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Re: Artist Army

Postby DojiMiko » Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:43 am

Thank-you for the crit guys! ^^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:49 am

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:There is nothing worth taking pictures of but the sky here.
I mean an occational cute pic of my cats comes and gos, but i's rare. Although to take a pictue of my own would be heaven<3

Anyway, working on my little non-dog drawing parade. This is a fursona ref for a friend (Luna Moon) she is a fennec fox. I would greatly appreciate some crits, woring on anatomy while drawing is good c:
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Re: Artist Army

Postby DojiMiko » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:09 am

@orange I'm not very good with anatomy but the only big problem I see are the ears, they look a bit to stiff and well, I can't really explain it LOL
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Re: Artist Army

Postby beloved. » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:20 am

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:There is nothing worth taking pictures of but the sky here.
I mean an occational cute pic of my cats comes and gos, but i's rare. Although to take a pictue of my own would be heaven<3

Anyway, working on my little non-dog drawing parade. This is a fursona ref for a friend (Luna Moon) she is a fennec fox. I would greatly appreciate some crits, woring on anatomy while drawing is good c:
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crits please^^



Back from some traveling business I had to do; so really tired as of now.
I'll just crit on this picture and when I'm feeling better later on; I'll give out more crits ^^;

So! Very cute picture c:
There are some places to tweak such as smaller snout and more roundish ears. The body is too bulky; though it seems that thick in pictures, it's because of its thick fur.but I can see that you have slightly draw the torso lines, so you want to fix that a bit. Pending on the age the body type might differ but you would want something like this. They also have slightly longer legs and tail. You probably want to practice the back legs a bit more; they seem too thick at its thighs. The neck should be a tad shorter; they are long but not that long ^^.

Hope the crit was helpful OTL
// so vague; so sorry about that.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby {lava » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:22 am

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I have been working on a wolf on dA, and I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions/crit. for my drawing/future drawings?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:24 am

Thanks bel o3o
I need to use refs more >.>
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Re: Artist Army

Postby beloved. » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:27 am

That's probably a good idea XD
Though it isn't going to make anyone's art suddenly omg so amazing; but it would give you an idea where to go with your picture ouo
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Re: Artist Army

Postby lululizzy23 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:38 am

@orange.c y r u s♥ I think it looks great! I don't know much about the canine anatomy but that looks a little too big for a fennec fox. The legs seem a little long too o3o but, don't take my crit's that seriously, as I said before, I know nothing about canine anatomy....
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Destrie » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:46 am

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This is the first time i've drawn any of these. I've done horses before, but never with that much detail...
The first is a 'Gryphon', the second is a 'Fairy', and the third is another mythical creature called a 'Nightmare'.
They were all done using a tutorial book i got for christmas(but i kinda skipped out on the shading for them)
What do you guys think of these?(NO red-lines please)

EDIT: Oh! and i know the face on the fairy is sorta messed up. I stink at drawing humanoid things!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby lululizzy23 » Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:51 am

horse_lover0726 wrote:
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This is the first time i've drawn any of these. I've done horses before, but never with that much detail...
The first is a 'Gryphon', the second is a 'Fairy', and the third is another mythical creature called a 'Nightmare'.
They were all done using a tutorial book i got for christmas(but i kinda skipped out on the shading for them)
What do you guys think of these?(NO red-lines please)

They ALL look amazing! I love the horse!
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