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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Artesian » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:35 am

anarchy. wrote:
    I also don't like sharing my writing >.< I've never gotten really negative feedback other than constructive criticism, although my friends get a little shocked sometimes because I go overboard in fight scenes, oops.


I would absolutely like to read an overboard fight scene. :3 So many that I've read are just unrealistic, tame and practically just placeholders. Like, a fight goes here and X wins.

The trick to sharing writing is to choose your audience. If you're writing a paranormal romance novel for teens, don't show it to your parents, they'll probably hate it. If you're writing a hard sci-fi story, don't share it with people who don't know the first thing about science. If your writing is good, there's someone out there who will appreciate it. The trick is finding those people. Augh I sound so bossy, ignore me plz.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby rinslet walker; » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:38 am

Artesian wrote:
anarchy. wrote:
    I also don't like sharing my writing >.< I've never gotten really negative feedback other than constructive criticism, although my friends get a little shocked sometimes because I go overboard in fight scenes, oops.


I would absolutely like to read an overboard fight scene. :3 So many that I've read are just unrealistic, tame and practically just placeholders. Like, a fight goes here and X wins.


    Really? People don't usually show much interest in them. Thank you c:
    I'm actually working on a short fanfiction right now with a fight scene planned. Sadly at the moment I don't have any real projects uploaded, however. If you've read Maximum Ride, though, you may be interested in it?
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Artesian » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:39 am

anarchy. wrote:
    Really? People don't usually show much interest in them. Thank you c:
    I'm actually working on a short fanfiction right now with a fight scene planned. Sadly at the moment I don't have any real projects uploaded, however. If you've read Maximum Ride, though, you may be interested in it?


Just the first one. Wasn't quite my thing (too much focus on hair cuts for my taste), but the premise was interesting. :)
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby rinslet walker; » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:44 am

Artesian wrote:
anarchy. wrote:
    Really? People don't usually show much interest in them. Thank you c:
    I'm actually working on a short fanfiction right now with a fight scene planned. Sadly at the moment I don't have any real projects uploaded, however. If you've read Maximum Ride, though, you may be interested in it?


Just the first one. Wasn't quite my thing (too much focus on hair cuts for my taste), but the premise was interesting. :)


    They really did spend too much time going into detail about the haircuts.
    Yes I get it they cut Max's hair off how amazing let's have a party.
    I mostly read them because Nudge's character interests me, the fanfic is Nudge-centric.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Roonil Wazlib » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:50 am

the journey wolf. wrote:Am I the only one who absolutely hates sharing their writing with people in real life? I don't know... It's like I'm giving up that last piece of privacy I have and I very rarely want to show anyone - especially family and close friends - my work. I like my privacy okay thanks bye.[/size][/center]

I hate it too! I'm really shy in real life, and writing is the only way I let my true feelings about everything out. But unfortunately even in my journal I censor my thoughts in case someone finds it and reads it. It's most unfortunate T.T
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby Rivkah » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:50 am

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Poet, Novelist, Roleplayer, and Editor.

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WIP Story of mine, belongs to me wrote:Mr. Linden's Library

by Rivkah

It was a hopelessly humid day in May, and there was a defeated sense in the air. No one wanted to face the heat outside. Not willingly.

A girl walked down the street, ignoring the afternoon sun. She was determined to reach her destination. Hestia was her name. Her parents were professors of Greek and Roman mythology, so they named her after a goddess. But to her, it was simply a name, nothing else.

now, she journeyed to the public library through the heat, desperate for a new read. She was an avid reader and was naturally drawn to any book she could get her hands on. As Hestia got hardly any time with her preoccupied parents, her only friend was the library.

As she ascended up the stone steps and entered the quiet building, her heart soared. She belonged here. "My, my, Hestia, back again? That's the fourth day in a row!" Hestia turned and smiled at the aged librarian, Mr. Linden.

"Of course, we have such a long summer vacation, sir," she replied with a mischievous grin. They both laughed and she made her way to the deepest row of shelves.

And then she stopped short. She had seen a peculiar book among the others. It was glossed and gilded in a strange way, with a perfectly made, beautiful hard cover. With trembling hands, she reached for the gorgeous book, and slid it from its shelf.

Her pale fingers grasped the book protectively, and she left its shelf. Hestia felt and overwhelming sense. She did not want to read the book here, but safely examine it at home. She took the books out from the tote bag on her shoulder and dropped them down the deposit box.

Then Hestia gingerly placed the book in front of a smiling Mr. Linden. She looked up. Mr. Linden's expression had clouded over, and now he looked distraught and thoughtful.

"You really want this book, Miss Hestia?" he asked, turning over the book to look at it. There was no title or description, but that wasn't why he was puzzled. He was looking at Hestia like she was insane.

"Yes - Yes, sir, Mr. Linden." Hestia could feel a blush creeping up her chalk-white cheeks. He leaned forward, brows furrowed.

"I must warn you gravely, even if I am letting you borrow it, that no one should have found it. Maybe it was a bad hiding place, but still. No one has ever been able to tame and learn from that book but me. The only reason I keep it is for those who want a challenge. But don't blame me if you can't." Hestia nodded, swiped her library card, then left.

Her walk home carried excitement and impulse. She could almost hear the book calling, telling her to start reading! But that's how she felt about every book... She unlocked the door of her home and made her dinner. Clearing her plate afterward, she went on her way to bed.

After finishing in the bathroom, she donned on a nightgown. Hestia grasped the book and sat down on the bed. Shaking with anticipation, she let the cover fall back. Weird, she thought, there's no copyright, title, author, publisher...

Then she started to read. Her bewilderment rose. This book was almost whispering things from its pages, and she hung on to everything it said.

After a while, she wanted to read more, but felt herself lying down and shutting her eyes without another thought. And then she was asleep.

The book was wide open, and the pages fluttered feebly. Then from the spine and threading, little leaves sprouted. Whip-like vines snaked out of the book, wrapping themselves around their victim. She didn't stir.

They crawled up her arms and to her shoulders, tickling at her throat. Then they continued to move, entwining around and around in spirals along her neck. And before she would ever wake, they contracted.

They silenced their prey during her slumber. As a result, their secrets would stay safe. And then they retreated into the book.


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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby rinslet walker; » Tue Feb 05, 2013 12:27 pm

    I've finished the fanfiction. It's quite short, only about a thousand words, but I'm looking for a beta reader c:
    If you're okay with editing some slightly graphic (by graphic I mean blood) text, nothing too bad, please PM me. Thanks, guys.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby major tom » Tue Feb 05, 2013 2:28 pm

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Writing Preferences (Poet, Novelist, roleplayer...): casual writer, aspiring author, weathered roleplayer
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Shakti was keeled over, hands on her knees, trying not to retch into the bushes. She had accidentally stepped in a nasty bit of roadkill on her morning walk, lost in thought as per usual. The smell made her gag; she couldn't even stand cooked meat! She placed one hand against the stone wall of the building outside of which she had had her little mishap. Trying to breathe through her mouth, Shakti steadied herself and opened her eyes. 'Deep breaths, love.' Mother's voice echoed in her mind. She straightened up and absently brushed her hair behind her ear, although it bounced back to place anyway. The sickly sweet scent of decayed flesh flooded Shakti's nose, and, desperate to escape it, she stumbled clumsily into the strange building. It didn't take long for her eyes to adjust.

"How peculiar," said the twenty-two year old child, but the silence swallowed her words whole. She couldn't shake the feeling that someone -- or something -- was watching her. That horrible carrion stench snaked across the threshold of the room (which appeared to be a deceitfully tiny waiting room of sorts) and into Shakti's nose. Clapping a hand to her mouth, she practically leapt into the hallway, which seemed to have been waiting for her as it gave a hushed sigh of contentment when she entered. The place definitely had a supernatural air about it. 'It's just a feeling, nothing more.' Shakti reminded herself. She couldn't help but wonder if anyone else had heard her. . . Oh, well. Too late to turn back now.

"What's this?" Twin clouds of fog puffed from her mouth, one for each word. "An adventure, presenting itself to me? My, my. . ." Oddly, the girl felt comforted by the misty air. Her tone had been sarcastic, yet Shakti's streak of curiosity was shadowing any hesitation to further explore her new surroundings. Extending both of her arms to her sides, the pretty Euro-African found she could easily brush both palms against both walls. She started trailing off down the hallway, noticing the distinct sound of muffled words at what seemed to be the end of it. So determined was she that Shakti didn't notice the door until she bumped her head on it.

The noise had definitely become louder; she wasn't even paying attention by that time, for a welcome scent was registering in her mind at that moment. The doorknob was in her hand before she was aware of the action. Relying on muscle memory, Shakti twisted the cold metal metal knob and stepped inside. She caught her breath. The room was not empty. Her Mona Lisa smile emerging, the strange girl inquired, "Is that coffee I smell?"

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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby wolfie. » Tue Feb 05, 2013 2:44 pm

@pie: click

I kind of agree with all of you, despite the slightly varying perspectives. I do enjoy sharing my writing at times, when I'm particularly proud of something. But at the same time, I'm kind of worried that what it's about might make them think I'm a freak and they'll likely question me. Um, a group of genetically altered wolves trying to save their species? I would too. xD But that's not all. Sometimes my characters are little odd and I'm not sure what reaction they would have to a kind of unstable dude who finds amusement in something that would typically be frowned upon.
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Re: The Advanced Writer's Club

Postby princess pudding » Tue Feb 05, 2013 2:51 pm

the journey wolf. wrote:
@pie: click

I kind of agree with all of you, despite the slightly varying perspectives. I do enjoy sharing my writing at times, when I'm particularly proud of something. But at the same time, I'm kind of worried that what it's about might make them think I'm a freak and they'll likely question me. Um, a group of genetically altered wolves trying to save their species? I would too. xD But that's not all. Sometimes my characters are little odd and I'm not sure what reaction they would have to a kind of unstable dude who finds amusement in something that would typically be frowned upon.

      I rarely share my stories with anyone, unless they are completely de-weird-afied. Usually, if I plan to send it into a contest or competition, I will allow my aunt to sneak a peak, as she’s an English teacher. Besides that, only cs friends often see my works. A lot of the time, my characters are very odd, or even insane. I commonly use swearing time to time, and I have yet to admit that, as I don’t swear myself. Therefore, I have a hard time opening up.
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