Artist Army {old thread}

[l0stinw0nderland]

I am extremeley proud of this; it is much higher quality then most of my pictures.

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VERY cute!(: did u draw ur grass? it looks very realistic lol!

Critique and or redlines are greatly appreciated for my kitty cat (especially red-lines since no matter where i go i cant seem to get any!!!)

Can somebody please help me????

EDIT: click open image in new tab if it shows up to big on ur screen!!

[Tiger Lylli]

@ pastel, ~*Oddly Shaded*~, Cacophony, Susiron:
I wanna thank you for your comments on my art. I'm sorry, I got distracted and forgot to check back here.

@Cacophony: Thank you for the comment on the fabric. Yet another hard thing to do But I'm hoping the fabric becomes more real as I draw it more. Never knew it would be so difficult. As for the shading, I tried something a little different with a blur tool, and it help make it look more smooth. People don't like the blur tool, but i like it. Plus my colors are all in different layers (I usually have up to 70 layers literally) so the colors don't blur, just the edges.

@ Susiron: Thank you for the helpful suggestion. Its actually one thing I tried slightly different with Libra, with the skin. Skin is so difficult to color and shade, but I definitely will use all your suggestions and see if Pisces will be even better ^_^

[wickedpup]

Could somone redline this sketch please? ouo

{nothing about/paws/linearting please ^_^}

The tail is supposed to be long and floofy

I can redline tomorrow,but how about some critique for now? c: The fur direction on the chest/neck is off,fur doesn't poof out of the neck like that it points downwards more,not upwards. The legs' joints are almost non-existant,the front leg has 3 joints,not 2 so it shouldn't be stiff like that,try giving it some more "bend"/give it that other joint. The back leg's ankle is far too high,as at that size it couldn't move,bring the joint a down,so that the elbows' end and knees' start are equal. The back hind leg's foot is missing joints too,as it looks like the front leg,as in no hind foot. I suggest looking at tutorials on hind legs,and skeletons. n__n If you need help with paws I can show you a tutorial on how I do paws tomorrow,it's quite simple.~
Ffff-,I always seem harsh. OTL

Sorry I can't give much help,I need to be doing homework. xD

[pastel1]

wolfblood@ id redline but yeah... ive had harsh comments before on my redlines so sorry i cant

http://pastellovescs.deviantart.com/#/d4j4rq9
more ventart, any comments are fine

[wibeke]

Great art everyone. I'd go through and comment on more pictures but I'm afraid I don't have much to add and I'm too tired to say anything constructive. Maybe tomorrow? ^^'

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Anyways, doodled one of my characters and decided to play around with his design a bit. Also tried out a different style with the shading.
[character designed by beloved. I just added the stripes =p]

[diamondpals]

@wibeke - Beautiful! I love the shading and design so much <33

I've mostly been lurking around lately 'cause I didn't have any time to focus on art in the past few weeks :c I would comment on everybody else's, but I have to go very soon. I'll comment when I get back for sure :3

Just finished a commission from my shop (: I finally opened Christmas headshot customs <3

[pastel1]

wolfblood@ id redline but yeah... ive had harsh comments before on my redlines so sorry i cant

http://pastellovescs.deviantart.com/#/d4j4rq9
more ventart, any comments are fine

more more ventart
http://pastellovescs.deviantart.com/#/d4j4z56
it is of my new character, a cardigan welsh corgi

[Oddly Shaded]

@diamondpals - Just gorgeous ;D But the one thing i'd have to say with the lines is that the need seems too thin

@pastel - That corgi is very neat! But the eyes seem to small to me. But then again i am not the biggest corgi fan and don't study their anatomy. As well as the nose seems too big

Alright, i've been working on this picture for about 1-2 hours so far, but it's my two dogs playing, based on a picture i took of them.



Comments Crit Redline welcome & it's a WIP

EDIT+ it's too big so;
Heres the link for the full

[Susiron]

Hrmm, did you trace over the picture that you took, Oddly? : o
Please don't take this the wrong way, but the anatomy in this is like an exponential jump from your last picture.

[Mozzy.]

Comments, crits, possible red-line?
Also, is the shading ok?
Click for un-coloured, un-edited version c:

@Shady; Looks great so far! So realistic....xD