Hello everyone!
I've managed to finish my written portion of the form for the little mystery egg, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to help me out by offering feedback- I'm not sure how comfortable I am with the shorter stories, and I'm afraid it feels rushed. You can find my form here. I would really appreciate any help with it. Thanks y'all!
And I concur with everyone about the colors of the egg- so pretty and bright. I just know the runie hiding inside will be absolutely gorgeous (or handsome, hehe) <3