~*The Grammar Police Station (Open for officers)

[International]

My eyes are in pain because of my old glasses. Supposed to be getting new ones Monday, though.

I got this in a PM; my friend, Midnightrain21, was invited to a Private Role Play. This is how the person Role Plays;

Okay, so I someone asked me to be in an 1x1 with them and, as always, I asked to see an example of their Rping and this is what they sent me:

chase sorted his golden brown hair out that was dangling down into his face and aggrivaing his scars. he groaned then pulled glass out of his smuscles in his chest. he walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets ke had killed erlier that morning. he tore off his shirt and wrapped it round his broken wrist. he stropped through a park the stood at the base of the tree yuka was in. he kicked it hard. it creaked then tilted slowly. chase saw yuka jumped up grabbed her then put her down on the floor. he smirked "you could die but ive got a fight to get to goodbye" he smiled as the tree fell down he jumped 10 ft into the air then over the tree trunk. he shuffled down the path not turning back.

Just seeing it drives me insane.

Wow, some of those "words" aren't even real words and I can't even guess what some of them are supposed to be.

[Bayzen]

My eyes are in pain because of my old glasses. Supposed to be getting new ones Monday, though.

I got this in a PM; my friend, Midnightrain21, was invited to a Private Role Play. This is how the person Role Plays;

Okay, so I someone asked me to be in an 1x1 with them and, as always, I asked to see an example of their Rping and this is what they sent me:

chase sorted his golden brown hair out that was dangling down into his face and aggrivaing his scars. he groaned then pulled glass out of his smuscles in his chest. he walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets ke had killed erlier that morning. he tore off his shirt and wrapped it round his broken wrist. he stropped through a park the stood at the base of the tree yuka was in. he kicked it hard. it creaked then tilted slowly. chase saw yuka jumped up grabbed her then put her down on the floor. he smirked "you could die but ive got a fight to get to goodbye" he smiled as the tree fell down he jumped 10 ft into the air then over the tree trunk. he shuffled down the path not turning back.

Just seeing it drives me insane.

I honestly couldn't understand half of that. It just makes me sad that some people count this as acceptable. Merely capitalizing and correcting words that are obviously incorrect isn't all that difficult, just for a start.

[MochaTheLlama]

My eyes are in pain because of my old glasses. Supposed to be getting new ones Monday, though.

I got this in a PM; my friend, Midnightrain21, was invited to a Private Role Play. This is how the person Role Plays;

Okay, so I someone asked me to be in an 1x1 with them and, as always, I asked to see an example of their Rping and this is what they sent me:

chase sorted his golden brown hair out that was dangling down into his face and aggrivaing his scars. he groaned then pulled glass out of his smuscles in his chest. he walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets ke had killed erlier that morning. he tore off his shirt and wrapped it round his broken wrist. he stropped through a park the stood at the base of the tree yuka was in. he kicked it hard. it creaked then tilted slowly. chase saw yuka jumped up grabbed her then put her down on the floor. he smirked "you could die but ive got a fight to get to goodbye" he smiled as the tree fell down he jumped 10 ft into the air then over the tree trunk. he shuffled down the path not turning back.

Just seeing it drives me insane.

The thing is, it makes no sense and has very bad grammar/spelling.

[dearly beloved]

'rainpelt?"ravenstar fainted when he woke up he said ''ok i gess..''

<-- Tick wrote:

I wrote:

'Rainpelt?" Ravenstar fainted. When he woke up he said, ''Ok I guess..''

[dooze]

Bookmarking

[WumbologyClass]

Ack! I read a YouTube comment:

"this music is 4 loosers"

Losers!! Not loosers.
And the music was epic

[Chara Dreemurr]

You only think it's wrong...

[Lady Yuuki]

Hey, sorry for not being here lately. Lots of things on my teenage mind lately. <3 So, I wanted to post so you guys don't think I left you all.

[Bluish]

My eyes are in pain because of my old glasses. Supposed to be getting new ones Monday, though.

I got this in a PM; my friend, Midnightrain21, was invited to a Private Role Play. This is how the person Role Plays;

Okay, so I someone asked me to be in an 1x1 with them and, as always, I asked to see an example of their Rping and this is what they sent me:

chase sorted his golden brown hair out that was dangling down into his face and aggrivaing his scars. he groaned then pulled glass out of his smuscles in his chest. he walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets ke had killed erlier that morning. he tore off his shirt and wrapped it round his broken wrist. he stropped through a park the stood at the base of the tree yuka was in. he kicked it hard. it creaked then tilted slowly. chase saw yuka jumped up grabbed her then put her down on the floor. he smirked "you could die but ive got a fight to get to goodbye" he smiled as the tree fell down he jumped 10 ft into the air then over the tree trunk. he shuffled down the path not turning back.

Just seeing it drives me insane.

I un-officially dub myself as the un-official correctinator. [I know you guys can understand that x3]

Chase sorted out his golden brown hair that was dangling down his face and aggravating his scars. He groaned then pulled some glass out of the muscles on his chest. He walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets he had killed earlier in the morning. Chase tore off his shirt and wrapped it around his broken wrist. Whilst walking through a park, he stopped at the base of the tree, where Yuka was relaxing. Chase kicked the tree, hard. It creaked, then started to tilt. Chase noticed Yuka in the tree, so he jumped up and grabbed her from it, lowering her to the ground safely. He smirked and said "You could have died. I've got to get to a fight though, so goodbye." Chase smiled as the tree was felled. He jumped high into the air, over the tree and shuffled down the path, not looking back.

[Turq8]

My eyes are in pain because of my old glasses. Supposed to be getting new ones Monday, though.

I got this in a PM; my friend, Midnightrain21, was invited to a Private Role Play. This is how the person Role Plays;

Okay, so I someone asked me to be in an 1x1 with them and, as always, I asked to see an example of their Rping and this is what they sent me:

chase sorted his golden brown hair out that was dangling down into his face and aggrivaing his scars. he groaned then pulled glass out of his smuscles in his chest. he walked through a few gardens then killed the owners of the pets ke had killed erlier that morning. he tore off his shirt and wrapped it round his broken wrist. he stropped through a park the stood at the base of the tree yuka was in. he kicked it hard. it creaked then tilted slowly. chase saw yuka jumped up grabbed her then put her down on the floor. he smirked "you could die but ive got a fight to get to goodbye" he smiled as the tree fell down he jumped 10 ft into the air then over the tree trunk. he shuffled down the path not turning back.

Just seeing it drives me insane.

I honestly couldn't understand half of that. It just makes me sad that some people count this as acceptable. Merely capitalizing and correcting words that are obviously incorrect isn't all that difficult, just for a start.

From last night, but I had to add.

Not to mention, the character is a total Gary-Stu.

I think this is what they said (or meant to say, with some rephrasing and words added/switched out):

Chase rearranged his golden brown hair; it was dangling into his face and aggravating his scars. He groaned, then pulled some glass out of the muscles in his chest.
He walked through a few gardens, then killed the owners of the pets that he had killed earlier that morning. He tore off his shirt and wrapped it around his broken wrist. He strolled through a park to stand at the base of the tree that Yuka was in. He kicked it, hard. It creaked, then began to slowly tilt to the side. Chase saw Yuka, jumped up, grabbed her, then brought her down to the floor. He smirked at her.
"I could kill you, but I've got a fight to get to. Goodbye."
He smiled as the tree finally fell over. He jumped ten feet into the air, over the fallen tree trunk, and shuffled down the path, not turning back.

God-modding, Gary-Stu, terrible grammar and spelling, what else? The power to knock a tree down with one kick, the ability to jump ten feet in the air, and he's a mass-murderer. Fantastic. T.T