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by Bluish » Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:45 pm
Oh! Totodile <3
The Dungeon Mistress wrote: To change the subject from fighting and whatnot, look at this post. It's not bad, but it shows that people still need a lot of work.
Tick wrote:Mmmmmmm! It was my sister's birthday the other day and I had 2 massive slices of... CHOCOLATE CAKE! with chocolate ice cream... mmmmmmmmmmmm... it was sooooooo nice!

This post was found in this area of the forum and has:
>Caps abuse
>Over use of elipse
>To many letters
>Writing numbers instead of words
>An exclimation mark in the middle of a sentence
A better post would have been:
Edited Tick wrote:Yum! It was my sister's birthday the other day and I had two massive slices of
chocolate cake with chocolate ice cream- it was totally awesome!

Don't you mean ellipse? And an ellipse is a circle/oval ><
And 'exclamation'. Oh, just curious, what's so bad about writing 2 instead of two? It's not incorrect.
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by Geronimo. » Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:50 pm
Eh, it's early and I can't spell.
It's not grammatically incorrect, but it ust seems lazy and every thing seems to flow better as all words. But that's just me.
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by Sheppie » Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:55 pm
choco wrote:Can you people please stop spamming? I went to school on Friday, and our teacher spelled words wrong when we had spelling.
We're not spamming, we're talking/ranting. This entire post is just filled with ranting and talking.
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