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Re: Artist Army

Postby T u m b l e » Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:10 pm

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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:11 pm

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    ref for a freind.

    I have been a bit obsessed with drawing animals out of my ability. I usualy draw dogs, but suddenly an urge to draw felines and other non-canid animals came over me :B
    And as you may see I am not as used to them as I am my dogs. Light crits please, and maybe a good cat refrence^^
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Re: Artist Army

Postby maetropa » Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:16 pm

@Orange;

Necks rather long and "thick", I'm not sure but it's just wrong.
Head is a bit small, compared to the rest of the body.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:15 pm

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
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    I have been a bit obsessed with drawing animals out of my ability. I usualy draw dogs, but suddenly an urge to draw felines and other non-canid animals came over me :B
    And as you may see I am not as used to them as I am my dogs. Light crits please, and maybe a good cat refrence^^

Pardon me reallll quick. ^^;
Going for a cat eh? Good choice,they so fun because of their quirkiness. x3
Is the body supposed to eb long? If not then make it a tad bit shorter. Also what I do with cats is give them a slope upwards at the back,they're really flexible,and make the shoulder more prominent. You can see the shoulder quite a bit with cats,unlike dogs. The tail is a bit too low for a cat or a dog as well,it's not at the spine's level,it's more like the bum. ^^; The neck and head are off too,neck's is way too long,and the head is tiny compared to the rest. C:
Sorry if you didn't want critique! It's like a habit for me. ;u;<3 You got the anatomy good for dogs though! Cats are chubbier,and I've pointed the differences out here.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:22 pm

    Thanks for the crit.

    I hate drawing cats. I am so used to the anatomy of dogs, and cats are soooooooo different compared to them.
    but i am trying and every time I get A LITTLE BIT ANATOMICLY CORRECT (OR SO i THINK)^^'
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:27 pm

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
    Thanks for the crit.

    I hate drawing cats. I am so used to the anatomy of dogs, and cats are soooooooo different compared to them.
    but i am trying and every time I get A LITTLE BIT ANATOMICLY CORRECT (OR SO i THINK)^^'

Same,it's dreadful learning new animals,I still have trouble with cats. ^^;
Just try accentuating the should,raising the back spine more,and giving it strong front legs. x3 Those are the key cat traits in drawing,except their faces. Which oh god,I can not explain. lol
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:36 pm

    I own two cats who I refence, yet I still can't figure out the anatomy >.>

    I've been told their faces slop down a bit and their paws are sort of 'bulky looking'. Flexable almost like hands, but bold and very defined. I did a wonderful realistic sketch of my cat lying on my pillow, which was amazing since she was doing that at the time, but i cannot upload it :<
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I mean like, oh my g o s h i'm so in love
I found you F I N A L L Y, it make me want to say
oh my gosh

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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:44 pm

orange.c y r u s♥ wrote:
    I own two cats who I refence, yet I still can't figure out the anatomy >.>

    I've been told their faces slop down a bit and their paws are sort of 'bulky looking'. Flexable almost like hands, but bold and very defined. I did a wonderful realistic sketch of my cat lying on my pillow, which was amazing since she was doing that at the time, but i cannot upload it :<

I have 12 and I still have trouble lol. I have one dog though,with messed up structure. x3

Yep,their face slopes down much more than a dog's into a sort of tear drop most say. It's like super hard for me though,makes me wanna curl up and hide rofl. A dog's forhead and the bottom of their jawline is parellal(Sp? D:) I believe,and cats have like an acute angle or something I'm not sure entirely.
That really sucks! :C Don't you have a camera? Or did the picture get ruined?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:52 pm

    I was just sketching and I had to leave so I just turned off the computer.
    It wasn't saved :<

    but hopefully she might do it again X3
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I found you F I N A L L Y, it make me want to say
oh my gosh

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Re: Artist Army

Postby whispbear » Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:59 am

Orange: The main thing that I notice about the cat is her nose. It look more like a canine nose than a feline's. Here is a tutorial I've found that shows what I mean, I think so at least x3

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I created a new character, meet Muffin! I'm not quite sure what he is species-wise, kind of like a rodent and a bird or something xD I know I stuffed up his feet pretty bad...I couldn't decide if I wanted him to have skinny toes or larger ones, but managed doing one of each >.< I'll fix them shortly, lol. Any comments/critiques?
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