The Artist Army

[tinydoodles]

Zoker: that looks really great !! My only suggestion is to make the ears a tiny bit bigger and rounder, since lion ears aren't quite so perky.

~MapleFeather~: looking pretty good so far :> I'd suggest adding a bit more variation in the thicknesses of his abdomen, since it wouldn't be quite so even all the way down. Maybe curve his back slightly and make his ribcage bigger? You might also want to size up his legs, too.

Veins of Opal: that looks really awesome !! Almost perfect, I think. But I suggest dropping his waist and belly button, since they're located closer to the hips. I'd also suggest widening his abdomen a bit, too, since it's kind of thin in comparison to the size of his shoulders and hips.

Stonefly: those are looking great c: my only suggestion is to increase your line variation a bit, maybe so it's bolder in the eyelashes and eyebrows but more subtle on the creases and eyelids.

Corgie: omg that looks awesome ;v; I really don't have anything to say on anatomy tbh. I think her left arm is ok, too, since the edge would be hidden behind her back in 3/4 view. I'd suggest maybe increasing the contrast on your shading, perhaps ??

TurtlezSoup: I think maybe you should make the shoulders come out a bit more on the front legs. The back legs look great so far though, although you could shorten the lower half, I think.

I haven't posted here in a very long time, I hope this is ok :')

[salmondragon]

@Black Sabbath
Thanks!

I did do a scetch/use guide lines/plan it out and I do seen to have a habit of hugging it a little. However, I do layers upon layers of making scetches of the drawing, so I try to have the final scetch be what I'm going to draw. But I see what your saying about the head.

Thanks for the help with the paws, I tend to struggle with them a lot, and of course thanks for the help with the legs.

@tinydoodles
Thanks for the help c:

[Kaishine]

hey... I have never posted here before and wanted to mark it as well as ask some advice. I am just now starting to get a semi feel for humans and the anatomy is HORRIBLE! http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/028/7/2/finn_by_kaishine-d74535r.png This character belongs to The_Tide_Keeper all rights reserved to her.
I drew this not long ago (yesterday maybe the day before) and I really need help with anatomy (as you can tell) So any tips tricks or crits would help!
thanks <3

[Thalassic]

hey... I have never posted here before and wanted to mark it as well as ask some advice. I am just now starting to get a semi feel for humans and the anatomy is HORRIBLE! http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/028/7/2/finn_by_kaishine-d74535r.png This character belongs to The_Tide_Keeper all rights reserved to her.
I drew this not long ago (yesterday maybe the day before) and I really need help with anatomy (as you can tell) So any tips tricks or crits would help!
thanks <3

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[Kaishine]

hey... I have never posted here before and wanted to mark it as well as ask some advice. I am just now starting to get a semi feel for humans and the anatomy is HORRIBLE! http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/028/7/2/finn_by_kaishine-d74535r.png This character belongs to The_Tide_Keeper all rights reserved to her.
I drew this not long ago (yesterday maybe the day before) and I really need help with anatomy (as you can tell) So any tips tricks or crits would help!
thanks <3

Please read the first post! You have to comment on other peoples work before asking others to comment on yours.

I didn't see anyone's work posted on the pages before (like art) but right I shall


TurtlezSoup: Hey, Um on the shoulders and legs and feet, And your anatomy, I hate to say is off but a little. First off as you should know there are layers in Oekaki. I normally sketch out a "skeleton" of the animal I am drawing, even if it is a made up species. At least that is what I do personally. I have also noticed that taking a reference is always nice. Now if it is a species that is made up, try and find an animal that most resembles it. All species looks like a different animal. And sometimes you may have to use more then one picture, even of different animals :3 Hope this helped slightly /(o3o)/

[Running Fern]

hey... I have never posted here before and wanted to mark it as well as ask some advice. I am just now starting to get a semi feel for humans and the anatomy is HORRIBLE! http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/028/7/2/finn_by_kaishine-d74535r.png This character belongs to The_Tide_Keeper all rights reserved to her.
I drew this not long ago (yesterday maybe the day before) and I really need help with anatomy (as you can tell) So any tips tricks or crits would help!
thanks <3

@Kaishine This looks good, I would just say make the clothes a little more fitting to her form and it will help a lot, every thing else looks pretty good!

[Kaishine]

hey... I have never posted here before and wanted to mark it as well as ask some advice. I am just now starting to get a semi feel for humans and the anatomy is HORRIBLE! http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2014/028/7/2/finn_by_kaishine-d74535r.png This character belongs to The_Tide_Keeper all rights reserved to her.
I drew this not long ago (yesterday maybe the day before) and I really need help with anatomy (as you can tell) So any tips tricks or crits would help!
thanks <3

@Kaishine This looks good, I would just say make the clothes a little more fitting to her form and it will help a lot, every thing else looks pretty good!

Thanks... I know I need anatomy work (that's why you can't see her legs or feet) but thanks.. IDK why i did it that way

[northy.]

@Kaishine

WoW! I love it! I can't pick out anything bad with it! I love the colours! And the anatomy is pretty good, but I don't know much about drawing people, all I know is its awesome!



A quick animation I made.

[Stonefly]

@Kaishine
I am not very good with giving human drawing advice. But as said before try make the cloths al little more form fitting.

@Bluewolf
I noticed when the eye goes down to 'blink' there is no line on the top half of the eye. Try adding just a simple line. I would also maybe speed it up just a little If your program will let you. it will give you a little more of a realistic effect.

-I was working on this drawing a while back and I showed it to you guys. But I finally finish the face of the drawing and I was hoping I could get some tips or even better a redline or some sort. Just letting you know that is tape where the mouth should be. I couldn't draw a mouth no matter how hard I tried so I thought I would add some meaning to it as if I were making it say:
Almost as if saying 'he is unspoken his true identity will never be told' kind of thing..something with meaning I guess..

Click here

[antler apathy]

@ Kaishine - yeah I agree with what others were saying about fitting the clothes more. I would thing out the face and give it some more angles to it to make it look more natural c;

@ *blueWolf* - it looks good! I can't do animations ;u; I dunno if you want critique but I think the muzzle looks to flat on the bottom, it should be pointier and come out more c:

@ stonefly - you know it looks really good, I do like the anatomy a lot. The only thing I would say is that the eyebrows could be more pronounced because there's a lot of emotion in eyes/eyebrows~

so I made some linearts and art in the past few days, and just wanted some critique and/or comments on them c:
redlines are welcome~
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