Illiterate to Literate [closed - new instructors hired!]

[rose;]

okay, message me and I'll get to helping ^^

[lance.]

Okay, so I have someone to help me with my One X Ones (Thanks Rose!) but I still need someone to help me with character development and making my posts prettier. Can anyone help me with that?

[eden .]

OKAY WAIT NOW STOP.

okay, everyone who has not been assigned a teacher and is still interested, please quote your forms.
DON'T SPAM FOR A SECOND. LET PEOPLE QUOTE IF THEY STILL NEED HELP and tell us what page your form was on so we can be a bit more organized. ^^''

notes from me
my "growing to semi-lit+" class is full.
every other course still has at least one slot open.

[lance.]

Username: ~Time~, but I go by Time or Dante.
What You'd Like Help With: I am involved in really only One x One human, humaniod roleplays, and I would love to become more literate in that.
Also help creating characters and pretty posts.
Preferred Instructor: The Burning Rose
Activity or Time Zone: I'm in Eastern Standard time, but I am on at all times ofday and night.
Sample of Writing:

Ijust need someone to help with my character creating and creating pretty posts.

[Ayngel]

Username: Ayngel
What You'd Like Help With I'm looking to add more detail and make my posts bigger, trying to get to a little higher Semi lit at the moment. I also need help with the characters themselves, trying to make them more unique and different, as I noticed that some of my characters fall under certain roles, like the 'quiet one' or the 'cheerfull and happy one'. Sorry if that came out confusing.
Preferred Instructor:
Activity or Time Zone: I am on quite a bit usually, on weekends much more, but now that school has recently started, I won't be on at that time most likely.
Sample of Writing:

Daniel Summers 'Dan, Danny'- Nerd


Dan had woken far earlier than needed to get ready to school, his long brown hair was pin straight and he had dressed in yet another odd outfit. A dull blue, faded shirt that had in bold white writing 'I'm not insane, I just listen to the voices advice' wrote across his chest, the shirt seemed to be about 8 sizes too big for his skinny body. With a pair of very old looking jean, baggy and large with holes in the knees, the frayed edges of the hole showed a little cut on his knee from when something was chasing him in the park only days before, it ended up just being a overly friendly dog, wanting to play. Dan brushed his hair one more time, then reached into the very small glass container, pulling out two small white rats, each about half grown. He opened his other, much larger glass tank, empty besides a fake log and mulch and set them both in. He watched, as suddenly Mia and Lia popped out of the log, hungrily going after the two rats, which tried to run, but first Mia got one, then Lia caught the other one. Danny smiled a little at that, closing the container and picking up his bag. He was all ready to go, and having ate breakfast only minutes ago, which consisted of leftover pizza. He began out the door, waiting at the bus stop for several minutes before the bus finnaly came. He looked back at his small apartment, then hopped onto the bus. As he sat down, he took a quick glance at everyone around him, smiling slightly at the girl who got on next, with bright red hair, and seemed to have been a little late.

I'm from page 16.

[biyondo basudei.]

Username: a r m e . rouge
What You'd Like Help With: Either Devolping Believeable Characters, Developing Fantasy Humanoids, Worlds, and Settings, or Devolping Plots.
Preferred Instructor: if applicable. if you don't have a preferred one, strike out. if you have multiple, list them!
Activity or Time Zone: My time zone is Eastern time for the USA, and Im usually on from 2 PM to 1 AM or 2 AM for weekends, and from about 6 PM to 11 PM on weekdays.
Sample of Writing:

ᶓvony ᵮaye ᵳosseau

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Evon laid her legs out flat infront of her as she watched Que fly up into the air. He really wasnt the one to try to impress Evon; or anyone on that mark. She slowly crossed her legs and looked over at Asher and his crow. She smiled slightly before looking back up at Que who was now obviously looking for prey.

Evon ran her hands up the tree a bit and pushed herself up onto her feet. She was still silent; and listened to the slight flap of Ques feathers. She could hear it, being a scout and all; and it calmed her, as well. Her thin fingers pushed up even harder on the bark, and then slowly turned around, digging her fingers into the bark. She was silent as she did so, although a few pieces of bark did snap under her grip. She wrapped her legs around the tree, digging her boots deep into the wood and moving her hands further up to start pulling herself up onto the tree; and onto a tree branch would be nice.

She slipped the first time though; and fell about 9 feet, almost slamming her head into the bark. She sufficed a small growl, and slowly dug her fingers into the bark again, repeating the process. She went up faster this time, too, and her already scratched up, stiff and pained hands didnt help at all. She winced as she slipped again, but landing on a rather low branch; it was small, too. She sighed lightly and pushed her now scratched hands against the tree branch, turning herself around so she was looking out on the forest.

Que, by this point, had slammed into a branch but had gathered the small mouse that was almost frozen and easy to retrieve in his beak. He had started back on his way, too. He slowly flapped his wings against the chilly morning air, his wings flapping fast to not get chilled.

Evon looked up at him before she slowly slid down against the bark, her voice silent; she didnt really want to disturb the silence, either. She just wanted to relax; for now. Until Fynn came along and ordered them to do something, at least. Her light brown tangled and dirty hair slipped down over her shoulders, and closed her eyes silently, taking in a deep breath of the chilled air before yawning slightly.

mood ; content/relaxed - with ; her bird, Que - doing ; sitting against the treehouse tree

Form is on page 17~

[city;]

Ok. Thanks Asian. We needed that. I'm going to add this as a rule for the front page.

Lol, Rosie's popular!

NOTE : all instructors are to search "username" when checking in, unless this has been followed quite precisely. I'm sorry, guys but this is a little out of hand ...

I'll be your guinnea-pig, Le Asian. I'm just in need of consistently keeping it.

[rose;]

City, is it okay to like, start a one x one with you to help? If you have time for that?

Shuddup... I'm not supposed to be xP I'm supposed be like, in the corner.

[city;]

Sure, Rose. That'll work. I shall be two test subjects. cx

Ok, arme, I can assist you in plot development, if you wish. Om me if you are.

[rose;]

Okay, good. X3 actually, I have another for literacy, would it be okay if it was a group of three? Might be harder for me, but... Yeah. .-. Well, I dunno which would be easier...

I think I already helped them with plot development, too.