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by katanatildawn » Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:49 am
Im fairly decent with large cats (Tails not so much but we're working on that ^^;)
I cant redline right now, as i havent bought my new tablet yet, however i noticed that you're lynx's eyes are a touch too high. you'll want to move the eyes down approximately so that the top line touches the current bottom line (And adjust the brows accordingly). you could also get away with angling them a bit more (Not too much though). the lynx has a fairly short, thick neck, so you'll also want to thicken that, possibly introduce the shoulders for a more classic bust.
other than that, it looks very good. ;D keep up the good work

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by wibeke » Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:28 pm
I tried to use textures. I'm pretty sure I failed. OTL
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/ ... 4kvc92.png
Given that it's a made-up species I'm not expecting much critique, but I thought I'd post it here just in case anything jumps out at anyone. ^^'
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Driftingsakura; My only tips is to play around with different body types. Just like all girls aren't super model skinny, most guys aren't ridiculously musclular or incredibly thin. It helps you get a better feel for the differences between them. ^^
Becca ash; Ooh, this thing looks pretty neat. x3
I'm guessing it's meant to be some sort of bird mix? I'd suggest trying to draw some sort of skeleton beneath it and think of the way it moves, what it eats, where it lives, etc. etc. and try to apply that to the creature. It doesn't really seem to have much of a structure to it at the moment, making it's anatomy a little strange and uncomfortable.
I'm really curious about this species, if you make a thread or anything for them I'd love to see it. ^^
Wild-x-Beauty; Very nice, I want your skills. ^^
The major thing that sticks out to me is the outline of the eye. Though the woman in the picture has very bright eyes with dark eyelashes, they seem to stick out a little too much. The eyes should be a little smaller and the eye lashes should not be as thick. Maybe use a much smaller brush for them?
Also, I think it would help the picture a lot if you made the background a neutral grey or something along those lines. She has very pale skin, and against the light background a lot of the detail gets swallowed up.
~cheesie~; Aww, that's adorable.
For critique, I kind of feel like the entire face should be squished in together more. Cats have very square, compact faces. The eyes are just above the muzzle and the eyebrows are right above the eye. They give the illusion of being very large because of all the cheek fluff, but really everything is kind of packed in there very tightly.
I'll redline as soon as i have time. x3
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by Alexander White » Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:04 pm
thank you C:
unfortunately its really only funny if you've seen the game. well its funny in a tragic sort of way. Huey is paralyzed below the waist so he can't move his feet at all. also the balloon thing is a way to quickly extract people you want to recruit to your plane. you attach it to someone and they fly off
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by Not me nope » Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:36 pm
wibeke wrote:I tried to use textures. I'm pretty sure I failed. OTL
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/ ... 4kvc92.png
Given that it's a made-up species I'm not expecting much critique, but I thought I'd post it here just in case anything jumps out at anyone. ^^'
Becca ash; Ooh, this thing looks pretty neat. x3
I'm guessing it's meant to be some sort of bird mix? I'd suggest trying to draw some sort of skeleton beneath it and think of the way it moves, what it eats, where it lives, etc. etc. and try to apply that to the creature. It doesn't really seem to have much of a structure to it at the moment, making it's anatomy a little strange and uncomfortable.
I'm really curious about this species, if you make a thread or anything for them I'd love to see it. ^^
Wibeke, useing those textures I don't think ruined your work, I think they actualy fit in with the piece. I love it by the way, but what caught my eye first was the head, somehow it doesn't look quite right. (?) Maybe it's just the reason it is anouther spieces. I do love that piece though, I have little critique I'm sorry. But keep working on it untill you are pleased with it. c:
Also, thankyou for the comments and crit on my work, I apreiciate it. It is just a sketch but I understand what you mean. I'll make sure to work out the structure and mechanism inside of this spieces. I'm planning to maybe start a thread but it may take a while. I'm going to start working out it's habitat and diet before I dare go any further. Again, thanks; It did help.
Monochrome, thankyou for taking a look at it! C: Any help I can get is enough:3 I am planning to redline it myself sometime once I have sorted out it's infomation. Mmm. I do need to even out strength across the body a bit better. The wobbly looking lines are just there as it was a sketch and I was just trying to get the basic shape. C: Again, Thankyou!
Alex, loving those sketches. Espiecally the ones in the box. (':
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