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Re: Artist Army

Postby Notichimtoki » Wed Dec 21, 2011 5:56 pm

Stonefly~Look's great! I would suggest adding more shade, especially to the Santa hat, and the places where the bandages covers the hair, it shouldn't be so, umm, gappy. There shouldn't be a huge gap where it is, it should sorta poof out a tad from the side of the bandages. Y'know?

Orange~ Looks great! The front legs are a little thin, and I feel like there's a certain line that's defining where his shoulder ends/begins, but other then that it looks great!!! The scarf is fantastic too :3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Irbis » Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:34 pm

Stonefly- As Moonstar has stated, shades would definitely add more contour and define certain places such as the mouth. Also, the hat seems to hover in the air, if the character is holding in its mouth, you should somehow show it. For the back color, I'd suggest making a lighter hue or adding gradient or something. Overall, it looks very cute. <3

orange.c y r u s♥- Beautiful char. ;w; Anyway, for critique I'd say the backlegs need some tweaking but you already know that, try looking at some photos for reference. In that pose, the character wouldn't be able to stand without the support of the right back leg as well as the front right leg which should be positioned more frontwise.


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Also, does anyone know any good background tutorials? Backgrounds-they hate me.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby diamondpals » Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:50 pm

@ orange.c y r u s♥ - Very cute and pretty <3 The only thing that I would say is to fix up the back legs a little bit, but you know that already :3

@ Irbis - Wahh so pretty <3 I really like the shading on the char and the hoodie ;u; The shading on the hoodie looks a little weird, but I can't really explain it. I also like the design you put in the background (:

Background tutorials for a forest and water scene (: There are a lot of other great ones on dA too!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Stonefly » Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:52 pm

Irbis wrote:[center]Stonefly- As Moonstar has stated, shades would definitely add more contour and define certain places such as the mouth. Also, the hat seems to hover in the air, if the character is holding in its mouth, you should somehow show it. For the back color, I'd suggest making a lighter hue or adding gradient or something. Overall, it looks very cute.



yes i do see that it looks like its floating xD but every time i try make it look like its holding it in its mouth it looks badly done...and i am confused with what ou mean with the last part..i am a slight blodne so bare with me x.x
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:04 pm

Irbis wrote:
Stonefly- As Moonstar has stated, shades would definitely add more contour and define certain places such as the mouth. Also, the hat seems to hover in the air, if the character is holding in its mouth, you should somehow show it. For the back color, I'd suggest making a lighter hue or adding gradient or something. Overall, it looks very cute. <3

orange.c y r u s♥- Beautiful char. ;w; Anyway, for critique I'd say the backlegs need some tweaking but you already know that, try looking at some photos for reference. In that pose, the character wouldn't be able to stand without the support of the right back leg as well as the front right leg which should be positioned more frontwise.


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I guess I'd like some minor critique~
Also, does anyone know any good background tutorials? Backgrounds-they hate me.

Only prominent thing I see wrong is there's not enough shading on the hoodie compared to the body. ^^ Or too much on the body opposed to the hoodie. Also the back left leg looks a bit off.

Does anyone here have a tutorial on human/anthro arms? They're the one thing I can't do well. orz
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Re: Artist Army

Postby ShadowRoselia » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:11 pm

Irbis wrote:
Stonefly- As Moonstar has stated, shades would definitely add more contour and define certain places such as the mouth. Also, the hat seems to hover in the air, if the character is holding in its mouth, you should somehow show it. For the back color, I'd suggest making a lighter hue or adding gradient or something. Overall, it looks very cute. <3

orange.c y r u s♥- Beautiful char. ;w; Anyway, for critique I'd say the backlegs need some tweaking but you already know that, try looking at some photos for reference. In that pose, the character wouldn't be able to stand without the support of the right back leg as well as the front right leg which should be positioned more frontwise.


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Bear hoodie. I want it. |:
I guess I'd like some minor critique~
Also, does anyone know any good background tutorials? Backgrounds-they hate me.



I think that your picture is awesome! It's much better than I could do, and the leopard is very cute. I myself am not very good at shading, but I think you nailed it on the cat itself, and the hoodie looks great too!


Speaking of digital art and such, can I get a critique on this please from someone? http://fav.me/d4hqxyc I'm kinda new on digital art, as I got a graphics tablet for my birthday and I have strived to get better.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:10 pm

For an SS, some parts censored :)
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aesse » Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:38 am

Kirimi wrote:For an SS, some parts censored :)
I hate doing paws. 'nuff said.
Critique? :3
I like doing eyes, can't you tell? XD


how can you hate paws? they are like the awsomest thing to draw <3
Also, the eye is flippin awesome xD

can't say much about the ears and the tail, but regarding the paws, they look neat, but don't dogs have a dewclaw on the front paws or something? iunno rofl -forgets it a lot herself-

for the rest I can only bow to that picture~ amazing~
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Re: Artist Army

Postby whispbear » Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:47 am

Kirimi wrote:For an SS, some parts censored :)
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I hate doing paws. 'nuff said.
Critique? :3
I like doing eyes, can't you tell? XD

Beautiful! And you draw paws awesomely, I hate drawing them too but...at least you get great results XD

That eye is very pretty :3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:56 am

Aesse wrote:
Kirimi wrote:For an SS, some parts censored :)
I hate doing paws. 'nuff said.
Critique? :3
I like doing eyes, can't you tell? XD


how can you hate paws? they are like the awsomest thing to draw <3
Also, the eye is flippin awesome xD

can't say much about the ears and the tail, but regarding the paws, they look neat, but don't dogs have a dewclaw on the front paws or something? iunno rofl -forgets it a lot herself-

for the rest I can only bow to that picture~ amazing~

LOL you're pro at paws, so you can't really talk XD I always struggle/make them too small...(I've already killed my first SS (or second, I started that first lol), it has uber small paws ._.)
Thank chu :3 I like shiny stuff *o*

Hm.....yeah OuO I think I forgot that....I don't know bout anatomy pfft XD

D: LOL don't bow XD It's nothing compared to your art, you'll only hurt you back more by bowing to mine because you bow probably bow to yours 100 times a day XD


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Kirimi wrote:For an SS, some parts censored :)
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I hate doing paws. 'nuff said.
Critique? :3
I like doing eyes, can't you tell? XD

Beautiful! And you draw paws awesomely, I hate drawing them too but...at least you get great results XD

That eye is very pretty :3

He he, thankyou~! Nah, this is probably just a fluke XD

Thank you~! Recently, I like doing eyes for some reason O.O I used to HATE doing them because they were so ugly XD My first wolf picture was for a contest and the charrie didn't have proper eyes, so I survived, otherwise, I would have been dead XD

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