So, I'm writing a fanfiction on undertale and the characters journey. I'm just gonna drop this here for you guys to read and stuff because, yknow, it's fanfiction and I though you might enjoy it. Dialog for some characters won't be precise. It's kinda hard to go back and forth looking for the exact dialoge..
. wrote:---U N D E R T A L E---
Falling. They were falling. Falling down a hole. Where exactly? Well, the monster world.
Then suddenly, a muffled thump sounded out as they finally hit the ground on a soft bed of yellow flowers. They laid there on their back for a few moments before slowly getting up. Memories of what had happened started flowing through their head as they clutched it with both hands, pain spreading throughout their temples. They had came up here to disappear for awhile, but ended up tripping and falling. They looked up, seeing the faint light of the sky above where they had once been.
Gathering enough courage, they started walking down a path that lay infront of them, walking into an elegant designed doorway. Once they entered, they saw a small yellow flower, smiling before them. They hesitantly made their way towards it, the smile sending some shivers down their spine.
"Howdy! I'm Flowey, Flowey the Flower! You look new to the underground, so let me teach you everything you need to know!"
With that, a heart appeared before them, moving in sync with their chest for everything they did.
"See that? That's your soul, the very culmination of your being! You start off weak, but once you get enough lvl, you'll grow stronger!
What does lvl stand for? Why love of course! Down here, love is shared through little white.. 'friendly-ness pellets. Here, I'll share some of mine with you."
With that, the flower winked, and some of those small 'friendly-ness pellets' being sent at them.
They quickly dodged, an annoyed look on the flower's face.
"Hey buddy, you missed them. Let's try again." With that, more of the pellets where sent at them, and they dodged. The flower's face then became completely intwined with anger. "What are you, brain dead?!?!??? RUN INTO THE BULLETS--- friendly-ness pellets" For the final time, the flower sent the pellets at them, and they narrowly missed them.
The flowers face then became twisted with anger and what seemed to be insanity.
"Y O U K N O W W H A T S G O I N G O N H E R E , D O N T Y O U? Y O U J U S T W A N T E D T O S E E M E S U F F E R. N O W I T ' S Y O U R T U R N T O S U F F E R. D I E" the flower let out a cackle, and the white bullets surrounded them, slowly closing in. Then, the flowers face turned confused, then shocked, and went flying as he was hit by a fireball. A tall, white goat-like creature came quickly, worried spread across their face. "Oh my poor child, being tortured by a flower. I am Toriel, caretaker of these ruins. Could you please tell me your name?"
They didn't say anything for a few seconds, but then responded. "M-my name is
i stopped there mainly because I have no idea what a name, and I'm not using frisk yet as I'm trying to stay true to the storyline.