates and had their litter, and the rapid growth of the clan since then. It was hard to believe that the lively and paternal tom was gone. Just like that. Without even a goodbye.

"May you find peace in Starclan," Crowcloud murmured.

[utena]

oooh my goodness, what a cute birthday cat ;o; thank you so much!!

[Katrione]

@Simon
I like it! It's really well written and the little bit you showed made me a bit sad so I'm sure the rest of the post will as well. (that's my goal with most of my posts, idk if that's your goal )


@Anyone
You have no idea how sad it made me when I started making a new Echoclan post and had to remove Squirrel and replace her with Ragged


Also, I'm kinda not happy with the formatting on my archive. Does anyone have any suggestions to make it look nicer?

[Katrione]

Can I have feedback on my most recent post?

[hazilnut]

@deimos

!! Thank you!! Your words mean a lot to me! I really loved how the leaders got their lives in the books too, it was interesting how different values had this distinct and physical feeling to them. I think my favorite bit had been the life of love (I think that was it? Or protection) which was abnormally fierce.

@simonpet

Ooh I like what you have so far! As terrible as it is I find it interesting how cats work through grief differently.

@kat

I’m in love with Echoclan’s latest post! I sense a conflict in the making and with kits at the center of it all it’s bound to be a wild ride! As for your archive, well, I basically gave up on formatting mine for CS so id be the wrong person to ask!

[Dinolil1]

@Hazil

Patience.

[maplefoxie]

@Kat May to September? My birthday's in June, can I still get a cat? Your post is beautiful by the way, I do have a bad feeling about Goosekit now...

[DaisieGames]

@phina
They're birthday cats. Everyone with a birthday from May until September is getting them now.
October birthdays will get there's at the end of the month.

@bright
You sent me your birthday and favorite breeds right?

Believe so. I did my top one then realized I messed up and added sent two more to you.

[Katrione]

@maple
Yes you can! I'll give you your cat when I get home from school if you've sent me your top 3 cats

@bright
Ooh okie! I'll give you your birthday cat when I get home

[Dinolil1]

Hey Everyone!

Who's your favourite cat in my clan thus far?!