The Artist Army

[glassesprotag]

@ -Solembum
Like Medusa's Cascade said, the front and hind legs should be on even grounds. :)

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I didn't realize there was a new thread. X3 Looks great!
Well, I haven't been drawing much because of my new adoptables, but this is what I've managed to draw in. XD
Any critique helps. :3

Drawin 1
This was a quick sketch of me as a fox. :3
It was about 3:00am when I drew this, and I didn't use a sketch. XD I know there's gonna be a bunch wrong with this. I fell asleep right after I drew this.

Drawing 2
My character Paww.
I usually don't draw lips, but with this character, he has speedos with a kiss mark on them, and I was stumped on the background. He's a cat by the way.

Drawing 3
Mimi, my Mewthree.
I am not the best at Mewthree anatomy, but this was just Chibi. This was just a reference for my friend 'cause she keeps getting her markings wrong.

Drawing 4
And last, but not least, my character Whispers.
Now, I'd like to point this out, she's a fox, but she is also a very thin character. She's meant to resemble a music note, as well as her siblings. Her tail is meant to be bigger/fluffier than average.

[kirill]

Hi! I just drew this pic, and I'd love if someone gave me some critique and told me how to make it better!
Thanks!
viewtopic.php?f=30&t=1219070

[Jubee]

@ -Solembum
Like Medusa's Cascade said, the front and hind legs should be on even grounds.

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I didn't realize there was a new thread. X3 Looks great!
Well, I haven't been drawing much because of my new adoptables, but this is what I've managed to draw in. XD
Any critique helps. :3

Drawin 1
This was a quick sketch of me as a fox. :3
It was about 3:00am when I drew this, and I didn't use a sketch. XD I know there's gonna be a bunch wrong with this. I fell asleep right after I drew this.

Drawing 2
My character Paww.
I usually don't draw lips, but with this character, he has speedos with a kiss mark on them, and I was stumped on the background. He's a cat by the way.

Drawing 3
Mimi, my Mewthree.
I am not the best at Mewthree anatomy, but this was just Chibi. This was just a reference for my friend 'cause she keeps getting her markings wrong.

Drawing 4
And last, but not least, my character Whispers.
Now, I'd like to point this out, she's a fox, but she is also a very thin character. She's meant to resemble a music note, as well as her siblings. Her tail is meant to be bigger/fluffier than average.

i'm not one for critiquing, but your characters are very lovely. c:

i love the eye coloring and hair in the first one. the head appears to be a bit disproportionate to the neck, though, but it's a great start! i'm not much of an animal artist, and that beats the crud out of my drawings. XD

in the second one, i think the hind legs might be a bit too far out. i like the design, though!

i really like the colors of the third one. maybe the tail is a little too low? i don't know; like i said, i'm a terrible critique. ;3;

and the only thing that seems weird to me in the last one is the hind-leg thing again ~
and maybe the chest is a bit small. >3<

[glassesprotag]

i'm not one for critiquing, but your characters are very lovely. c:

i love the eye coloring and hair in the first one. the head appears to be a bit disproportionate to the neck, though, but it's a great start! i'm not much of an animal artist, and that beats the crud out of my drawings. XD

in the second one, i think the hind legs might be a bit too far out. i like the design, though!

i really like the colors of the third one. maybe the tail is a little too low? i don't know; like i said, i'm a terrible critique. ;3;

and the only thing that seems weird to me in the last one is the hind-leg thing again ~
and maybe the chest is a bit small. >3<

Thank you, and any critique helps. :3

Yea, like I said, I didn't sketch it out and I was very tired. X3

I have been making them to far back lately, it's been a mess up for a while that I've been trying to fix. X3

I'm not sure myself. XD I just started drawing Mewthrees.

Yea, usually my weird mess-ups happen in the sketch, which happens a lot for me in Paint. XD Like I said for the second one, I'll try and fix that as much as I can. :3

[calippygian]

@ fox-zura: your charries are so adorable, and i love thier designs <3

i was wondering how i could improve on my human anatomy, this is just a sketch ^^
its supposed to be a female, in her teens
(and the feet look unsteady because the website i used didnt rotate it all the way XP)
i know i need to fix my hands and ankles, so not crit on that please ^^

[dizzy hurricane.]

Hi! I just drew this pic, and I'd love if someone gave me some critique and told me how to make it better!
Thanks!
viewtopic.php?f=30&t=1219070

Comment on other people's art too.
Even a simple 'Wow, that looks good!' is better than nothing at all.

[emberonis]

I made this about 5 and a half months ago. I attempted to redo it, but the drawing totally became something else...



This is what my redo ended up being.

It's kinda funny... I've learned in the past few months that it's okay to spend more than an hour on a drawing. The first one took me an hour, while the redo took me three.

Crits, comments, redlines, all that jazz is welcome!

[Duh]

So its been a while since I last posted here.
Anyways, figgered I would show a picture I drew of Entei

Its unfinished, but I doubt I'll ever go back and shade it or anything, so I posted it to my tumblr. Which you should follow if you wanna see more unfinished things and pictures and whatever else I find unsuitable for my dA. ;A;
Crit is welcome n stuff <3 Please no redlines since I don't ever plan on fixing it.

@schizoid - Bro I have so much trouble spelling that name. B[ BUT ANYWAYS I LOVE YOUR NEW FURSONA. And that picture of her/him(not sure lol) especially.

@Fox-Zura - The bodies on Paww and Whispers are extremely skinny, even if whispers is supposed to be skinny. They look as if they don't have ribcages, which isn't exactly a good thing for any critter. xD But they're very cute, keep up the good work. <3

Yahhh so I will try to post more again, maybe once school is out I'll have more time.


@Neelix - I might redline, if someone else doesn't get to it first.

[Musicart]

I made this about 5 and a half months ago. I attempted to redo it, but the drawing totally became something else...



This is what my redo ended up being.

It's kinda funny... I've learned in the past few months that it's okay to spend more than an hour on a drawing. The first one took me an hour, while the redo took me three.

Crits, comments, redlines, all that jazz is welcome!

On the redo, The legs are a bit skinny. I think the eys are a tad big, and the eyes should be moved back a bit. Still, looking good!

[mawsoleum]

It's kinda funny... I've learned in the past few months that it's okay to spend more than an hour on a drawing. The first one took me an hour, while the redo took me three.

Crits, comments, redlines, all that jazz is welcome!

I can critique.

Okay, here goes.
1. Shoulders aren't so prominent in canines, tone that down.
2. The legs need to be more bent. Check up a skeleton of a dog. The Carpus, or the area that can be related somewhat to a human wrist, isn't bent enough. Also, I think they should be a little longer.
3. The back legs are a little odd. They should be tucked up more under the Femur area, or more basically under that C-shaped area where the leg bends. And after it goes under that, it sort of bends back up a little. Hard to explain.
4. Tail doesn't bend into the butt like that. The back leg should be completely covering that area, so you shouldn't see right through it to the tail.
5. The area where the neck and end of the head connect seems too rounded. Make it more angular.
6. Eye is too large for the head, slim it down.


Here's a good picture.
xx