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Re: The Artist Army

Postby crystal gryphon » Sun Jan 24, 2016 6:39 pm

I'd love some critique on these!

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This was meant to be a redraw of this: http://crystal-gryphon.deviantart.com/a ... -362424767 But i got a bit carried a way haha
There's also another version, with blue lighting instead http://sta.sh/0f4pllsxb3b

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Aaand some Undertale fanart. I am absolutely in love this this game and Sans, and i've been drawing fanart for it pretty much non stop since october. ;v;
I actually don't draw Sans like this anymore though, so just... ignore his entire head XD
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I don't have time right now, but i'll do some redlines later!
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby luca balsa. » Wed Jan 27, 2016 9:49 am

Marking this form :3
Also Crystal gryphon I think your drawing are amazing. To be honest there is nothing that needs to be changed or edited to them I think there great :)
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Wolfunicorn » Thu Jan 28, 2016 7:33 am

Hello...
I think I'll be joining in on this forum...
I'm not a very expiranced artist so yeah...

@hnai your lady gaga drawing is really pretty, I like the shading and the way you did the eyes.

Also thoughts on try human drawing? It's the human version of a wolf from another game known as animaljam. I'm not really good at drawing humans so any critique would be helpful..
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(Sorry it's so big >~<)
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby vampy!! » Thu Jan 28, 2016 10:34 am

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this is some of my most recent art aaaaa idk if I like it? it's literally the quickest sketch ever for dcay lol

@wolfunicorn: v cute!!
@crystal gryphon: omg sans looks awesome
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby VAALRAVN » Thu Jan 28, 2016 5:00 pm

      @everyone
      omg. i think... okay, so, i have always failed at draw
      ing people. a few weeks ago, i started sketching and
      to my amazement, it turned out amazing. so below i
      s a drawing of my tokyo ghoul ocs. they don't have na
      mes yet, so suggestions are helpful.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Not me nope » Wed Feb 24, 2016 4:49 am

Aaaaaaaa.

Wolfunicorn, that human sketch is really cool- you've captured the character so well! Can I just suggest doing some quick drawings of the human body? Get some random images of humans in different positions and try really quickly sketching them out to get a feel for the kind of proportions and stuff a human should have to get faster and more confident with drawing them :) A really amazing start though, I'd love to see what else you do. If you do do some sketches later feel free to send me a PM!

Vampyyyy, I love that quick sketch it clearly shows how well you know anatomy. It's so artsy too- the white kind of reminded me of cobwebs at first. c:

shiroyasha that hand is really cool, great use of foreshortening :) The sketchy style really works! Next you should try clean lines just to see and experiment with how it turns out! By all means start sketchy but I'd love to see what else you can do.

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Based off a photo, but this is for my small contextual references book for A level. It's a tonal sketch of a sculpture. Originally A3 but this may be the scanned and scaled down version, I took the photo a while back so I'm not sure. Just thought I'd share some recent stuff.

Also also also first ever oil painting! :)

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby song&storm » Wed Feb 24, 2016 1:32 pm

@Not me nope: those are amazing! I thought I was really looking at a photo of a sculpture.
That oil painting is fantastic as well.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby teddybutch » Thu Feb 25, 2016 2:36 pm

@everyone: wow, your art is all so amazing!
@not me nope: I love that sketch! For a moment I thought it was an actual sculpture!
@wolfunicorn: that's a really cool personification! I love the mask!
@vampy!!: I love the shading on the face, it works really well with the character!
I have a thing I'd like to share...
i call it Ophelia
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby song&storm » Thu Feb 25, 2016 3:08 pm

@Pareidiolia
I love the concept!
You can focus on improving the lineart first--I'm not much of a digital artist and my first few digital arts are quite sketch-y as well ahaha--but you can make the lines a lot more smoother.

Looking for critique for my watercolor piece over here (click image to enlarge):

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby meowool » Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:09 am

Not me nope wrote:


shiroyasha that hand is really cool, great use of foreshortening :) The sketchy style really works! Next you should try clean lines just to see and experiment with how it turns out! By all means start sketchy but I'd love to see what else you can do.

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Based off a photo, but this is for my small contextual references book for A level. It's a tonal sketch of a sculpture. Originally A3 but this may be the scanned and scaled down version, I took the photo a while back so I'm not sure. Just thought I'd share some recent stuff.






Whuuuut!? That is amazing!! It looks like I'm looking at an old photo! My GCSE art teacher liked us working big...had to make a A1 plaster cast to pastlet onto, which he then smudged, and my final piece was A0...

Recently I've been doing little watercolours, which are really relaxing! https://www.instagram.com/p/BAaWfYYF3eO ... olvers_art
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