A terrible spin-off of Harry Potter with chatspeak and horrible grammar.
I only read one sentence and I was already revolted! Just search "My immortal" on Google.
TheGreenHero wrote:A terrible spin-off of Harry Potter with chatspeak and horrible grammar.
I only read one sentence and I was already revolted! Just search "My immortal" on Google.
“Hey, it’s ok I don’t like him better than YOU!” I said.
“Really?” asked Draco sensitively and he put his arm around me all protective.
Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!
Wumbology Class wrote:Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!
NOOOO! [/caps]
TheGreenHero wrote:Wumbology Class wrote:Failure wrote:PLZ GIVE COMMENTS OR CRITUQUE PLZZZZ I WORKED SOOOO HARD ON THIS AND ITS HARD BECUZ I USE A LAPTOP AND IN THIS ONE I USED A MOUSE SO PLZ COMMENT/CRIT!!!
NOOOO! [/caps]
Wow. I must be really out of it right now because I just read through that entire quote without seeing one grammatical mistake besides "plz". >.>" Then, I read through it again and noticed "crituque" "becuz"
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Please move to begginers as this is not yet intermediate Qauility Work
YamiKokono wrote:^ Ick.Note To Mods:
Please move to begginers as this is not yet intermediate Qauility Work
Well, not only was that incredibly rude to post on someone's prized piece of artwork, its also mispelled. And it lacks a period. >.<
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