The Artist Army

[Neko-the-Gunslinger]

@Lucratia Thank you XD
And yeah, the tree seems a bit fuzzy to me. Though the over all piece is great! I absolutely love it!

@Zoe
thank you! and yeah hahaha XD I really dislike the left arm so I hust kinda- hid it XD I need to improve on my movements. (this is the second time I'm making such a pose. as this one is much better than my last one, but I see there are still the horrid little mistakes left. XD)

[nopenope123]

Neko, great pose, but the had looks a tad werid. The fingers looks like they are broken or something. Also, where is her other arm?

Shizoid, what a cute picture! The onyl wrong is that t´he neck should be thicker and fluffier, and the back legs on a dog isn´t that underangled, as it looks more canine then.

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Just a superquick skecth to practice some dog anatomy. please, someone reline?
Here

[mawsoleum]

Just a superquick skecth to practice some dog anatomy. please, someone reline?
Here

Can I just critique?
I don't do redlines.

[nopenope123]

Just a superquick skecth to practice some dog anatomy. please, someone reline?
Here

Can I just critique?
I don't do redlines.

Sure.

[mawsoleum]

@-Solembum- Okay.

1. Muzzle is a little short. Canine muzzles are longer.
2. Neck is a bit short. Lengthen it some.
3. More of a chest needed.
4. Back is off some. It curves and drops somewhat awkwardly. Also, with the belly, you've got the tuck up wrong. It shouldn't go down near the back legs, it should be deepest in the chest area. Some dogs have more prominent tuck up than others. Labs, for example, have a fairly small tuck up, while Borzois have a very large one.
5. The back leg anatomy is off. It's very hard to explain in words for me, so take a look at this picture: xx
The Femur, Tibia, and Fibula are too short and tucked back. The should be extended frontwards more. The metatarsus area needs to be shorter, and by making the Femur, Tibia, and Fibula longer, it should come naturally.
6. Last thing, the front leg is bent somewhat awkwardly. Look at the picture above for ref.

[Black Sabbath]

I haven't been feeling very well lately but I am going to hold a live stream (I checked and all being held seem to be over) in order to point out things for everyone here as well as some red lines for the recent art. ^^

https://join.me/741-271-768
DONE

Post shall be edited with the redlines and critique when I am done, so if you have questions on anything pop in and ask.

EDIT:
Redline for Milo: http://www.iaza.com/work/120605C/iaza15661068123800.gif

To as well as everyone else, i'd just like to point out that even if you don't know exact anatomy of something, but you have a pretty good understanding of basic bone structure you can create much more vivid poses as well as characters. The pose of something can make the character, not everything is a side walking or running/standing view and that gets very static unless you are creating a reference sheet. I have a quick sketch I made to show what I mean, if you try changing up the pose it will grasp the attention of the viewer more.
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1217354

Last but not least I have an adoptable I doodled up for an example to Milo about color palettes and jewelry, etc.
http://www.iaza.com/work/120605C/iaza15661048746700.jpg

I wanted to make sure that those who I gave advice to saw this, since I simply edited the post and will have some more up for people later.^^

[Musicart]

Everything seems to be commented on.


I just need help with this:
http://coyotelk.deviantart.com/#/d52flzj

Comments, critiques, whatever.
Backgrounds are way hard in traditional, never again.

I think the head is off proportion with the body and legs^^
It and the neck seem a bit too big for the actual body. Horses (or equines) have heads that are while large, small compared to the body.
Here are some good examples:
https://encrypted-tbn2.google.com/image ... DMhti9lTsQ
https://encrypted-tbn2.google.com/image ... _2L65nV1JA
https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/image ... vR9TO3YM5w

And by head I mean the overall circle you start with when sketching the shape of the head (this excluding the muzzle^^)


I made some vent art recently and I've been watching a lot of things to do with wolves and I noticed how the elbow and knee seem to line up.
I'm wondering if I could get some crits, redlines, etc on it^^

I think the fennce's neck is bit off, along with the chin. But still very good!

[Zoë]

Redline for -Solembum | x

I figured it was a meant to be chibi-istic, so I made it that way.
You actually have a really good grip on the legs, and the way they bend (and that's the hardest bit, in my opinion).
I'm dreadful at paws, so you'll have to get someone else's opinion on that! <3

[schizoid.]

For comments on my last drawing, it's not a fennec fox^^
(it's a fennec husky mix so some features are more broad then a fennec fox's)
And thanks for the crits, comments, and praise guys, it really helps ;u;

Neko- Amazing human .3.
I can never draw people, but I think you have some anatomy flaws.
The feet and hand seem a bit too small for the body in my opinion :3

[brian emo]

@-Solembum the front and back legs should be on even ground.