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Re: The Artist Army

Postby ALittleLoony » Wed Mar 02, 2016 2:46 pm

@ Not me nope
Wow, that is amazing! The accuracy and attention to detail is really well done. I especially like the oil painting, you really captured the expression. <3

@ Pareidolia
Love the style. It reminds me of "Song of the Sea" somehow. I really like the glowing, spirit-like effect. As far as improvements go, I'm with Reydiant on this. The hair, in particular, could use some smoothing. I suggest looking at "Song of the Sea" concept art actually, if you haven't already, as I really think it will add something to this piece. I really like it though, it's super unique. ^^

@ Reydiant
I'm very inexperienced with water color so I can't critique much on that aspect, but honestly I think this is beautiful! I really love the use of color here. It would be nice if the hair was more visible, I think. Perhaps just adding more prominent shadows? Also I think the eyebrows should be partially hidden underneath the hair, but that's more a stylistic choice. :3 Overall though this is really beautiful. <3

@ Meowool
How cool! I love the use of color, it gives off an almost vintage, antique vibe. I like the galaxy appearance, whether that was intended or not. Very nice. ^^


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Hi. ^^ So I just wanted to get some feedback on my adoptable art?
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Particularly on the background. She's an adoptable I made for a website I run, and I'm working on some overall improvements to the adoptables' design. I wanted to give my adoptables background, but I didn't want a boring box-like image, and I like partially transparent art, so this is what I've got?
I mainly want something that is versatile and will look good on a lot of different websites.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby rheia » Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:23 pm

hey guys, this is my first time drawing since 2014 and as i say in the post she kinda looks like a demented voldemort at the moment. could i get some advice please? i really want to get back into drawing
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alittleloony: i love that adoptable. she's so cute, and i think the partially transparent look is really nice!

meowool: that looks really cool! i love artwork of stars!

reydiant: i cant give any critique, but that's looking really good! i really like the shades of green you've used

pareidiola: again i don't have any critique to give, but i really like the feel your work gives off. you can see the movement i. the piece c:

not me nope: wow. i honestly thought that was a photo, you're incredibly talented!

shiroyasha & vampy!!: i adore the sketchy look you both have going on, and vanpy the colours you used in yours are so nice!!
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby amithea » Sun Mar 13, 2016 9:35 pm

@poe dameron;; I think it looks good! Although, if you run your finger down your nose, or anyone else's, you'll notice that it has a gentle sloping shape. I'm not sure how to help you achieve that curve in your drawing, but if you tried to exaggerate it a little, it might start to look less like Voldemort?

I was going to ask if anyone had advice for me, but it's saying the file size of the photo I took is too big. I'll try again later when I'm on my laptop.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby emberonis » Tue Mar 15, 2016 1:28 am

@poe dameron;;:

Congratulations on starting drawing again! I'm excited to see where you go. :) My number one advice for drawing humans is to use references when you're feeling unsure. Or just in general. Also to pay attention to the faces around you, including yours, and really study them. Try and figure out what basic shapes make a face a face and duplicate that in your drawings. I was actually talking to a friend last night about drawing noses and there are a few methods to make that easier.

This is a great resource from CGCookie on DeviantArt. They also have a ton of other resources for faces that have proved really helpful for me. I probably would've been too intimidated to learn how to draw ears without their reference sheet for that.

Another thing is color! I see you planned out your color scheme? That's fantastic! I wish I did that more often, it can really help you get an idea of what you're doing colorwise before putting in the work of actually blocking in color. Something that is very helpful to keep in mind with color, though, is to make sure you mix it up. :) You'll get some really interesting results if you shade with a different color than your base color, often a color warmer or cooler than the base color. I can look up some resources on color theory if you'd like, but that would probably help make your painting look a little less flat. It's also good to have a good range of light to dark to play around with. For example, these are the colors you used:

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Whereas here is an example of a more varied color scheme.

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Because my doodle is blended so much it's a little hard to tell where I used what colors, partially because part of my technique is taking advantage of opacity in layers. I like to block in a color (for example, that darker red) and then lower the opacity until I'm satisfied. Then I'll color pick a color in between the base color and the color I just painted with and blend it. I also tend to put a thin layer of red over the nose, lips, ears, and cheeks, using a low opacity. If any of this is confusing, feel free to message me and ask me questions, and I'll do my best to explain better.

Overall my main advice would be to observe and experiment. Find out what works for you. Every artist has their own techniques and preferences which all add to their own personal style. So experimentation to figure out what those techniques are for you is super important (and also super fun.) Drawing from life and reference is also helpful because no artist can draw well without knowing what things look like. Most artists who don't use references and still manage to draw well do so only because they've drawn from references in the past and have a mental library of images to refer to in their heads. So always be open to using references! Drawing from life is also super super helpful. One of the things I've done is purchased a little tabletop mirror that I keep on my desk. If I'm not sure how to draw an expression, I can just glance over and see what it looks like. I've also used it to do self portraits and such. It's a little more challenging to draw from life than it is to draw from a photo, but it also tends to be more rewarding. Anyways! I didn't mean to type this much x3 Sorry for writing you a mini novel. I hope it helps!
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So I was trying to draw in a more 3/4s angle and it ended up being super tricky... But here it is. Input of any kind would be helpful! Thanks. ouo
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Stonefly » Thu Mar 17, 2016 4:19 am

@ALittleLoony - I have to say that piece is adorable! I think the background you have looks really good, it blends well at least with the CS colours(Im using business). The background itself is really well done, simple yet detailed.

@poe dameron;; - There isn't much that I can say that hasn't been said. It looks really good but it just could use some depth, making the shadows a little more noticeable.

@notifyneelix - Im not much of a human artist so there is nothing I can point out..It looks really good and I personally see nothing really wrong with it..

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Evyxle » Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:14 am

@Stonefly

i think your style is adorable! The build of the body is very realistic and nice looking. Though I feel the snout could match up with the jaw, be a bit less long and the ears a tad thicker, but it still looks adorable! Keep up the good work <3

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby amithea » Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:14 am

@gracietheshaymin
I love your art style, it's really beautiful and unique! I know that from seeing it this once, I could probably recognise it anywhere. I honestly don't know how you could improve. After all, I'm still learning.

Anyone got any advice on how I could improve these?
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby niconiishikino » Sun Mar 20, 2016 11:18 am

Hey guys! I'm new to this club!
I am looking for major advice for digital drawing, such as outlining without a curve tool and hands.
I am really wanting some advice on hand posing, could anyone give me advice? None of what I found works for me, I prefer to draw them without guidelines.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby nimuulap » Sun Mar 20, 2016 2:00 pm

amberwonder wrote:Anyone got any advice on how I could improve these?
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//hasn't been active lately so I'll try to help (*v*)b
ahhh I might sound a bit offensive or harsh but really, it's a good start and my advice is only my opinion and what I learned from the past (*v*)b so you have the right to not listen to my advice, I'm fine with it (*3*)b

Good stuff:
you got the overall anatomy idea of how "tall" each part should be (e.g. head, bust, etc.) and the choice of colour and your way of colouring is all good (*0*)b overall, great start and I'll only be commenting on some mistakes I would correct ;v;

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1. anatomy
yeh we all hate it, but that's okay *3* I feel that the way you drew the bust (?) (is that what you call it?) is a bit too skinny compared to the head and both shoulders should be relatively equal (even though she's facing at an angle). the arms are also a bit too skinny (according to anatomy) so it's best to make them a bit thicker ;v; the neck was just a tiny bit off and I added an extra redline just to adjust it a little ;v; Next, the position of the feet was off a bit because if you think about it, her entire upper half is facing the left, therefore everything should be slightly angled towards the left. The left foot's angle is placed as if she were facing "us" directly, but she's not, so just slightly angle that foot (pffftt ignore my drawing of feet I can't draw feet very well). The other foot is angled as if she was directly facing the left, which she isn't doing, she's only slightly angled. So again, the foot should be tilted towards the front a bit (as shown). Finally, the hands are at the right length but perhaps to make the hands look more... alive (?), take the challenge and draw more fingers (*v*)b that way you'll improve faster :D Do not fear drawing hands, draw more.

2. face
In general, the face is good, I'm just adding a bit of my opinion on it, that's all (*3*) The face you drew looks a bit too smooth, whereas the anime style (if that's what you're going for) tends to add a bit more "shape" into the face's overall shape. On the right I drew a smol diagram of how I usually draw heads. I start off with a circle and from there, I draw a line down, a line diagonally, then another line diagonally. It's almost as if you're drawing a pentagon...? //idk about that analogy
I also draw the eyeline usually to help me position the eyes, and they're usually at the same height as your ear. I'm not going to go more into detail because from the looks of it, you know how this works (*v*)b
Next, the eyes. Okay I know everyone has their own way to draw "anime styled eyes" but there's this one pet peeve of mine... it's when they draw the eyes and the do an outline of the light/white bubble thing. I know several artists do that, but I don't, so feel free to read this part or just skip it (*v*)b I usually draw the eye //not going into detail// and I colour the bottom half (because the top half should be shaded) and that's where you determine the colour of the eye. (btw don't use complete grey or complete black, use a grey colour or black colour that has a hint of another colour, like blue) Then you can add all that fancy shading and what not the the eye and lastly, you add the white bubble thing. No need for outline, just draw it on.

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the hair is actually really good, but maybe you could make it feel more natural (*v*)b hair is all over the place, add some random strands but not too much. Feathers should be more "loose" as well and not that stiff, give them life by adding waves and whatnot :D
Finally, the dress has some unnecessary "behind the leg" parts (idk if you know what I mean, but basically the part that's behind the legs). Usually, it's aligned like a U and you just add curves??? Idk how to explain it but there's a diagram on the side *3*

Overall, great job with this and again, these are only my opinions and you have the right to not listen to them (*v*)b

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And just out of curiosity, do you use a mouse to draw or a pen tablet? //because that's probably what you mean by the curve tool??? idk ;v;

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby song&storm » Mon Mar 21, 2016 4:47 am

    @what a catch
    Congrats on starting to draw again as well! As what notifyneelix has already said, learning and studying references are essential! You might get frustrating and/or unsatisfactory results, but I promise if you keep at it, your drawing will improve and you'll develop new techniques!

    @notifyneelix
    That looks amazing! The only thing I noticed is that the far side of the face (the left side cheek?) should be angled a teeeny bit upward? Sorry I can't elaborate on this further ahhh i can't redline.
    But I guess that really depends on the facial construction or features of the person/character too.

    @stonefly
    Not good with canine body structure, but overall I think it's great.

    @gracietheshaymin
    Looks good! I just thought the shadow from above the image (it's like a gradient from top to bottom, isn't it?) seems a bit ... consuming? and distracts me from the whole focus of the image. Unless that's really the effect you wanted to go for then ^^

    @amberwonder
    I think paluumin did a great job on critique, they have said everything so yeah haha. I love the colors on your second drawing!

    @moshe mouse
    I don't know what advice to give since it really helps me if I use references/guidelines (sometimes my own hands) when i draw hands. I kind of have long, bony fingers, so that helps me with the features!
    Use basic shapes, a pentagon-ish shape for the palm, rounded rectangles for the finger segments. The hand usually just a bit smaller than the face if it's placed over it. Know how the fingers are usually spaced and proportioned (especially the thumbs), then add details such as wrinkles and nails when you're satisfied with your work!

    @paluumin
    I love it! It provides an interesting focal point and a pop of color as well.
    I would suggest to use different color schemes for your next sky, like dawns or sunsets out something! Id love to see those.

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    So I really need help on a character here! More specifically on her clothing color scheme.

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    I would want my character's design/clothing/colors to speak about them first than them, (i hope that made sense!) so with that said, what do you think do these design, especially the color, say about the character's personality? I'm quite already satisfied with it but I'd love some crit.
    (The coat is supposed to be gold, on some screens it looks like a sickly-yellow-green, so yeah... I'll change that haha)

    Any opinions, suggestions, and ideas would be appreciated!

    (Please do not mind much the actual clothing details, especially for the second outfit because I know it looks somewhat bland/overused design, this is just a quick draw of a 'military inspired coat' but any help on improving that would be appreciated as well!
    Other members may remember me asking help for this character too before, but I went on hiatus and i only recently had the chance to work on and experiment with this character again! )
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