- @Sketchi, Marmoset & soul; Thanks so much for the suggestions on the feather wigs. It honestly never even occurred to me to look that up and they were super helpful.
The issue is more my drawing the feathers though. I mean, it's really great to look at those references, and I know how it's supposed to look in my head, but it's more an issue of actually how to draw them. There are some great tutorials on individual feathers but there are minimal on actually how to draw feathers together and actually have them look like feathers.
Does that make sense?
@Yuki; What about using this site? Just find a picture that you think describes her style really well (Like an awesome punk type picture) and put that into the site (the little camera button in the top right corner) and see what palates it gives you? This one is pretty cool. Just searching Punk gives some good ideas.
@meowool; That's a really cute style you have there! Other than what people have already said, I can't really pick anything that isn't right. Great job!
@Catastrophe Blend: Wow! That's amazing! I can't paint well to save my life so that's pretty awesome! Where's her other wing though? You might just want to put an indicator of where that is if it's folded up or something. I agree with amymist too though, the tail does look like it's coming from a position that's a little awkward.
Really great job though! I love the detail you've put into everything.
@Soloby; That's really cool! The style is adorable! I don't think there's much advice I can give past the redlines you've already gotten. I'd love to see the finished work though
@Kiwi in a bottle; Those pixels are adorable!! How much would it be to do a few for me hmmmm??
Here's a cute little tree tutorial. It really depends on what plant and part of the plant you're wanting to improve on though.
@Rune: I'm really bad at explaining things so I've done a redline for you. Take it with a grain of salt because I am certainly not the best artist out there, but I hope that helps! :3
@orion: Oh my! That is beautiful!! I'm so jealous! o3o
@Ciriun: Well, considering I too need to work on my shading, I can't really give you any creditable tips but the lineart looks great! I found thistutorial immensely helpful though.
@Shining Armor: That's incredibly adorable <3 The only thing I can commend on is probably the length of the front legs but that's already been pointed out and red lined for you. Other than that, it looks fantastic!
@corgie: I <3 that chibi so much!! The only thing I can suggest is probably making the hands a bit fuller and the fingers less pointed, but I'm horrible at hands so I can't exactly red line it
Be prepared for an incoming PM about your humanoid prices though
@salt: Omg, you have no idea how much I adore the style you have there! Unfortunately I can't really comment on hands (I suck at them T_T), but the right shoe looks a little far over for the leg?
Other than that, please please link me to your art shop because I wants your skillz! ~030~
@Pikachu: Please refer to the rules on the front page which require you to comment on at least 10 pieces of art/posts above your own before asking for a critique or red line (Though check the rule because I may not have quoted it correctly). After that, just post what you want red lined and we'd all be happy to do it for you
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That all being said. I would love love love some red lines on this piece please! Especially the one lying down (*derp* Nix can't draw poses *derp*)
