~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby moira » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:55 am

A terrible spin-off of Harry Potter with chatspeak and horrible grammar.
I only read one sentence and I was already revolted! Just search "My immortal" on Google.
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby Orbitsy » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:56 am

TheGreenHero wrote:A terrible spin-off of Harry Potter with chatspeak and horrible grammar.
I only read one sentence and I was already revolted! Just search "My immortal" on Google.


(and a warning, it contains swearing.)
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby Bluish » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:00 am

I googled it and it's... interesting, for lack of a less insulting word.

“Hey, it’s ok I don’t like him better than YOU!” I said.

“Really?” asked Draco sensitively and he put his arm around me all protective.

Draco Malfoy? Sensitive? Bwaahahahah.

And did anyone else notice that her speech marks look different? Mine look like "" and hers look like ””. Anyone else notice that?
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby WumbologyClass » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:07 am

Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!


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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby moira » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:09 am

Wumbology Class wrote:
Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!


NOOOO! [/caps]

Wow. I must be really out of it right now because I just read through that entire quote without seeing one grammatical mistake besides "plz". >.>" Then, I read through it again and noticed "crituque" "becuz"
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby honeydont » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:16 am

Aaaah! Stop shouting at us!

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Oi, that fanfic...

Words cannot describe it. I have a few fanfictions myself, but at least I take the care to type them out properly.

((Wait...it's illegal to use an already-created character in fanfictions? 0_o))
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby moira » Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:19 am

I have no idea. That's what I always thought. But, then again...I'm very tired right now and no one should probably take whatever I say literally. xD
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby WumbologyClass » Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:01 am

TheGreenHero wrote:
Wumbology Class wrote:
Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!


NOOOO! [/caps]

Wow. I must be really out of it right now because I just read through that entire quote without seeing one grammatical mistake besides "plz". >.>" Then, I read through it again and noticed "crituque" "becuz"

Greenie! No!
I made an art contest. Go check out the ticks who decided to put my art up for adoption. In the message/description, he/she was using bad grammar and smiley abuse! It made me mad.
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby honeydont » Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:19 am

^ Ick.

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Please move to begginers as this is not yet intermediate Qauility Work


Well, not only was that incredibly rude to post on someone's prized piece of artwork, its also mispelled. And it lacks a period. >.<
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Re: ~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

Postby Jenye » Mon Mar 07, 2011 11:27 am

YamiKokono wrote:^ Ick.

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Please move to begginers as this is not yet intermediate Qauility Work


Well, not only was that incredibly rude to post on someone's prized piece of artwork, its also mispelled. And it lacks a period. >.<


That is the rudest thing I have ever seen. Who would say that to someone?
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