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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Pingutaina » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:18 am

I'm not very sure if I qualify as semi-literate rper! Could someone with experience tell if I am? This is the introduction of my latest rp: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=192672

“Pyrewolves… Pyrewolves… Pyrewolves…” my mind repeated the word over and over and over. I awoke in a cold sweat, breathing heavily, my heart racing. I looked around me. No Pyrewolves, just forest. The night was dark, dimly lit with the glow of a full moon. The forest was tranquil, the only sound heard for miles around was the serene sound of wind blowing through the orange leaves of autumn.

I soon calmed down, feeling there was nothing to worry about.… but my mind continued to torture me. The sound of the eerie dark Pyrewolf howl still rang in my ears. The sight of the tussled rough creatures made me shudder. I still remembered its chin dipped in red blood from its latest victim. The Pyrewolf’s fangs showed, sharp, long teeth, sticking out at either side of the red-covered muzzle.

They’re nicknamed ‘Pyrewolves’, short for Vampire Wolves. There was no sign of tough wear on the pearl-white daggers, for the beasts had no use of meat, since their diet consisted only of fresh blood. Used perhaps in fierce but rare battle, the main use of the sharp teeth was for the extraction the warm blood of an animal. Not much was known of these wolf-like creatures, except what was seen. No one’s even sure if there’s more than one of these Pyrewolves.

Just like a Vampire, a Pyrewolf is stronger, faster, and more agile than a normal wolf. They were not invincible, but quite tougher. Their fur is usually a dark color, perfect camouflage for the dark forest night. The nose of a Pyrewolf was built for finding the smallest trace of blood or tracking down a victim. Their eyes glow a dark ominous red at night. The only fault in their seemingly perfect anatomy, is their eyesight. During the night, their eyesight is almost perfect. But during the day, the sunlight weakens their eyes.

Though they are nearly the same size of a normal wolf, they are twice in everything, except wits. It is easy to outsmart a Pyrewolf. It’s not easy to outrun one. Only the wisest wolves in the forest have escaped the claws of the Vampire Wolves Those have been the ones who have most provided information of them to fellow wolves.

It hadn’t always been this way, though. Shasta Valley used to be free of the fierce beasts. They were presumed to have come from distant lands, perhaps in search of prey. It had been this way for a few years now, and the wolves feared they were here to stay. The animals of the forest lived under the eye of the Pyrewolf, they never felt safe or completely happy. They always knew the Pyrewolves would be looking for their next kill. It was uncommon to witness a kill, since it was done during midnight, in the most desolate and remote parts of the forest.


People don't seem to respect the fact that some roleplays are semi-lit. It's happening in my roleplay, but I'm just afraid to hurt their feelings if I kick them out! *sigh
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Metallic Dragon » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:29 am

I'd say that qualifies as semi lit^^ Also, you created the roleplay and you should enforce the rules. Tell them that if they don't start writing more literate, you're going to have to ask them to leave(It's hard, I know, but they tend to listen)
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Pingutaina » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:39 am

(EDIT)
Yeah, I sort of told them to please write in complete sentences and to improve their grammar/spellnig. It's helped, I think. Thank youuu! I'm happy that it qualifies.

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Favorite type of RP: Wolf Romance/War
Sample of writing: *See first post above*
Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have: viewtopic.php?f=7&t=192672&start=0
Thought I'd add: I create my roleplays offline on my computer. Currently I have a few different ones, but none of them are certain to be 'published'. I've made two roleplays where wolves lead a battle against a different animal. The first I made, which totaled 131 pages and is currently dead, was about wolves against giant mutant-wolf creatures, called Dewolves(Short for Daemon Wolves). The second roleplay is currently at 8 pages. I started it yesterday, and so far, a good amount of people have joined! This roleplay is about wolves against Pyrewolves(Short of Vampire Wolves).
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Metallic Dragon » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:44 am

I looked over some of the posts, and yeah, some of them aren't being very semi lit at all >.< Well, a certain one in particular anyway. I hate when people are like that though, it drives me crazy. I really love to have semi-literate roleplays but it is hard to find good people who want to join these days.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby keydemon » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:47 am

I know, mine usually die.
We had a bad experience kicking someone out once, it was no fun. ^^;;
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Pingutaina » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:49 am

Metallic Dragon wrote:I looked over some of the posts, and yeah, some of them aren't being very semi lit at all >.< Well, a certain one in particular anyway. I hate when people are like that though, it drives me crazy. I really love to have semi-literate roleplays but it is hard to find good people who want to join these days.


I know, right?? It drives me crazy too. It's getting increasingly hard to find good rpers these days... -_- I know only a handful of semi-lit rpers.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby keydemon » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:51 am

I think every time one of use makes a new semi-literate RP, we should post it here. Haha.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Metallic Dragon » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:52 am

Ninjutsu wrote:I know, mine usually die.
We had a bad experience kicking someone out once, it was no fun. ^^;;


I truly hate kicking people out of my roleplays, but I've had to do it before(sadly, they had caused enough damage while I was on vacation that I couldn't repair the roleplay to where it had formerly been and it was abandoned by everyone but two slightly inactive roleplayers)

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Metallic Dragon wrote:I looked over some of the posts, and yeah, some of them aren't being very semi lit at all >.< Well, a certain one in particular anyway. I hate when people are like that though, it drives me crazy. I really love to have semi-literate roleplays but it is hard to find good people who want to join these days.


I know, right?? It drives me crazy too. It's getting increasingly hard to find good rpers these days... -_- I know only a handful of semi-lit rpers.


I think part of the problem may just be texting on cell phones. People don't bother to type out the full sentence a lot of the time. Because of this we end up with spelling errors, chat speak, and little to no punctuation. It makes me sad to see it getting worse.

Ninjutsu wrote:I think every time one of use makes a new semi-literate RP, we should post it here. Haha.


We should! That way the semi-lit people could find them easily and maybe we could have more around the site.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby antler apathy » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:53 am

Metallic Dragon wrote:
Ninjutsu wrote:I think every time one of use makes a new semi-literate RP, we should post it here. Haha.


We should! That way the semi-lit people could find them easily and maybe we could have more around the site.


Haven't posted on here in a while, but that sounds fun ^.^ I actually had a plot in mind for one.
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Re: Semi-Literate+ RPers Club

Postby Pingutaina » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:57 am

Ninjutsu wrote:I think every time one of use makes a new semi-literate RP, we should post it here. Haha.

Good idea heheh. I'll tell my cousin, Raquella, about this. She's a great roleplayer. She's probably around advanced/literate level. I'm beginning to understand why my Spelling Book is alway telling me how important good spelling is DX
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