Artist Army {old thread}

[rinslet walker;]

Critique?

[Notichimtoki]

Critique?

The legs are to skinny, they should start thicker then slim down once they get to the hooves. They we're slimmed to much at the top and then the same length the way down. You should also pay attention to joints, that's helped me a TON. You're neck is to straight and his muzzle is to, umm, boxey. X3
The front leg shouldn't curve, it should just outright bend.
I'd suggest looking at pictures and tutorials on dA. Hope this helps X3

Pastel~His head and back are to big in comparison to his legs, so I'd suggest either making his legs longer and wider, or his head and back smaller. (Personally, I think the legs would be easier to do.
As far as the character deisgn, it look's pretty good X3 The leg's really cool, I've never seen anything like that and it's really well done.

[rinslet walker;]

Critique?

The legs are to skinny, they should start thicker then slim down once they get to the hooves. They we're slimmed to much at the top and then the same length the way down. You should also pay attention to joints, that's helped me a TON. You're neck is to straight and his muzzle is to, umm, boxey. X3
The front leg shouldn't curve, it should just outright bend.
I'd suggest looking at pictures and tutorials on dA. Hope this helps X3

Thanks, I'll work on it.

[Mozzy.]

Thanks everyone for the redlines/advise ect. It will really help me improve <3

[rinslet walker;]

At firstm I was trying to draw it cartoon-style. I got fed up with that and went realistic xD. The legs are...scary. They look better on paper, my camera sucks.

http://www.junglewalk.com/animal-pictur ... y-2123.jpg <- ref

[calicotabbycat]

At firstm I was trying to draw it cartoon-style. I got fed up with that and went realistic xD. The legs are...scary. They look better on paper, my camera sucks.

OMG. That looks soooo much better. I really like the shape of the head.

[starlord.]

That looks amazing. The legs aren't that bad!

Hey guys, I need some help on horses. I want to draw a startled horse; he's startled because in the battle with his rider, the opposing rider had slashed off most of his front hair(Can't remember name >.<) with their sword. Any tutorials or something to help?

[orange.c y r u s♥]

here are some pose refrences, and here are some structural tutorials. As far as pose tutorials go, I have none for startedhorses, but don't frget to put expression in the face^^

[Stonefly]

ok, this is my christmas avatr for this year and its of my fave charrie Mardux xD but this is my first full lineless drawing so ya..critiqe?

[orange.c y r u s♥]

Working on my anatomy. I know its. But too bulky and thik, but I would love some light crits or redlines^^

/I know the backlegs need work/