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by Tammanae » Tue Jun 26, 2012 5:45 am
I know I told you this before, Nawee, but I love those chibi goennecs. <3 They all look so cute. ;v;
I has a chibi Gorrion:

and a Bear for Kam~

I did these about a week ago, but I kept forgetting to post them. X3
Also, reminder that the rp is up and running again. The herd has currently been traveling for two days and the setting is a little before sunset, so any who want to jump in have at it. C8
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by .kestral » Tue Jun 26, 2012 11:28 pm
Having serious issues viewing dark colours at the moment. May delay replys to pms. Sorry.
The Leopard Pups
Grey, Black and White. The world revolves and we go with it. Twisting in this everlasting monotony, eyes of green and gold, watching and waiting for our chance, our time. Cytor, Liliana, Serenade, Bayonet, the Prankster, the sweet one, the mother and the lost soul. There birth was a lost event, one in a million, two wandering souls met in the shadows, and these four were created. There pups are the stuff of legend, one lost there sight, one lost there path, one lost there love and the other? The other lost his family, everyone they cared about. He lost his family.
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by Teeze » Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:09 pm
May I ask what was wrong with my form? I'm thinking it was because I made her a pet without asking first, but I would like to know if it was something else.here it is:
Teeze wrote:
Goennec Pen #: 8
Name: Paisley
Height: 2’2”
Age: 12 years
Rank: Domestic Soldier (Pet)
Why do you want this Goennec?:
She is very lovely and I think her colors and markings are great; she is simple but not bland and I love the way the bows compliment her.
How would you use this character?:
I would draw her, include her in my stories about my herd, and add her to my character thread.
Define your Goennec:
Goennec in a Sentence: Paisley is a faithful Goennec who dreams big but has simple desires.
Likes: Eating clovers and berries; watching butterflies; running around with the other animals on the farm; watching her humans tend the gardens; being petted, and being visited by the wild Goennecs in the area.
Dislikes: The turkeys, chickens, and geese.
Personality: Paisley can often be seen playing with the sheep, goats, ponies, and other Goennecs that live on and near the farm that she calls home. Friendly and loyal, she is always eager to make new friends. Her humans allow her to roam freely around the property and even let her sleep in the house although she prefers to be outdoors and will frequently stay outside if the weather is nice. Paisley often wonders what her life would be like if she didn’t live on the farm and takes every opportunity she can to hear stories from the wild Goennecs that come and graze near the edge of the meadow. But despite her curiosity and the other Goennecs’ invitations, she makes a point not to stray outside the outer fences having made the decision long ago to cherish her home, humans, friends, and family. Her humans will sometimes enter Paisley in the animal shows at the local fair; she enjoys it very much and even won a blue ribbon once, but she likes the competition more than the prizes and takes the time to talk to the other animals on the fairgrounds about the lives they lead. During planting and harvesting times she will follow her humans around to watch them tend to the plants and snatch up any fruits or berries that miss the baskets. In the winter she spends most of her time indoors where she can keep warm, but she does enjoy playing in the snow and helping the human kids make snowmen or wage snowball fights by rolling up little balls of snow for them or throwing up snow with her hooves. She also loves it when the kids make snow forts and igloos and she can play in. She watches out for her humans’ kids making sure that no harm comes to them, she’ll even fight off stray dogs who show some aggression toward them. She longs to have kids of her own though and thinks regularly about what they might be like.
I would like to own 1 of every pet; no more, no less.
I am also Teeze on Aywas (ID# 47799) and ToyHou.se
I am GreywaterAlley on Flight Rising (No space in my username)

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by Teeze » Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:54 am
Yes, I know, but no one won that Goennec which means that both forms had something wrong with them.
I would like to own 1 of every pet; no more, no less.
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by Tammanae » Wed Jul 04, 2012 6:28 am
That fact that you decided to make her a pet is really of no consequence and does not need permission, as it is really simply another status for them. As long as it is a credible pet scenario and still fits the standards of the species with twists for domestication, it is more than alright. The problem with this particular pen was that unfortunately neither form was valid, as was the very unfortunate case of so many of the goennecs this round. While I am not the type to think longer = better, and I have been very much a fan of quite a few short forms, these need to be properly constructed and give out a proper character essence. Your form felt more like a plotless short story as opposed to a character description, and unfortunately, it left the character bland and without a solid foothold so to speak. LM's form was unfortunately disqualified due to the fact that she did give it a condition that needed permission due to the massive influx of disabling or negative conditions given for the sake of being given to goennecs lately. When turned to yours, however, neither of us felt like the character could be properly grasped.
As a note, there was a time skip on the rp and the herd is currently moving out of the valley and is reaching the mountains. I know that people were being very active when there was the harems being chosen situation, but please remember that the Siv has not even started yet, so if nobody responds there may not be a Siv for babies to be born. ;3
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