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Re: Artist Army

Postby Oddly Shaded » Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:40 pm

lululizzy23 wrote:
Bubblesh. wrote:
Thankyou so much LCD for the redlines <3

But, I noticed on the horse redline that the face becomes too thin, and there is no lower lip. Horses have a triangular shape on their bottom lip like in this picture;
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And I also don't understand when you say that I didn't draw top part of its head. Because I did..would you mind explaining please?

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Actually, the redline face looks fine it just needs the lip/chin


Actually i'd have to agree with bubbles. The face on the redline is alot thinner than it should be. Heres my redline.
(on both the cat and horse)
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@Bubblesh - The cats face was basically perfect, if anything in my redline i screwed it up a little XD, but 2 points i'd like to make are the eyes and the ears mainly. The eyes need the cat shaped eyes. They commonly have thin diamond shaped pupils. The ears is basically placement and i thought i'd show you how i like to show the fur on cats ears (works well with fluffy kittehs)
Now the horse, i did a red and blue line, the red line shows the basic horse figure on the nose and muzzle, while the blue line shows more of an arabian and such. Your horses usually look like arabians because of the dip in the face. If you wanted a clydesdale for instance you'd have the curve out rather than inwards. The redline shows the normal flat head line. Also at the muzzle, i did a flared nostril and rounded. I know that my Clancey can often flare his nostrils, but most often doesn't and his nose is perfectly rounded. But again, with breed that can change.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Aesse » Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:48 pm

I'(d love to help out but I don't dare redline stuff that isn't mine XD and LCD did it perfectly fine for the canine before xD
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Oddly Shaded » Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:50 pm

Yes LCD did a great job on the canine :3 definatly agreed with that redline. The horse was just too thin in the muzzle. Thats all.

OH i forgot to mention bubblesh.. the horses ears... Longer and thinner than you had them :)
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:57 am

Notme: Thankyou~! I will try doing it XD

Yesterday I got a sudden craving for Meiji Yanyan biscuit snack thingos OuO So I just had to draw it up XD Any critque~ :3
http://alyciea.deviantart.com/art/Sugar ... -274869762

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Re: Artist Army

Postby ShadowRoselia » Wed Dec 21, 2011 1:12 am

Kirimi wrote:Notme: Thankyou~! I will try doing it XD

Yesterday I got a sudden craving for Meiji Yanyan biscuit snack thingos OuO So I just had to draw it up XD Any critque~ :3
http://alyciea.deviantart.com/art/Sugar ... -274869762

I am a really really bad girl D: I shouldn't have drawn this (is going off task, SO easily...). Need to finish 2 secret santa things in 4 days ;-;


It's so cute! I'd love to draw like that, I love it!!!!!!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby pastel1 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:50 am

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Re: Artist Army

Postby Bloom & Katt » Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:17 am

@pastel: Do you want critique on the drawing or character design? :)
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Re: Artist Army

Postby pastel1 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:28 am

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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:22 am

LaChromaticDragonfly,

Hrmm, you're right about the hind leg a bit, but, even though my paws turned out pretty bad, your redline made my paws less accurate. : P
Wolf paws are NOT rounded like that; and they certainly aren't that small.
You also didn't redline the other legs, so much as just trace them... Same with the tail.
Like, the only part that you DID change in the redline was you got rid of my wolf's ankles... and that's not right at all....

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http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... s#/d37iki0

Wolf paws are not circular at all, and the digits will never be the same size all around.
Also, defining the metacarpals makes it look WAY too unnatural, so avoid that.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wickedpup » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:03 am

pastel wrote:https://join.me/291-283-747
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what do you guys think about this?

Would you care for a reline?
If not I can tell you this,the head is way too big compared to the body,the tail is far too messy/tattered,the mouth is too open,it should have the other cheek or something else to make it more natural. With the hole in the arm,you do realize that's where the bone lies? It's not like a human bone,the wolf's leg would be completely unusable with a hole in it. It would be better off amputated than like that. Try working on proportions more,as the front is way too large for the back in some parts.

I can't help with horses,sorry. OTL

Anything canine just smack me and I'll try to redline it/critique it. ^^;

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