★ Create A Clan Fanclub V.3 ★

[Katrione]

@Purrfect

Your archive makes me want to go back and fix mine and add more stuff I want to add the territory/clan description I had for Echoclan when I started but I don't have it anymore

[amethyst14]

@Purrfect
I think it looks great! Are you only adding the high ranking cats? Or do you have plans to add the others eventually?

@Kat
What happen to them?

This is my archive I have been finding it a little hard to keep up with the histories for every cat, but I feel like I am managing. I also have been doing current events so I have their entire history, I have been cautious about revealing to much info so I don't give away my plans Do you guys think I should update the ages as well?

[Katrione]

@Ame

The first version of the game got taken down because we use to use the warrior images from the wiki, which we couldn't use apparently.

[Awesomeness7]

Anyone have any open borders?

[Simonpet]

@Dino: So far, I think that Moorclan is coming along well. I can't wait for Nightclaw's plot to go further, and I'd really like to see what it's composed of. Also, are you taking the nine lives virtues literally? If so, then that will definitely be interesting later. c: If you have the time, could you also take a peek at Forestclan?

@Awesomeness: My eastern border is open if your clan has a deciduous forest border!

[Awesomeness7]

@simon Sure! Flameclan territory is mainly swamp but there's thick forest around the edges. So your east, my west?

[Simonpet]

@awesomeness: Yup! That sounds great. c:

[Katrione]

I just killed off the first cat from the mysterious illness that is going on in Echoclan. Can I have feedback on my post?
I don't know if I wrote the cat dying well enough.


I also don't know what to call the illness. I'm basing it off an illness from an old Warriors rp, they called it the rat plague. It was cured by the same 5 petal flower that was in the warrior series. The cats' paws, chest and sometimes eyes will start to burn, then they will start to pass out from the pain and keep a constant fever. Then they will start to bleed from their eyes, nose and mouth and eventually die. Sometimes they will get things that are sort of like seizures, but it's only because of the pain they are in.

[Simonpet]

@Kat: I think that you wrote the death pretty well. As to the name, they should call it "the illness" or "the plague" until they find out what causes it. Or, you could do something like "the red plague" because of the burning, fever, and bleeding, all of which (in my opinion) carry the connotations of "red".

[amethyst14]

I think you wrote it out just fine, you don't want to over illustrate it because this is a family-friendly website I enjoyed reading it at least.

I also agree with Simon about calling it red plague.