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[song&storm]

Thanks everyone!

I have made some more variants of the color scheme here.
Please tell me which one/s you think are good/needs improvement!
I really want the character exude femininity and grace, but at the same time demands authority, so I opted for the pinkish (feminine) /vampy-red (sexy, fierce) /golden (royalty, power) color combinations, although I'm not sure how do I make them "harmonize" with each other, if that makes sense. I don't want my character to look too bright/flashy too.
I seem to be leaning towards the last one, since the grey seems to balance it all out, but I'd love opinions.

@EncyOf
That animation looks great! :0 I love that idea.
Here is a reference for a wolf bust by dA user 0Lavendre0 (it's free wolf lineart and can be used for reference ^^), and it's in a similar pose to your drawing too.
If you want to lean more towards a realistic and distinctly wolfish form, (I thought your drawing resembles a dragon if you didn't tell! ^^;) the wolf's browbone/forehead seems to be not exaggerated as much, and the snout is a bit gently sloped, and it appears that the neck should start just below the edge of the mouth.
Unless this is your "personal style" then it's up to you!!
Good luck!

[BeaztVibe]

@reydient

Would like some critique on this:

Mainly the wolf head thingy itself, not so much the animation I guess. ^^;

For the wolf it would depend on how you want your style to be. Anatomy wise the neck reminds me more of a dragon. Wolf/Dog necks are more stiff so the neck wouldn't start at the back of the head. it would start from below it. (hope that makes sense. I mean instead of like O- its more of a p I have no idea how to explain that since i can't draw to show you what I mean where I am but ^^;; Wait hold on I have this I mean it would start more near the bottom then the back you know;; hope that makes sense. ^^;; I'm not an expert myself but I at least know that much i like to think~

Opinions on http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=2991672 would be nice < 3 she is my Alien sona and I am really bad at drawing on Oekaki. Any advice or critique would be lovely.

[EncyOf]

@NaosRain
The colors are so pretty!
I also love the design. The curvy/wavy nature really compliments the idea & color scheme (if that makes any sense) ^^

Okie! I drew up a new wolf thing.
Would like some feedback.
Possibly if there's anything I should add to it? I may make it into a character, idk.

[PleaserOfCrowds]

@NaosRain
The colors are so pretty!
I also love the design. The curvy/wavy nature really compliments the idea & color scheme (if that makes any sense) ^^

Okie! I drew up a new wolf thing.
Would like some feedback.
Possibly if there's anything I should add to it? I may make it into a character, idk.

Looks great for a animation, but maybe slightly make the slime out the mouth drip more like how water drips? Idk, It's just that the things from the eyes seem so smooth compared to the slime in the mouth. I also suggest making the neck part near the head thicker, as it seems off.

Looking for some help on this weird spider-dog or fox thing. I can't really draw using a mouse, compared to some horse drawings on my ipad. I would like some advice, and possibly a redline

All of these were made in Oekaki.

Also, looking for a different color palette, since I think it might be eyeblinding

[satuurnity]

I got the lineart done, but I'm struggling immensely with the face (hence the tears).
Could someone please help me with it or redline for me? Thank you!! x

[Mythic]

@Floof
Sorry,i would help but I'm the literal worst at cat anatomy. If anything I'd say make your lines more natural. There are hardly ever perfectly straight lines on a furry animal. Try to add in small little bits of fur and I think it would make it a million times better.


Art by me. Please don't trace or use anywhere. Might be putting this design on a shirt. :3

Made this a few hours ago and I think it turned out pretty well.

[Firedragon2009]

Wow, I haven't posted on here in almost 4 years x.x And it was in the old thread too~!
I'll try to help some fellow artists during the weekend so marking the "new" thread for now c:

[niconiishikino]

Hi guys!
I took the suggestions above, and at least my hands look decent now.
But I'm having trouble around the torso area, from the hips up. Any suggestions? I don't have any pictures at the moment to provide. But I'll find some if needed.

[Stonefly]

@Mythic - I know Im a little late and all, but I really love that piece! it looks amazing.
@floofems - Its looking good so far! I would suggest maybe adding some fur detail in? Also the way the back leg(further away) looks its in front of the stomach, I would move the line just a little bit!


I have just started to draw people and work on my anatomy and what not..I was doodling and I actually came across a pose that worked with a character nearly 110%..So I am just looking for a redline for two pieces that I have done.

The Guy with the mohawk.
The head bothers me, I know its very incorrect but no matter what I do I just cant get it to look right. Also the farm closest to me looks way to big and out of place? Ignore the hands, have no started working on those yet..

The girl.
Really I would just like some tips on the hair, maybe some type of redline to make it look more natural?
link to image

[PrincessPinkyPoop]

I am doing a gifted and talented group challenge at school, and we have to do an academic, personal and community challenge before June 17th. I love art and my personal challenge is to do 3 amazing pictures my mum will put up on the wall. I have already do e a chair in the style of Van Gough , and the other 2 are going to be a marmite jar and a Heinz beans tin, does anyone recommend and styles and mediums and materials?