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[kelly.]

I would like to join
Username: kelly.
Nickname: kell or kelly c:
Favorite type of Rp: human realistic and animal realisic
Literacy level: semi-lit to low lit
Current Role Plays: this, this, and this one. the second one is a roleplay by me, bubbles, and hipster,.

[R A I N]

I like it ;u; especially the pain and panic part, because people might not take that as a literal thing- even though it is- adding to the confusion. which is awesome. I did have one question, which is more curiosity than anything- you said these are half bloods, which reminded me, who's the other half of the biological parental position for these teens? not really important, just curious. the only critique I could give is perhaps make it a little more ambiguous? just for a little more mystery or something, so they have to work a little to figure out what to do x3 unless it's meant to be more straight forward? Greek prophecies just always seemed kinda crazy and confusing to me, like riddles, though that depends on who gives them I suppose. up to you, of course.
and wait what are mod positions open because oh I just might want to request being able to apply like maybe I don't know I've never done it before but I reaaaally love this thread. long rambley sentence = nervousness

Okay i'll see what i can do
and the parents part. Well i was thinking of a reason why the kids were given away.
what if their biological parent was killed whilst trying to save the baby.
it could be cause of the prophecy and that pain and panic had tried to get the kids out of the way before they started with the plan to free hades

Yes the mods spots are open. I'm trying to decide if we do need a mod while the group is still so small.
and thank you for liking the thread!
Like i said let me think about it

@kelly.

Your accepted
Welcome to the club and thanks for joining

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[iiktome]

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Member #: seven
Role Play Category: Humanoid Fantasy / Animal Fantasy / Human Realistic / Animal Realistic
Role Play Type: Romance / Kidnap / Fantasy / Sci-Fi
Literacy: four+ sentences with correct grammar.
Plot: {{ Not the plot but the entering post. }}
My vision is getting clearer; I can see where I’m heading with its greenery and large leaves that make the stone path narrow and almost impossible to pass through. The cold stone seeps through my paws and throws shivers down my spine as a take each step toward my goal. The light gleams through the leaves and branches and I can almost taste the sweetness of it all. The soft scent tickles my nostrils, making me want to sneeze, and the light breeze whispers in my ears “Paradise”. It’s all a dream though, this paradise doesn’t even exist in some minds anymore as the thought of it seems too distant but for now we still trek for it. We will dream on about the fantasy of hope and the desire will live in our hearts even though we may not think it does. We’re all bound to this; this is what keeps us living on. This is paradise and the pack of dreams will live on.
Species: wolves
I need help with: I'm in need of critique and comments. This role-play actually has been posted by me but I am confused as of why I only have two members. I'd love to hear 'em. c:

[soda]

Rain ;; ahhh, okay. by parents, do you mean both the gods they're descendents of as well, or just the human[?] side? either way, that sounds like a good idea. like perhaps one of the steps in breaking the seal is offering the 'souls' of a god[dess], and the other half of the parent position thing was a lesser god[dess]? or they were just killed trying to protect their children, either way x3
alright, thank you .u.




Ｉ ＨＡＶＥ ＡＮ ＩＤＥＡ
Member #: seven
Role Play Category: Humanoid Fantasy / Animal Fantasy / Human Realistic / Animal Realistic
Role Play Type: Romance / Kidnap / Fantasy / Sci-Fi
Literacy: four+ sentences with correct grammar.
Plot: {{ Not the plot but the entering post. }}
My vision is getting clearer; I can see where I’m heading with its greenery and large leaves that make the stone path narrow and almost impossible to pass through. The cold stone seeps through my paws and throws shivers down my spine as a take each step toward my goal. The light gleams through the leaves and branches and I can almost taste the sweetness of it all. The soft scent tickles my nostrils, making me want to sneeze, and the light breeze whispers in my ears “Paradise”. It’s all a dream though, this paradise doesn’t even exist in some minds anymore as the thought of it seems too distant but for now we still trek for it. We will dream on about the fantasy of hope and the desire will live in our hearts even though we may not think it does. We’re all bound to this; this is what keeps us living on. This is paradise and the pack of dreams will live on.
Species: wolves
I need help with: I'm in need of critique and comments. This role-play actually has been posted by me but I am confused as of why I only have two members. I'd love to hear 'em. c:



hm, well it seems really cool and interesting so far- I especially like the almost mysterious aspect of it. is there a more straightforward explanation of what the exact plot is though? I might be able to help a little better if I knew what exactly it was about ^^ also, the problem could be something as simple as not many people seeing it. have you tried posting it in the roleplay advertisement thread thingy? more people who are able to see it would mean more people willing to join. c;

[glassea]

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Member #: six
Role Play Category: humanoid fantasy
Role Play Type: hunger games
Literacy: semi-literate
Plot: here
Species: human
I need help with: making sure the introduction makes sense. c;

[R A I N]

[list]Rain ;; ahhh, okay. by parents, do you mean both the gods they're descendents of as well, or just the human[?] side? either way, that sounds like a good idea. like perhaps one of the steps in breaking the seal is offering the 'souls' of a god[dess], and the other half of the parent position thing was a lesser god[dess]? or they were just killed trying to protect their children, either way x3
alright, thank you .u.

Just the human parent and it was to save the children.
One of of the seals requires the blood of all the gods and they believe that the children's blood would work been enough.
So one night all twelve families were attacked.
the Gods could only save the children

[R A I N]

Ah! I'm back again
Jeez I'm so indecive lately

Okay this is about the demigod role play
Should I make:
1. preset characters and forms
2. Premade form
3. or leave it for the members to make?

[iiktome]

@NeonSpirits Well really what I was thinking was that maybe they're traveling through and get caught into all sorts of things. It was pretty much loosely created because I like to go as the thread forms more, letting my members take more control of what happens in the plot. Though whatever happens I still have a say in the plot so I can keep it interesting. Here is the link.

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@R A I N Really I believe a pre-made form is best. I haven't read the whole percy jackson series so making a form by myself may be confusing with maybe your criteria in mind. Really if you made a form you'll get the information you need out of the form without using posts to tell others that their form is still unacceptable. I've always pre-made my forms and whenever I see preset characters it's boring and when I see make your own form it confuses me. Y'know, it's just my opinion though.

[glassea]

Ah! I'm back again
Jeez I'm so indecive lately

Okay this is about the demigod role play
Should I make:
1. preset characters and forms
2. Premade form
3. or leave it for the members to make?

i always make preset characters. it helps the roleplay get started faster, and there are premade relationships as well. it might be more work for you but i think you'll find it pays off in the long run.

[soda]

z'alright, suppose it's time to throw my two cents into everything. first off:





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Member #: six
Role Play Category: humanoid fantasy
Role Play Type: hunger games
Literacy: semi-literate
Plot: here
Species: human
I need help with: making sure the introduction makes sense. c;



I think it does c: very straightforward and nice, but also really nifty with how you added in the announcer's part. perhaps add a picture or something, just to draw more attention to it. course that's probably just me and my love for visual references.





Just the human parent and it was to save the children.
One of of the seals requires the blood of all the gods and
they believe that the children's blood would work been enough.
So one night all twelve families were attacked.
the Gods could only save the children

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Ah! I'm back again
Jeez I'm so indecive lately

Okay this is about the demigod role play
Should I make:
1. preset characters and forms
2. Premade form
3. or leave it for the members to make?



about the parents thing: aaah mk, that's actually really smart. definitely like that plot line c; then about the premade characters, I agree with snapple and glassy, go with the preset characters and forms. for this, I think it work best for a number of reasons, the most prominent being if you wanted to make sure the children resembled their parents, as well as letting your players know exactly what you expect from their said characters- not only personality, but demeanor and skill set wise.
on the other hand, if you really don't care what the characters turn out like, despite their legacy, then just offering a form would probably be fine.






@NeonSpirits Well really what I was thinking was that maybe they're traveling through and get caught into all sorts of things. It was pretty much loosely created because I like to go as the thread forms more, letting my members take more control of what happens in the plot. Though whatever happens I still have a say in the plot so I can keep it interesting. Here is the link.



ah alright. well, the only thing I can think of is mayyybe give like, a really brief description of what exactly has happened so far, where exactly the wolves are as of right now, like your starting point. while your intro is awesome, it's also a little vague. perhaps just add a little blurb that mentions where the characters will be starting off? ie, a mention of what the territory is like or something. other than this and the 'advertise it more' thing like I said before, that's really all I got. this is all just my personal opinion of course, so do with it what you will x3 //also, really love the coding work. nice job on that .u.