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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby rinslet walker; » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:08 am

Rivkah wrote:
I'm going to have to rant for a moment.

You know how you have a work in progress writing thing on Chicken Smoothie or a work in progress roleplay and it says many times "no posting" in several areas and people post anyway?

That's happened to me twice now, and the posts haven't even related to what I'm writing.
Sorry, I just had to rant. I love my writings and I don't like having them separated by comments or spam posts.

I'm obsessive compulsive with my writing, I will admit that now.


    Oh dear I hate that. This one time someone posted "lol any1 wanna pperclip," and I reported the post and everything I was so mad. They messed up my beautiful thread and it made me want to cry. All my writing has to be very organized.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby eden . » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:49 am

screw it, I'm just going to make up the universe as I go an maybe by the end it'll work out so I can edit stuff a;lskdfj;laskdjf; laksdjf; laksjdf;
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby abandoned. » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:57 am

anarchy. wrote:
Rivkah wrote:
I'm going to have to rant for a moment.

You know how you have a work in progress writing thing on Chicken Smoothie or a work in progress roleplay and it says many times "no posting" in several areas and people post anyway?

That's happened to me twice now, and the posts haven't even related to what I'm writing.
Sorry, I just had to rant. I love my writings and I don't like having them separated by comments or spam posts.

I'm obsessive compulsive with my writing, I will admit that now.


    Oh dear I hate that. This one time someone posted "lol any1 wanna pperclip," and I reported the post and everything I was so mad. They messed up my beautiful thread and it made me want to cry. All my writing has to be very organized.


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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby indebted » Tue Feb 12, 2013 12:31 pm

    >>
    do not worry. i am alive. anyways, attempting a doctor who fanfic. i'm gonna die...BTW anyone watch doctor who? if you do, favorite companion? idk. just need...to know. to decide which companion i'm using? yeah no. i'm using amy no matter what. amy : awesomesauce writer's block ughhh
i like dragon capitalism a lot lmao
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Rivkah » Tue Feb 12, 2013 12:40 pm

Cняιsтιиɛ Ɖααé wrote:
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    do not worry. i am alive. anyways, attempting a doctor who fanfic. i'm gonna die...BTW anyone watch doctor who? if you do, favorite companion? idk. just need...to know. to decide which companion i'm using? yeah no. i'm using amy no matter what. amy : awesomesauce writer's block ughhh


yesyeysyesyyes you must give me tips I want to do a doctor who fanfic so bad.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Artesian » Tue Feb 12, 2013 2:35 pm

an asian to the knee wrote:screw it, I'm just going to make up the universe as I go an maybe by the end it'll work out so I can edit stuff a;lskdfj;laskdjf; laksdjf; laksjdf;


This is the way to go. Seriously. :| The magic happens when you just let the world warp around the story, oh yes.

Daae or Rivkah: I want to love Doctor Who. I enjoy the humour and the mind bending ideas. I really like the eleventh doctor and rather like nine and ten (haven't seen much of ten). But I just can't figure out the time-travel, and what is and is not allowed. If either of you know, pleeeease PM me, because I want to love this show but the inconsistencies I perceive break my brain so bad whenever I watch an episode. :(
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Midnight Tails » Tue Feb 12, 2013 3:31 pm

For the romance thing; I've actually NEVER finished a book with romance as the main plot.
(So I don't have enough experience to be able to join in properly on the conversation I think)
Even famous romance books like Jane Eyre I just went 'blargh' and I stop reading the book.
I don't know why, but I just can't finish a book with romance as the main theme/plot.
(at least the main theme/plot in my eyes)
However I love it as a side plot. I just don't like having to focus so completely on it through an entire book..

Don't get me wrong, I think there are good books with romance as their main plot, a lot of them would be good reads, I just can't tolerate reading that sort of thing for very long. I get bored very easily and most books with romance as the key to the plot don't have enough action in them for me to keep reading.
If you have any suggestions (or want to try the challenge) you could pm me and get me to read some romance books and see if you can get me to finish one.

I enjoy love triangles, but they can so easily go wrong. Probably my favourite sort is when none of those in the love triangle will ever get the right person to love them; I find this amusing for some reason.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Klyse » Tue Feb 12, 2013 4:26 pm

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      Novelist (And I sometimes write poetry and songs)
    Example:
      From a kind-of-not-really-fan-fiction I'm working on (It's about 25% fan fiction because one of the four characters is dating a real-life celebrity in the story). Also, I'm not familiar with the English imprisonment system, so this story itself is probably off in terms of that. This writing is edited for the sake of a young audience, since it's meant to be teen fiction. :)

      P.O.V.: Merla

      My mate Alex passed me another {whoa, alcohol!} – my not-so-secret weakness – and I downed it in record time. He seemed impressed and, for the quarter of a second they actually acknowledged me, so did the girls clinging to either one of his arms. The blonde quickly went back to giggling at some comment Alex had made a few minutes ago while the red-head practically purred at him and nuzzled her head into his shoulder.

      “D*mn cats.” I muttered, licking the last drop off of my bottle.

      The darkness of the club wasn’t nearly as intimidating as it had been the first time I came here two years ago. A heavy beat was pulsing throughout the entire building while beams of varying colours of light flashed around on the lower level. It was busy for a Tuesday night, there had to have been at least a hundred people downstairs dancing.

      Alex leaned across the small table separating us, flashing a small packet of {an adjective describing a drug} at me from the sleeve of his hoodie. I shook my head at him, “You know I don’t do {drug name}, Alex.” I told him, raising an eyebrow.

      He shrugged, “It’s always worth asking.” I watched as my best friend since primary school rolled up a US twenty, an object I’d only seen in his possession simply because American money was otherwise useless here. {...} It was kind of funny watching the girls mewl about it's effects, actually.

      I cracked open a new {drink!} with the edge of the table, embracing the scent of its contents. Just as I went to take my first sip, a strong hand grasped my wrist and jerked me from my seat, sending the bottle crashing to the floor. I whipped around to face my captor and wasn't at all surprised to find that it was the familiar face of Charlie Adams, one of Leeds’ most well-known policemen. Our eyes combated for a few moments, faces less than five centimetres apart, which was just long enough for me to tell Adams he'd wasted a perfectly good {drink!} and for a few other policemen to grab Alex and his girls.

      Adams grimaced, “Merla, you gotta stop doing this. I can’t keep getting people to let you off so easy.”

      I glared at him, my lips barely moving as I gave my reply. “You gonna be the one to tell mummy dearest? I hear the police can talk to the dead these days.” He flinched and I was kind of happy I’d struck a nerve somewhere within him. It was his fault my mum had died, if he’d ran just a bit faster, she would still be with me.

      “Merla!” Alex called from the grasp of a husky officer. He had clearly been struggling, but the officer was huge and easily overpowered my old friend.

      I looked at him accusingly. “You’re the one who does the drugs my friend. You know, you’re looking quite thin lately.”

      “I thought we were friends?” He looked horrified and tried to jerk an arm free from the man’s grasp, but with no success. Alex grimaced at the officer and let himself go half-limp in the man’s arms, knowing that things would just be easier if he gave in.

      My eyebrows furrowed. “You know I don’t do {drug!}, Alex.” I told him. That had been the only reason I’d had to tell him no in the past two years. “Things have changed.”

      ~


      Leeds jail didn't look any different than it had looked the month before. Adams left me in my cell with nothing more than a disappointed sigh as he walked away. He acted like my father did for that brief moment he’d existed in my life. All I thought you were better than this and I wish you could be a quarter of what your mum was, but we all know that’ll never happen or you’re no daughter of mine. My other daughter can at least appreciate her life. I’d sobbed for days because I’d genuinely thought it was my fault my mum died, and he happily allowed me to believe that. I sighed at the memory of my not-so-supportive father. He’d suddenly appeared and then left again a month or so after my mum died. I haven’t seen him since, and don’t exactly want to, but I wouldn't be surprised if one day he just showed up out of nowhere.

      It was already dark outside, the clouds covering everything in the sky besides the full moon, which was shining down with a bright yellow-white light. Bats fluttered across the sky, squeaking at each other. I remember playing with my older brother, Nik, on nights like this. It was disappointing to know that he lived in Ireland, too far for my own comfort.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Rolly-chan » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:56 pm

@Talia23
Jane Eyre's main theme isn't romance, though xD That book is highly critical about the social standards of that time. It's more about moral than romantic development, and it contains many elements like the view that men and women are equal (which sadly is still relevant today u_u).
I don't know if that's a good example for a romance novel ^^°
(or maybe my definition of a romance novel is completely different... *shrugs* and I'm reading classics differently than modern "trivial" literature. Don't ask me how or why, I don't know xD)

I do usually stay away from modern romance novels. Some romantic comedies are fine and funny (especially that German one I once read where the protagonist tried to commit suicide, already had her goodbye letters sent, and then fails and stays alive and has to deal with the consequences - it IS a comedy, I swear XD). But the majority in the romance section is too bland for me.
The problem for me is that the novels in other sections usually don't focus on the love story while still focusing almost as much on the second plot-line. That's the kind of romance I like. But it's so incredibly rare (or executed so dreadfully bad that I don't want to go anywhere near it ever again -> see Twilight) >_> That's why I stick to fandom in the romance field. You can find way more fanfictions like that than actual novels, which increases the chance of there being a good one among them.

Buuut, even then, it's still a matter of taste. I'm not much of an action fan, especially if it's "mindless" action (as in, "what kind of action can I put in so that it's more interesting, no matter if it's essential to the plot or not" - that actually bores me because it doesn't move the plot forward *lol*). I love exploring the psychology of the characters, delving into their psyches and relationship dynamics and developments. That's my cup of tea. Character-centric stuff. psychology student here, so it's no wonder, I guess xD
So while I do like stuff happening in stories, I prefer the stories focusing on what it triggers in the characters. *shrugs*

By the way, you don't have to have loved romantically to write convincingly about it. I mean, don't you have beloved family, friends or pets? Take these feelings and amplify them, add a sexual component (I don't mean only sex, though it's a part of it, but also the desire to kiss, cuddle, touch, etc), and then go with it.
People write convincingly about stuff that never happened to them all the time. 90% what happens in the Sci-fi and fantasy section is something no one has ever experienced. But you might know what it was like when you almost got into a fist-fight (or even just a verbal fight) with someone, or what it was like to stand in front of an animal you feared, or how it felt to look an authority figure in the eye and disagree. You can take all that, all the emotions, all the sensations you had in those moments, and apply them to a spaceship fight, or to the discovery of a dragon, or to a single individual who is bound and shackled and still defies the tyrant that tries to break his will.
You can do the same with love.

@1000 Umbrellas
Regarding narcissists... they actually ARE capable of feeling love. The only group of people that are not able to do so are psychopaths (and maybe some schizoid individuals), and even then it's only the extreme cases that don't feel any kind of love at all (psychopaths have an impaired empathy, and some of them don't have any empathy, which is the basis of love. That's why so many of them don't feel an ounce of guilt when they betray, cheat, hurt or even kill you).
(Keep in mind that these traits are dimensional, not categorical. You aren't either a narcissist or not a narcissist, but you are somewhere on the narcissist scale, maybe at the very bottom, or maybe at exactly the point we people decided to call you a narcissist, or maybe high above that point - it's all possible).
Sorry for this, but it's kind of a compulsion to add my thoughts whenever I read something that has to do with what I'm studying /D *cough cough*

@AATTK & Artesian
Maybe it's the way to go for you two, but it's certainly not the way to go for me. A thought up world needs as much consistency as the real world, and it's way easier to keep track of the rules of that world if you decide on them from the start and then stick to them throughout the story, only making changes if you really really think it's necessary (really great twists can come out of obeying your own set rules, because if you want to have something happen that can't happen because of those rules, you'll need to think of a workaround, which sometimes results in such cool twists that you later sit there and think "OMG, was this really ME that wrote this creative, beautiful twist?")

And now I apologize for writing this monstrosity of a post. If anyone even bothers to read it x"D *cough*
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