1000 Umbrellas wrote:Has anyone dabbled in fanfiction?
1000 Umbrellas wrote:Has anyone dabbled in fanfiction?
LOCW_Bluestarwarrior wrote:Username: LOCW_Bluestarwarrior
Nickname: LOCW, Blue, Jedi
Writing Preferences (Poet, Novelist, roleplayer...): Poetry, RPs, fantasy/sci-fi novels, some realistic fiction, fanfics, comics, goofy plays/skits, essays for school... XD
Example (Can be anything; must be a good length):
Enjoy a little thing I typed up for my amusement...LOCW_Bluestarwarrior wrote:LOCW_Bluestarwarrior wrote:1524
Okay! It's very sad, so be warned...
Jo=Badguy Jedi, Cossan, Kiandra=Three best friends, good guys, (Ki and Cossan are in love), Senka=Jedi's padawan
(I only own Jedi, Lukey owns Ki, and Silver owns the rest, but I got permission.)
(Takes place on top of the Jedi temple.)
Jedi's eyes flashed as he countered Jo's saber. "Is that all you've got?" he hissed as he clung to the spire, aware of the speeders flying by below. "I'm just getting warmed up, you fracking furball!" Jo yelled, and spun both of her sabers at Jedi, who was forced top let go and step backwards before he blocked and lept to safety. Senka, a horrified onlooker, could do nothing. Jo had sliced her saber to peices earlier.
Jedi swung hard at Jo, who melted into a shadow, and floated backwards, laughing. "Still think you can win?" Jedi looked her straight in the eyes. "Always."
Jedi suddenly lunged forwards, trying to take Jo by surprise. She yelped as he barreled into her chest, sending her sprawling. Jedi leaned over her, both of the half dangling over the edge. "Had enough yet?" He was surprised it had worked. "Goodbye, Jo." He leaned forwards, saber close to her throat, trying to rid the galaxy of this Sith forever. But then, it happened.
Jo kicked Jedi in the chest sending him backwards, and swung her saber at him. He quickly blocked, but then was kicked again, and as he flung out his right arm for balance while clutching the spire it happened. Sillouted against the setting sun, Jo made her move, and stabbed downwards. Jedi gasped, at the searing aweful heat in his stomach. It was unbearable. He looked down at the saber Jo was still holding. "S-Senka," he said in a strangled voice. "I-I think you'll need a new Master."
Senka screamed as Jedi collapsed backwards, Jo romoving her saber. Just in the nick of time, Senka used the Force to stop Jedi from falling over the edge.
Jo grinned, laughed, and said "Very unwise of you, Jedi." She jumped over the edge, to a waiting speeder and took off.
Senka rushed to Jedi. "Master," she said, crying now. "P-please..."
Jedi looked at her, although his vision was going a bit blurry. "W-what?" he asked painfully. He was aware that Cossan and Kiandra, who were trapped below since the door leading up was jammed by Jo, would be wondering what had happened. Cossan... Kiandra... Hear me, please.... I'm dying.
Jedi, from seemingly far away, heard an aweful banging noise, which soon sounded like an explosion as Cossan and Kiandra ran to him. Cossan dropped to his knees. "No," he breathed. "What happened?" Kiandra asked, voice catching. Senka tearfully xplained what happened. Jedi heard all of this through a pained haze, not really taking in any of it.
"J-Jo," said Senka, still crying. "Jo did this."
Jedi moved his head slightly. "C-Cossan.... Kiandra.... Look at m-me," he said hoarsely.
Cossan leaned down to Jedi and stared into his green, faintly glowing eyes. "What is it my friend?" he asked. Kiandra followed suited, with Senka on the other side.
Jedi looked at him. "C-Cossan, my first friend after my brother betrayed me, I-I will m-miss you," he said. His eyes slowly shifted to Kiandra. "Ii-t is s-strange to see you s-standing still," he mused hoarsely. Kiandra wiped her eyes and smiled a bit through her tears. "Funny until the end," she whispered. Jedi's eyes got brighter for a minute. "St-stay with Cossan," he said. "I was r-rooting for you from the start, and I-I'll miss you." He gulped.
Jedi's gaze shifted and finally came to rest on Senka. "You m-must find yourself a n-new Master," he whispered. "Kiandra would be... H-happy to take you, I assume." He gulped again, and looked at all of them in turn. "M-may the Forced be with you all, and I'm s-so s-sorry...." He blinked one last time, a small sad smiled playing on his face, and sighed a bit as he closed his eyes.
His glow went out.
And the sun went down.
Cossan straighten up, and looked at Ki. "He once told me that when he died, he would become the Force. Why is he still here?" Kiandra on shook her head in response, tears still streaming. They all were crying now, and as Kiandra gently lifted Jedi with the Force to bring him back inside, Senka said "W-would you be happy to take me as y-your padawan?" Kiandra smiled sadly. "Of course."
They walked back into the top of the temple. Cossan shakily said "What will we do now?" He was even more saddened to think of all the times Jedi had said that. Kiandra slowly said "Well, there is only one more thing we can do, isn't there? He needs to be cremated."
They set up a pyre in the top of the temple that night, and as they were getting ready, Cossan gently lifted Jedi's lightsaber. "What do you think he wants us to do with this?" But, as he spoke, a little voice sounded in his head. It is yours now... was all it said. Without a word, Cossan and Kiandra shared a look of understanding, and Cossan simply tucked it into his belt.
The flames climbed higher, and all three thought, in the last second, that they caught a flash of feathers and a swipe of blue in the smoke that floated away into the night and out to the stars.
Jedi was truely gone.
Enjoy!
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Here! >:3LOCW_Bluestarwarrior wrote:1543
WAIT! There be more!!!
Cossan stared into the flames as if he was seeing his own end reflected in them. Wait a second, he thought. Why isn't Jedi on fire...?
Suddenly, there was a disturbance behind him. All three turned in unison to see... Jedi?!
Jedi was there, grinning and holding a small remote. "Hey," he said casually.
"Bu-bu-bu..." was all the three could say. Then, Kiandra burst out and said "You're a ghost!"
"Naw," Jedi said, and put a paw on her shoulder. "See?"
"BUT HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!" cried Senka. "We saw you die!"
Jedi got a sly look on his face. "Holograms, see?" He held up the remote. "That's why the other Jedi isn't burning. Jo was a hologram, too."
Cossan looked suspicious. "And that voice in my head..."
"Was me," Jedi finished.
"But WHY in the universe would you pull such a scary trick???!!!!" they all yelled at Jedi.
He walked right up to Cossan, and poked him in the nose.
"April fools."
And they all went to get coffee.
Links to stories / roleplays:
Crossover Star Wars and Warriors
Written by my friends and I *WARNING!* Highly weird and makes no sense!!!
More serious and written by my friends and I
A poem that isn't what it seems
A prophecy from a Warriors RP
The actual Warriors RP (there are some connected RP's but this is the only one I co-own with Solardaemon)
I hope my webcomic fanfiction counts
Other: I enjoy writing a lot, and want to become a professional fantasy/sci-fi novelist one day. I'm sorry if I don't post one of my best stories, I want to publish it one day, and I'm afraid it may get stolen. Sorry if I seem rude on untrusting about that, I just prefer to be safe rather than sorry. But if I did, I have physical evidence that I own it.
Electra Heart wrote:1000 Umbrellas wrote:Has anyone dabbled in fanfiction?
I started a Harry Potter one, but I never finished it. I guess I just didn't like writing with other people's characters/worlds. I read fanfiction sometimes, though.
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