Writers, UNITE!

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby amato » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:18 pm

    I want to join the Writing Army!
    Username: Yukon
    Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? I can write a little every once in a while when im bored. (Which is a LOT..)
    What's your favorite color? Orange!
    Animal? ... I like bears. Panda's 'specially...
    Fish? Koi<3
    Type of mythical creature? ... um, I dont really have one here.
    Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? .. hell-hounds ftw, so, evil creatures I guess?
    Anything else (do not leave blank): .. when writing I love making the dialogue foreign with my foreign characters<3 OH, and I can give some example writing..
    i am not very active anymore, but im sometimes on oekaki.
    you can call me ami or shura! xxoo
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Dec 11, 2011 5:46 pm

Accepted! This is getting popular faster then I intended! I'd also like to see that story! I'm writing a fantasy called "Truth in Evil, Lies in Good" it's about magic...
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby ♥Black-cat-spirit♥ » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:01 pm

XD oooh sounds awesome! and did you mean my story or...? nevermind XD lol blodne moment(though I'm a redhead not a blonde :lol: get it?.....XD I know...pathetic. ) I can give you the introduction XD if you want
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But what could this mean? this large part of life?
But what could it be except love?
I dream about you....
I wish i could see you,
But now I know what this means...
It means nothing, it could be nothing...
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:07 pm

Sure! I'll get my intro! (and start of first chapter)
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby ♥Black-cat-spirit♥ » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:32 pm

XD kk. posting riiiight now.....

Intro:

It was a dark,stormy night. A wail rose above the rumble of thunder. Rose turned her head to the sound. She whined and looked up at her owner. Her owner hadn't heard a thing,obviously. She growled and pulled away from her owner's hand,which clutched her collar. Her owner stumbled backwards in surprise and watched in horror as her Golden Retriever ran away through the falling snow,the dog she'd worked so hard to find in her area. Rose kept running. She ran until she was sure she was near the area the wail had come from. Another wail rose from an area behind a snow-covered bush,this time much quieter,as if the creature was giving up hope. She yipped and ran behind the bush, only to see a lifeless body of an adult fox, two small limp bodies, and one shivering fox pup. It was the only one to live, and Rose knew it needed help. So, knowing it would die soon if it was left there, she picked it up by it's scruff, deciding to take it in as her own.
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But what could it be except love?
I dream about you....
I wish i could see you,
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It means nothing, it could be nothing...
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:35 pm

Prologue
In the days before humans, there were four tribes: the Shuma’s, the Wizards and Girl Wizards, and they used magic for good. The Shumo’s, the Warlocks, and they used magic for bad. In that day, there were wars. There were strict rules: NO interbreeding. And to this day, anybody who broke that rule went to the Magic prison. But, a male Shumo called Zim, and a female Shuma called Lithonia breeded illegally. After Lithonia had a child who “officially” belonged to the tribe of her mother, the two parents got threw into prison. The child, everybody knew she could use both Magic’s, so they tried to teach her the good only. The mother had a second child two years after her. This time, he was a male. The same principal of “good, not evil, nor both” tried to apply to him. Soon, after o two years time, she had a second daughter. The children, together the teachers tried to teach them, but they knew their history. It was in vain.
Eleven years later…
Kitiara, who’s now fifteen, Glance, who’s now thirteen, and Sessona, who’s eleven, have decided to rescue their parents and destroy a law that has been here before time. The good, but not bad, are trying to stop them…

Chapter 1
“Kit! It’s time to go to class!” Yelled Sessona up the stairs.
“Coming, Sona! Just got to do my hair!” I Replied calmly. I mumbled a word under my breath, and my knee-length of the darkest black imaginable hair brushed and braided itself. I looked at my clothes, a tunic and leggings, before being satisfied. I went downstairs where Sessona and Glance were waiting. We all slipped on supple boots, then left our rooms and headed down the hall for classes.
When we got to our classrooms, Glance, Sessona, and I hugged and wished each other luck in our lessons. Then each of us departed, each dreading the day where the teachers would insist on the benefits of good. I entered the classroom and sat at my chair. The Dreaded Drone (that’s what I called it) began.
“Being good is good. Good gives you power. If you are black, you have no good feelings…” I sighed and sat back. I was sick and tired of The Dreaded Drone.
I stared out of the window, thinking about the evil magic. Yes, it had done good things for me. For when Glige put a frog in my shoe, while I was looking away, I had my revenge: I made a fake candy box that had food poisoning in the candy. He spent the whole night throwing up. And when I had made the teacher disappear in a pit of her least favorite things for being to strict… I giggled evilly.
“…So that’s why good is good. And Kitiara, please don’t giggle.” Finished the teacher. I nodded just to make her be quiet.
“Finally!” I muttered. I went in the hall, and there were Glance and Sessona. “Come on. We’ve got more classes later, and we don’t want to miss snack.” Glance said, while I was nodding in agreement. We headed to the lunch/snack room, where our snacks were allowed. Everywhere else in the building food and drink (excepting water) was not allowed. We ate our snack, and then returned to classes.
A few hours later, when it was time to go to bed, we left the classrooms. I sighed, thinking about the day as I stared at the ceiling of Sessona’s and my room, next to Glance’s. I had a sudden thought: “What if we could rescue our REAL parents?” I thought about that for a moment, letting that sink in… “It would be cool… We could meet them… But we would have to destroy a law that has been here since the beginning of time.” It was that last thought that fully woke me up. I crept out of bed to get our book on laws. I looked at the cover of the book, unsure of what to do. I flipped to the part about the law about the marriages between the clans, reading it over and over again, not sure what I was supposed to find. I put my eyes suddenly on the reason: Half-Breeds are supposed to be bringers of peace, we can not afford that. Good must always win. I scoffed. “Yeah, right.”
I considered waking my brother and sister, to escape, but I decided with an evil grin to escape on Examination Day. Ha! That would tell the teachers. I returned to my bed, to think and think again.
The next day, I woke up tired but refreshed. I headed towards the food room, not wanting to wait for my sister and brother. I came to the room and saw Glance and Sessona waiting in the corner.
“Well?” I asked.
“We got up early, so we went to the lunch room to order food for all of us. Here’s your tray,” Glance said as he passed me my tray, loaded with maple syrup and French toast.
“Mhhhhhm.” I said as the delicious flavors hit my mouth. I looked at the wall, figuring out whether I should tell my brother and sister about my plan. I reached towards my beet juice, and Glance said
“I don’t know how you can stand that stuff.” He looked repulsively at my juice. I licked my lips, and said
“Sorry. Bad habit.” He sighed, and looked down at his food. I took a sip of my juice, and fell to the floor (that’s what they told me afterwards) and began to choke. Glance yelled
“Someone help! Help! Our sister is choking! Oh my god!” and was panicking. The last thing I felt was hands picking me up before I blacked out.
I reawaked a few days later, in the white imfermary. A lady came by and said
“It’s nice to see you awake again. Your siblings are dead worried.” I asked with a thick voice
“What happened?”
“It seems that you are allergic to grapes, and very heavily. Very , VERY heavily.”
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby Lillyfur » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:41 pm

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username (put in color you want me to put your name in): Lillyfur
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? I'll try, but some day's i can't get on.
What's your favorite color? BLUE!!
Animal? CAT!! :D
Fish? Hmm...I would have to say a Beta
Type of mythical creature? Dragon. <3
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? OMG, YES!
Anything else (do not leave blank): I like to write warrior fan fictions, and have ALOT of stories I need feed back on. :)
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby ♥Black-cat-spirit♥ » Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:41 pm

o-o wow...nice job...just omg...I couldn't write that ><..wanna see how far I've gotten in chapter 1?
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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby amato » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:54 am

    ... Um, little awkward, but this was written about a month ago.
    It's called "D e s c r i b e_m e"

The small crooked gait called scoliosis,
held a neck and head. The head looked familiar-
muddy, fatigued eyes with a round curvy nose.
Few sloppy slewn freckles disseminated across her face.
Maybe it was the dark brown mop of fringe to edge her
cheeks, with the rough shaggy layers and disheveled keeping
of her hair. The recognizable highlights of tan that have
always been streaked in her roots are something people see.

Or maybe what seemed to be so wonted was her lazy
mien, how she looked so pissed and provoked. They say
her lips have never curved to a small smirk- the only
kind of grin she has ever slung was a sneer.
But she demands that she's once given a tiny gleam,
maybe even a few skewed teeth flaunted. No one's ever
witnessed it... but she veils fact it was done in a mirror.

Besides her uncanny face and strange slump in stance,
she's a very voguish being. She's got a pretty dark style,
nefarious and slightly gloomy to some. She might dress as
a jovial girl but her attitude in style was at an outlying
distance from that. Just from rings and bling she collects
evaluated to the assemblies she draws you can tell her mentality
is more trained for the twisted and perverse.

Against the world's view and what they input about this girl,
she can sit in front of a mirror and persist on being so
'pretty'. Being appealing is what the world wants. Being
appealing can be baffling, and always perplexing your mind.
Maybe having a livid face can be 'pretty', maybe even electrifying.
Possibly not a smile in the world could be moving enough to be
this kind of pretty... maybe her tilted looks and bizarre arrange
of sentiments were of something different.
Maybe being pretty, is just being who you are.

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Re: Writers, UNITE!

Postby maximum entropy » Mon Dec 12, 2011 4:34 am

*blushes* Thanks, Black-Cat. And sure!
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